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Thanks to Marvel's production, Scandinavian mythology is experiencing a real renaissance recently. The figure of Thor, the god of thunder, who is worthy to pick up the hammer of Mjölnir, appeared in comics a long time ago, in the early 1960s (BTW great books). Together with Thor, the comics and films adapted the rest of the Scandinavian pantheon, led by Odin and Loki. Marvel draws handfuls from Nordic beliefs, often simplifying them and adapting them to modern plot patterns, but the world of Asgard is built skillfully and consistently. The Scandinavian mythology is now reached by many authors and their books are very popular. So it is a well-chosen topic.
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WOW!!! Great! No...!!! Magnificent!!! A splendidly started story. From the very beginning, you are drawn in the nicely-created world, and you want more... so dear Author, roll up your sleeves and sit at the keyboard... We want more!!!!
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A beautifully written story! Only three chapters so far, but I'm sure it'll be a hit! You start reading it, and you don't even know when you've read to the end. This is a measure of good literature. Excellent work, Author! Just one thing... I was wondering how much time the author spent on reaserch.
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The first chapter is awesome! Well written narrative and description of Loki and it's only the first chapter and I hope the author would update more chapters and I am waiting for what would happen. Good job and keep up on writing! ^_^
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Even with a single chapter, this chapter starts off very strong. I liked how the dialogues in the story, doesn't feel forced at all. I am already in love with the writing style, and the world building. I am looking forward to how you will use Norse mythology with the given context. And I am lookin forward to what it has stored for me! Keep up the good work!
Just one chapter and it’s this good, bravo. Keep up with the good work I’ll highly recommend this book so keep giving us more interesting chapters.
Author, how many books and information did you study to know all of these details?!!!?!?! I love it! I love loki! *cough* Writing Quality- Very intriguing. It is as smooth as a stream of water~ Stability of updates- 5!!!! The author posted his first chapter for now so yeah Character design- PERFECT SCORE! World background- It is still chapter 1 so ill give it a 5 kudos for the author!
Only one chapter has been released, the writing quality is amazing and the description of Loki's new body is great. Few parts were so good that I could imagine the scene in my mind. Looking forward for more amazing chapters.
There's only one chapter out so far, so there isn't too much I can say as to a review. What I can say, however, is that this is a very promising start. The lore was brilliantly told through contextually appropriate, moderate exposition, The writing is clear and easy to read, and the premise is intriguing. A minor gripe, and it's bound to happen given this platform, but I did notice some grammatical errors along with poorly chosen word choices. Nothing extensive, but moderate editing would really polish this gem. I've bookmarked this Novel, so clearly I think it has major potential. I look forward to reading more.
Review at chap 4 : A good start, not sure what to say I usualy don t review a book before chapter 50 to 100, first time trying a book that just started ^^ The writing quality is great tho. And the mc is interesting. Can t say much for the world background and the story dev for now so 5 by default.
Thanks to Marvel's production, Scandinavian mythology is experiencing a real renaissance recently. The figure of Thor, the god of thunder, who is worthy to pick up the hammer of Mjölnir, appeared in comics a long time ago, in the early 1960s (BTW great books). Together with Thor, the comics and films adapted the rest of the Scandinavian pantheon, led by Odin and Loki. Marvel draws handfuls from Nordic beliefs, often simplifying them and adapting them to modern plot patterns, but the world of Asgard is built skillfully and consistently. The Scandinavian mythology is now reached by many authors and their books are very popular. So it is a well-chosen topic.
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WOW!!! Great! No...!!! Magnificent!!! A splendidly started story. From the very beginning, you are drawn in the nicely-created world, and you want more... so dear Author, roll up your sleeves and sit at the keyboard... We want more!!!!
Spoiler de révélation A beautifully written story! Only three chapters so far, but I'm sure it'll be a hit! You start reading it, and you don't even know when you've read to the end. This is a measure of good literature. Excellent work, Author! Just one thing... I was wondering how much time the author spent on reaserch.
Spoiler de révélation The first chapter is awesome! Well written narrative and description of Loki and it's only the first chapter and I hope the author would update more chapters and I am waiting for what would happen. Good job and keep up on writing! ^_^
Spoiler de révélation Even with a single chapter, this chapter starts off very strong. I liked how the dialogues in the story, doesn't feel forced at all. I am already in love with the writing style, and the world building. I am looking forward to how you will use Norse mythology with the given context. And I am lookin forward to what it has stored for me! Keep up the good work!
Just one chapter and it’s this good, bravo. Keep up with the good work I’ll highly recommend this book so keep giving us more interesting chapters.
Author, how many books and information did you study to know all of these details?!!!?!?! I love it! I love loki! *cough* Writing Quality- Very intriguing. It is as smooth as a stream of water~ Stability of updates- 5!!!! The author posted his first chapter for now so yeah Character design- PERFECT SCORE! World background- It is still chapter 1 so ill give it a 5 kudos for the author!
Only one chapter has been released, the writing quality is amazing and the description of Loki's new body is great. Few parts were so good that I could imagine the scene in my mind. Looking forward for more amazing chapters.
There's only one chapter out so far, so there isn't too much I can say as to a review. What I can say, however, is that this is a very promising start. The lore was brilliantly told through contextually appropriate, moderate exposition, The writing is clear and easy to read, and the premise is intriguing. A minor gripe, and it's bound to happen given this platform, but I did notice some grammatical errors along with poorly chosen word choices. Nothing extensive, but moderate editing would really polish this gem. I've bookmarked this Novel, so clearly I think it has major potential. I look forward to reading more.
Review at chap 4 : A good start, not sure what to say I usualy don t review a book before chapter 50 to 100, first time trying a book that just started ^^ The writing quality is great tho. And the mc is interesting. Can t say much for the world background and the story dev for now so 5 by default.