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The main character is absolutely worthless taking way too long to develop anything it’s just I mean it’s hard to stomach about it
I am really trying here when it comes to reading this however it is rough. Grammer wise I see words that should have been used and instead have others in its place. The story telling in the first few chapters have me at a lost at what is going on. these two elements are why I rather not trouble myself with continuing. Sorry. I do like the fact it was a completed novel though. This was the reason I started it.
just started reading 2 days ago and I must say it's a great novel. it took a couple of chapters to get used to the name. from trying to make money to world domination I didn't see coming. Anyway when is the second book coming to webnovel
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Mc name is too feminine to take this book serious. I can't even make it pass five chapters without thinking I'm reading one of those ceo presidents fall in love novels.
One of the few novels I would like to recommend to people who spend their time read and has enough time or money to read this is the best so far.
Grammar isn't the best. The author tells far more than he shows (Well, what can I expect from webnovel.com). Has plot progression, sure, but that's not what I came here for. I came here for a story to enjoy where I can read at my own pace and visualize my stuff, not to have an LO Project placed in front of me. Info-dumps here and there. Pretty much your standard story here other than the commonly-occurring grammatical errors.
just started it will see in the future what it goes .....,,,...,..,...........,............,........,,..,.,.,,,...........,.,,..........................
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I think this book has alot of potential and is rather interesting one complaint though that drags all aspects of the novel down is the translation quality it isn't terrible but enough to pull or keep you from any real immersion. This is one of my very few reviews and I posted this one in hope that the author can address this because I am optimistic about this novel
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the story is amazing pls dont stop thi novel midway I want to read this story till end hdhrhuuifjfjjjjfufjdjrjhhhhhheheyyhdhdhdhdhehdhdhudhdhe
Nice story, go to save my Reading List. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Honestly I love the novel it's very technical you know as expected but with a mix of action (which it's amazing really try it out yourself) it's engaging, a little funny with the system and the MC but a lot of words that I just so sci-fi lol and I love it. I commented a little bit here and there but Long story, short, I recommend this amazing work of a novel and show some love for the author. Everyone got to eat you know, just saying.
I really like to read this story. I really like the stories where mc makes progress. I don't know why it got so less reviews but i hope that author would continue to update and even increase the daily uploads! !!!
Absolutely not my cup of tea. The whole idea of the characters either makes me want to puke (MC personality) or would give me anxiety attacks (System Personality).
Not worth the time. The story is expositive, info-dump quality, "There are bajillion continents, the bajillions continents have these countries here that I will give you the names, and they are like that and blahblah." Still wondering up to this date what an "Ais" is.
A very interesting and unique story. The worldbuilding is very detailed and well thought-out. Although the first chapter suffers slightly from info dumps, the background information is interesting enough not to bore me, which says a lot for a reader that doesn't usually venture into sci-fi :) Keep up the great work!
Absolutely loved the way the story began! Intriguing, filled with useful information and amazing worldbuilding 😍 I also liked how the continents that the author created resemble earth in different stages. The Alpha Continent is like a futuristic Earth, where there is a lot of advanced tech and AIs controlling everything and people living in smart houses (Elysium style). The Beta continent is more like the current earth I'd say. And the Thango continent is kind of how the Earth was during the 80'-90'... or in different stages in the past (Wild Wild West or even further back, with lawless gangs and underworld organizations). Meanwhile, the Kehlog continent is like the tundra or the Antarctica. Maybe all this it was just in my imagination but I really got that feeling from the description. Either way, I find this story a smart and 'question rising' kind of novel. Definitely recommend it! Keep up the good work author! 🥰
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So, I enjoyed the way you introduced the world. I kinda felt like I was on a rocketship, overlooking the different worlds. In a way it was really cool I felt like a kid for a second but then another part of me got lost at certain places. I'm used to the cry of pain being 'Ah!' not 'Ha!' that confused me for a second. Then I saw you made a happy sound 'Ah!'... as I said that confused me. Then I noticed an error in continent and that's fine as it easily can be fixed. Then I wanted the story to go and not drag on but overall it's a good story. Looking forward to more.
A masterpiece if I do say so myself, though there are many mistakes in the writing but that is a given for every novel. the author's ability to give an abundant of information without making it sound dull makes up for the mistakes too. The author provides a good amount of details about the world background and the character's actions during a scene so readers can have a grasp of how the characters feel. Personally, I would strongly recommend this if you are looking for something different from those typical leveling up novels you see on here.
I think this book has a lot of potential to be really good. The style is really unique and I love it to be honest. I am really excited to see where this book goes and I can't wait to read more.
So far, this book is weird in the most enjoyable way imaginable. I love how the very beginning feels like this cohesive, fast-paced onslaught of absurd events - just pausing to let me catch my breath and then, on we go, something happens. Rather original, this tale mixes the bizarre with the flashy and cool stuff, and it kept me very entertained. Added to my library. By the way, the worldbuilding and the descriptions of infrastructure in the very beginning - great stuff. I love it when an author thinks of the consequences of worldbuilding.
