Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology

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vinayak_p_mohan

it's gud to know an Indian based novel in this app......I hope to see more chapters of this novel and also waiting for an interesting plot....

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107

Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new, the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of Novel

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knight_rider_2000

brother it's a very good novel just upload frequently and beware of copyright issue as we have recently seen what happened when "the rise of Australia" (banned on web novel) when it became popular. show us a good time for the first time I have seen a proper edited novel on India. And you can gather information and plot building aspects from the above mentioned novel and the tyrant of steel, it's a good novel. Thank you for giving a new start to Indian rise novels.

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DaoistpirqtQ

I am amazed and excited upon the fact that someone is willing to write an Indian history and that too by being Transmigrated as one of the heirs of the Great Vijaya Nagara Empire I hope you will not abandon this

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107

Good story idea👍👍. I hope you will make the king more ruthless 👹👹to enemies and majestic as it is a medivial type of period and do not make it democratic only in The 17 the century. Also, try to let Mc participate in wars to develop a little warrior 🗡️🗡️personality also not only scholarly 👨‍🏫👨‍🏫type. Also in the story Mc is a king not a civil servant so he should not feel embarrassing when his subjects bow to him. Being overly kind to subjects will make them easily make selfish arguments and rebellion for power

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TREEHOUSE

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Chirashu_Jindal

Bro why did mc ban Gurukuls ? Isn't Vijaynagar a Hindu empire ? In his own empire, the mc cannot openly preach Hinduism. He had to stop other educational institution like churches etc to stops birth of foreign ideas and conversion but why gurukuls . And there is no proper explanation of education system. And there is no equality or secularism in 16 th century so that you have to do everything equal for Muslims also. Gurukuls were important parts of Hindu culture and you shut them down . I thing you are just colonising India like British only introducing foreign ideas. Now you will also start introducing ing Muslims in admiration also . Many still are not loyal to India in today's time and you are expecting them to be loyal in that time. Plz restart the gurukuls and place on restrictions on communities n harmful for empire. You don't have to worry over equality . You are not in peaceful timewhere you have to to introduce equal policies for all people. You are the king of an empire who have to expand empire either by force or peace and expel all anti Hindu people. Not please them on terms of equality like today's times . If the mcs cannot tolerate bloodshed give the control to other king and only act as a minister. In that time when Muslims rulers commit atrocities on non Muslims, you cannot win over people by peaceful means, mercy and without bloodshed. You have to be cruel to spill innocent blood also. Plz reply

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Guardian_Of_Nexus

Just because you dare to write about ancient India. Here my five Star Review.No more words need....As suggestions can be given in chapter paragraphs too.Keep it up author 👍🐱

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107

Hey good story idea 👌.but there are some problems . You are just straight introducing reforms in every ch .Story is about india not Vijaynagar empire . You start a thing in a ch but do not show the consequences it has and there is no continuity in it . The king is harming the interests of the nobles and the nobles do not do anything and just sit. If it was the in reality , 😑 he would have been assassinated🗡️ in 2 months. Also the truth is that an empire is not formed by fairness and do not talk about equality in 17th century. And even in today's era there is no equality. On one side the British and Mughals are aggressively transforming Hindus and you want to give fairness to all Muslims(no grudge) .I am not talking about just killing people of other religions .Reforms should be slowly applied and not suddenly. He is just a newly crowned king and does not have enough prestige. Medicinal kingdoms do not work on justice but ⚔️.

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Gaurav_Singapore

if you are willing to upload frequently I will be your strong supporter author 🙏

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Mithun_ReddyGaru

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gaurav_Kumar_1424

A good attempt at novel with Indian history. It leaves much to be desired( beware I am comparing with some of the very good novels on this app) but none the less an entertaining one. I would have loved it more if it was more detailed with clear show of hardship rather then a smooth sailing in start. Anyways good luck for your novel I appreciate the effort of more Indian content.

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SolaceViolet

I think I forgot to leave a review previously. Here is the 5 stars

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107

You should also make a spy network which is solely in control of king as there are many traitors or betrayers in the kingdom. In many cases, arms generals or nephews seize power and make the king a puppet ruler line fromn1542 to 1565 Rama raya made Sadasivam raya (the legal ruler) puppet ruler. In Battle of Talikota, which had seemed an easy victory for the large Vijayanagar army, instead became a disaster as two Muslim commanders (Gilani brothers) of the Vijayanagara army betrayed and switched sides and turned their loyalty to the united Sultanates during critical point of battle.

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RobloxPlayer101

i smell the indian nationalism…. probably more than any cn novel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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SuryaputraKarna

A good novel, although it has some plot holes and some mistakes it is overall a noice novel. I guess i am a bit bias cause it is a novel on ancient Bharat

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DemonVenerable_12

I'm kind of disappointed; I mean I'm not saying that the idea is bad but it feels the story is unrealistic for the most part and the interaction between characters is just straight out weird with lots of unfamiliar terms at that point time furthermore it feels rushed and those interviews at the start was awkward- I think you should pay more attention to details and making it more realistic and engaging and that is clearly lacking. It'd be better to showcase problems of caste system and how to solve these first then go ahead with military part while also taking care of nobles which are more of a tumor. I've read another Indian novel- (India that could be by Maddymudda) So I had great expectations! Nice try to be honest much appreciated as I too hail from the south so it's quite fascinating to read this novel which has great potential, I would really like it if you could attempt a rewrite or something to attract more audience.

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107

Good story author. Just a little action missing. You should take some ideas from story ‘Peace Online- India’ for warfare and tactics. And how a king should command .

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Josh_Richie

I am Writing this review at chapter 162. I'm not Asian but African, West African to be precise and I could not help the tear that formed in my eyes when reading this. I so much love my country and heritage, but Colonization wiped out everything there is to know about us. It is even to the Extent that we see our original Gods as Demons and fervently Worship the Christian God. It is appalling and disgusting in and of itself. If I could find information about our past, I too would have loved to Write something like this, Hence my immense appreciation for this book.