HARRY POTTER: ASCENSION BOOK 1

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Kono_Timoda

For those that are scared that thier is no synopsis: Lily, harry potter's mother, gets in contact with Kryptonian tech and gives harry Kryptonian DNA, changing his personality and changing his course in life. It seems like it's a DC + Harry potter verse. The first chapter is a prologue and is long but it sets the pace for the story. Harry's POV starts in chapter 2 with a 10 year overview and time skip. Th author's writing style holds my interest well and balances world building with character development really well. And I have not been able to spot any errors so 👍👍 (As of chapter 2 🙃) I feel as if this is a hidden gem in the making which can be on par with "meta essence". Good job author and I like the daily updates and can't wait for more.😃

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Solrac

the story is really good and the writing quality is good but there is places in the writing that are hard to read or that is like there is paragraphs that are missing

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JayFireblood

Written at chapter 7. So far, this has been a great read, but it has a few problems. Which are. 1. It's hard to tell if there has been a change in the scene. 2. You can't tell if there has been a timeskip. 3. There's not much on world building making it hard to truly dive into the story. Other than that, I would highly recommend this story.

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TROUXA

The story is incomplete with a lot of information being taken from chapters as well as scenes +18 Other than that the story is great. If you liked it read in archive of our own to see the complete novel

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darknightofAnime

Sauce for the wonder woman cover pic please.

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Torrinth

Just search the title to get the whole story.

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why_me_4761

this is one of the best books I've ever read

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DaoistF21Iop

it is good but has been changed much by introducing other elements in hp novel.

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Tony_Pecoraro

This story is a very good and a new take on Harry Potter.

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sean_robbins

so i read a little ways in and i like it! however things start getting cut out and transitions are really bad! apparently u can find the full not cut somewhere else but i can't seem to find it! if anyone can provide a link i'd appreciate it!

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Mister_Robot

Webnovel seriously needs to upgrade the rating system. One star is too much for a novel like this

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Mockingbird_2179

The story is good but here are the problems that I have with this story.× After 4 chapters all the smuts been removed. × It needs a note for the scene changes. It is a jarring experience to go from training and making plans to having a different conversation with someone else.

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Grimravensrage

I needed text to fill my rating But otherwise this is a great book

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Legendary_Gear5

Clones pop up at chapter 15.

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AEGIR123

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TimEaterOfWorlds

An intriguing combination of worlds that leaves a lot of room for future development. The book has great interactions between characters, as well as a good pace. However it has one large problem that severely harms the reading experience, there are numerous abrupt scene changes and random dialogues in each chapter. This makes it hard to tell the chronological order of many events

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Reece_Soames

love the start the characters are amazing the added lore and details are great

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Well_In_a_Frog

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