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This not dropped right? Author-samaaaaaa stop being lazy and start writing again we need more chapterssssss we need you author-samaaaaaaa help usssssss
Nice novel 10/10 ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Read all the chapters untill now. And I can definitely say that it is the best amagami ss fanfic u can get in webnovel. Also,the concept of the system and the skill board is proper and not messy at all . The Mc also knows what to do and I like how the author sometimes shows us the pov of other heroines
I'm a simple man. I see the cover of the book is one of my favorite characters well auto 5 star. I'm still going to read it though........
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the fic was pretty good until the author made the complete amateur mistake of forcing the plot to make mc have character development. he could use many way to help mc character growth but because of lack of creative he force a random character bear grudge.
Very good, funny and interesting........................................................ Kawai, kawawi, kirei, Kawai sugiru..............
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Okay lets just give this story 5 star. Why? Maybe bacause the uncommon concept well not that rare but you got what i mean. And umm i going to continue to read it, ijust to tell some bs in here hehe
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Nice, I hope this doesn't get dropped ..,,,...... ..... ..... .... ....... ........... ....... ... ...
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it would be nice if there are other rom coms that isn't often showed in fanfics well dont worry its okay if it might put pressure to you im just suggesting it
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L or what have I seen so far I like it I hope it continues like this there are not many stories of aragami I just hope you do not quit or pause greetings author I hope you continue with the story
This review was made on all of the previous works of Charlottes that I have read. This review will be left here as a reference for future readers. This was my initial reaction when I found this: "Oh, another work by Charlottes, a pity he never ends them." And Character Designs is one because, being honest, I haven't liked a SINGLE character that has passed by Charlottes hands, even those that are not OG character of his.
I know what your getting with him not forgetting his past family.....but....the dude first of all treats it like an anime world so he does not care as much and his attitudes to how girls are treated are absoulute dogsh*t and is recipe of somebody that objectifys a woman like thinking you can hook up people that probably have no other ties just because you want to and can is one of the most unintentionally disgusting things I have ever heard this week.
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I truly, truly didn't want to do this. But I have come to believe the author may have abandoned this website or stopped writing for good. Of course, something else may have happened, like he got sick or hurt, in that case, I wish you good luck on whatever you are passing through right now. In any case, I loved where this novel was going, however, I guess this will remain a dream. Its a nice read if you wish to just pass a few minutes of your life doing something, however, its better to avoid it unless you wish to pain yourself with waiting for something that will likely never return
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Spoiler de révélation This not dropped right? Author-samaaaaaa stop being lazy and start writing again we need more chapterssssss we need you author-samaaaaaaa help usssssss
Nice novel 10/10 ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Read all the chapters untill now. And I can definitely say that it is the best amagami ss fanfic u can get in webnovel. Also,the concept of the system and the skill board is proper and not messy at all . The Mc also knows what to do and I like how the author sometimes shows us the pov of other heroines
I'm a simple man. I see the cover of the book is one of my favorite characters well auto 5 star. I'm still going to read it though........
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Very nice (✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)
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the fic was pretty good until the author made the complete amateur mistake of forcing the plot to make mc have character development. he could use many way to help mc character growth but because of lack of creative he force a random character bear grudge.
Very good, funny and interesting........................................................ Kawai, kawawi, kirei, Kawai sugiru..............
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Okay lets just give this story 5 star. Why? Maybe bacause the uncommon concept well not that rare but you got what i mean. And umm i going to continue to read it, ijust to tell some bs in here hehe
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Xuất sắc.................,,.....,.......................,,.....,.................,.................,.................,........................,.....................................,,.....,.................,.................,.................,........................,.............................................,.................,.................,........................,...............................
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Nice, I hope this doesn't get dropped ..,,,...... ..... ..... .... ....... ........... ....... ... ...
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it would be nice if there are other rom coms that isn't often showed in fanfics well dont worry its okay if it might put pressure to you im just suggesting it
Intersting!!! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
L or what have I seen so far I like it I hope it continues like this there are not many stories of aragami I just hope you do not quit or pause greetings author I hope you continue with the story
This review was made on all of the previous works of Charlottes that I have read. This review will be left here as a reference for future readers. This was my initial reaction when I found this: "Oh, another work by Charlottes, a pity he never ends them." And Character Designs is one because, being honest, I haven't liked a SINGLE character that has passed by Charlottes hands, even those that are not OG character of his.
I know what your getting with him not forgetting his past family.....but....the dude first of all treats it like an anime world so he does not care as much and his attitudes to how girls are treated are absoulute dogsh*t and is recipe of somebody that objectifys a woman like thinking you can hook up people that probably have no other ties just because you want to and can is one of the most unintentionally disgusting things I have ever heard this week.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐Awesome fanfic⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐ ⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐ ⭐⭐✨✨✨✨✨✨⭐⭐ ⭐⭐✨✨✨✨✨✨⭐⭐ ⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐ ⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I truly, truly didn't want to do this. But I have come to believe the author may have abandoned this website or stopped writing for good. Of course, something else may have happened, like he got sick or hurt, in that case, I wish you good luck on whatever you are passing through right now. In any case, I loved where this novel was going, however, I guess this will remain a dream. Its a nice read if you wish to just pass a few minutes of your life doing something, however, its better to avoid it unless you wish to pain yourself with waiting for something that will likely never return