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The concept is interesting and i Would love more of the story XoxooxxxoxooxoxoppxpppxpxxppccpcccppcpcøudlfløhæjuduædyøuædjzøhzøøhzlhzlhlgzøhøhdhøshlsmggmGmmhzmhMhsmhdhmdhmhmdmymtmysmywylwlgsmgsmhjjdmjdjmdmhdhmjmj
only one negative i got. slow updates. everything else is awesome, off the charts, 5 star. I like the sources of inspiration, the mix of elf/dwarf mytho with star wars. main characters stance, morality, ingenuity. hopefully you keep this story going, a pa-treon site should help motivate you to speed up updates, id pay.
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Buen capitulo e, espero que lo sigas continuando, todo el mundo caerá ante tus pies. Una pregunta iras a al planeta de anakin para terraformarla?
I enjoy the nature side of the force, it could be that the MC is young and we only have 21 chapters so far, but i would really like to see him learn more about tech and plants himself instead of just relying on his subjects. Not sure about all the animals in SW but him having familiars/mounts either that exist or him creating a plant based familiar besides the trees. I think it would also be great if he conqures all the unexplored side of the galaxy so he can stay away from Palpatine and the Jedi until he is ready.
sou brasileiro e fiquei muito interessado em sua historia, por isso adicionei ela na minha biblioteca para ler quando tiver mais capítulos
Great story. I like it very much. I like the idea, the writing and the pace of the story and I hope you keep posting it. I recommend reading it.
Its a good book but not what i was expecting but partially my fault for hyping the book up there was a lot of thing the author could have done to make the book more enticing but Maybe thats just my imagination going wild at least in my mind he could have went a diffirent route To make a more impactful story.
A great story and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 A great story and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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Author here with the shameless review, no questions need to be asked how I feel about the story. I’m still working on it so Wish ya boy luck along the way. For those wanting to read it, give it a try, if you don’t like it let me know. If you love it let me know, every comment and review helps me get better so thank you.
This is my rating for this book. Please I'm begging you don't drop every other Star wars fanfic on this site has been dropped or has such a slow update it feels as though it is.
Writing quality : 5 Updating stability : 5 Story development : 5 Character deaign : 5 World background : 5 So far i like this novel leep up good work. And i know what kinda ability he can make 😁 and i know where my stones are going now.
Can you ask the Author Faylan of his story "Star Wars: New Fate" since his story is Dropped can you ask him to Adopt his story to yours. Its a great story read it if you have the time😀
The concept is interesting and i Would love more of the story XoxooxxxoxooxoxoppxpppxpxxppccpcccppcpcøudlfløhæjuduædyøuædjzøhzøøhzlhzlhlgzøhøhdhøshlsmggmGmmhzmhMhsmhdhmdhmhmdmymtmysmywylwlgsmgsmhjjdmjdjmdmhdhmjmj
only one negative i got. slow updates. everything else is awesome, off the charts, 5 star. I like the sources of inspiration, the mix of elf/dwarf mytho with star wars. main characters stance, morality, ingenuity. hopefully you keep this story going, a pa-treon site should help motivate you to speed up updates, id pay.
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Buen capitulo e, espero que lo sigas continuando, todo el mundo caerá ante tus pies. Una pregunta iras a al planeta de anakin para terraformarla?
I enjoy the nature side of the force, it could be that the MC is young and we only have 21 chapters so far, but i would really like to see him learn more about tech and plants himself instead of just relying on his subjects. Not sure about all the animals in SW but him having familiars/mounts either that exist or him creating a plant based familiar besides the trees. I think it would also be great if he conqures all the unexplored side of the galaxy so he can stay away from Palpatine and the Jedi until he is ready.
sou brasileiro e fiquei muito interessado em sua historia, por isso adicionei ela na minha biblioteca para ler quando tiver mais capítulos
Great story. I like it very much. I like the idea, the writing and the pace of the story and I hope you keep posting it. I recommend reading it.
Its a good book but not what i was expecting but partially my fault for hyping the book up there was a lot of thing the author could have done to make the book more enticing but Maybe thats just my imagination going wild at least in my mind he could have went a diffirent route To make a more impactful story.
A great story and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 A great story and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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Spoiler de révélation Author here with the shameless review, no questions need to be asked how I feel about the story. I’m still working on it so Wish ya boy luck along the way. For those wanting to read it, give it a try, if you don’t like it let me know. If you love it let me know, every comment and review helps me get better so thank you.
This is my rating for this book. Please I'm begging you don't drop every other Star wars fanfic on this site has been dropped or has such a slow update it feels as though it is.
Writing quality : 5 Updating stability : 5 Story development : 5 Character deaign : 5 World background : 5 So far i like this novel leep up good work. And i know what kinda ability he can make 😁 and i know where my stones are going now.
Can you ask the Author Faylan of his story "Star Wars: New Fate" since his story is Dropped can you ask him to Adopt his story to yours. Its a great story read it if you have the time😀