Spoiler de révélation The main character is absolutely worthless taking way too long to develop anything it’s just I mean it’s hard to stomach about it
I am really trying here when it comes to reading this however it is rough. Grammer wise I see words that should have been used and instead have others in its place. The story telling in the first few chapters have me at a lost at what is going on. these two elements are why I rather not trouble myself with continuing. Sorry. I do like the fact it was a completed novel though. This was the reason I started it.
just started reading 2 days ago and I must say it's a great novel. it took a couple of chapters to get used to the name. from trying to make money to world domination I didn't see coming. Anyway when is the second book coming to webnovel
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Mc name is too feminine to take this book serious. I can't even make it pass five chapters without thinking I'm reading one of those ceo presidents fall in love novels.
One of the few novels I would like to recommend to people who spend their time read and has enough time or money to read this is the best so far.
Grammar isn't the best. The author tells far more than he shows (Well, what can I expect from webnovel.com). Has plot progression, sure, but that's not what I came here for. I came here for a story to enjoy where I can read at my own pace and visualize my stuff, not to have an LO Project placed in front of me. Info-dumps here and there. Pretty much your standard story here other than the commonly-occurring grammatical errors.
just started it will see in the future what it goes .....,,,...,..,...........,............,........,,..,.,.,,,...........,.,,..........................
Spoiler de révélation I think this book has alot of potential and is rather interesting one complaint though that drags all aspects of the novel down is the translation quality it isn't terrible but enough to pull or keep you from any real immersion. This is one of my very few reviews and I posted this one in hope that the author can address this because I am optimistic about this novel
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the story is amazing pls dont stop thi novel midway I want to read this story till end hdhrhuuifjfjjjjfufjdjrjhhhhhheheyyhdhdhdhdhehdhdhudhdhe
Nice story, go to save my Reading List. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
binary boss... gaihgeyowhwuiwggw sgsikwgsu in gwusiehe sghwuejejhsjiieij sgsfwfjw wheievve ejeiejhebe sgsiwokwhgwhiw w wehsiiehehvw wjehe ebeeje .
Honestly I love the novel it's very technical you know as expected but with a mix of action (which it's amazing really try it out yourself) it's engaging, a little funny with the system and the MC but a lot of words that I just so sci-fi lol and I love it. I commented a little bit here and there but Long story, short, I recommend this amazing work of a novel and show some love for the author. Everyone got to eat you know, just saying.
I really like to read this story. I really like the stories where mc makes progress. I don't know why it got so less reviews but i hope that author would continue to update and even increase the daily uploads! !!!
Absolutely not my cup of tea. The whole idea of the characters either makes me want to puke (MC personality) or would give me anxiety attacks (System Personality).
Not worth the time. The story is expositive, info-dump quality, "There are bajillion continents, the bajillions continents have these countries here that I will give you the names, and they are like that and blahblah." Still wondering up to this date what an "Ais" is.
A very interesting and unique story. The worldbuilding is very detailed and well thought-out. Although the first chapter suffers slightly from info dumps, the background information is interesting enough not to bore me, which says a lot for a reader that doesn't usually venture into sci-fi :) Keep up the great work!
Absolutely loved the way the story began! Intriguing, filled with useful information and amazing worldbuilding 😍 I also liked how the continents that the author created resemble earth in different stages. The Alpha Continent is like a futuristic Earth, where there is a lot of advanced tech and AIs controlling everything and people living in smart houses (Elysium style). The Beta continent is more like the current earth I'd say. And the Thango continent is kind of how the Earth was during the 80'-90'... or in different stages in the past (Wild Wild West or even further back, with lawless gangs and underworld organizations). Meanwhile, the Kehlog continent is like the tundra or the Antarctica. Maybe all this it was just in my imagination but I really got that feeling from the description. Either way, I find this story a smart and 'question rising' kind of novel. Definitely recommend it! Keep up the good work author! 🥰
Spoiler de révélation So, I enjoyed the way you introduced the world. I kinda felt like I was on a rocketship, overlooking the different worlds. In a way it was really cool I felt like a kid for a second but then another part of me got lost at certain places. I'm used to the cry of pain being 'Ah!' not 'Ha!' that confused me for a second. Then I saw you made a happy sound 'Ah!'... as I said that confused me. Then I noticed an error in continent and that's fine as it easily can be fixed. Then I wanted the story to go and not drag on but overall it's a good story. Looking forward to more.
A masterpiece if I do say so myself, though there are many mistakes in the writing but that is a given for every novel. the author's ability to give an abundant of information without making it sound dull makes up for the mistakes too. The author provides a good amount of details about the world background and the character's actions during a scene so readers can have a grasp of how the characters feel. Personally, I would strongly recommend this if you are looking for something different from those typical leveling up novels you see on here.
I think this book has a lot of potential to be really good. The style is really unique and I love it to be honest. I am really excited to see where this book goes and I can't wait to read more.
So far, this book is weird in the most enjoyable way imaginable. I love how the very beginning feels like this cohesive, fast-paced onslaught of absurd events - just pausing to let me catch my breath and then, on we go, something happens. Rather original, this tale mixes the bizarre with the flashy and cool stuff, and it kept me very entertained. Added to my library. By the way, the worldbuilding and the descriptions of infrastructure in the very beginning - great stuff. I love it when an author thinks of the consequences of worldbuilding.
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