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The book is a leisure read. I like how it doesn't take itself all too seriously and is quite heavy on the humor, some of the jokes might feel as though they're ridiculous which probably is one good way to stay bemused. The magic in the series is unoriginal save for an interesting addiction as in casualty... which makes for a nice sprinkle of ungenericity. The characters belong in the humorous world... although the prologue is quite not so humorous. It would be great if writer-nim improves the quality of his grammar.
Im excited for the future this story looks like it has alottt of potential , new chapter everyday though i would like some more lines form his mom since her personality was pretty funny
it's quit a good book and all but a lot of side characters chapter and released rate is low come on man at least 7 a weak
wow nice ...yuipjvdagjllnvcxzgjkmvdshkllkjb mifsj mgsjdv ahnxu udjncydij[img=update]
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evrythink is great until author tone it down/nerf,child of destruction who ve been prophecy will bcome a great being who can kill a god turnout to be a defect,it lead to a question does all the sheer out there also a defect? and then come the most clasic arc ,academy ....lol thats it going to the next novel,
Hey Author!! I do like the unoriginal style, incorporating many things to keep the story interesting. The Background is done very well, the character design and development is pretty good. i just felt like there could have been less info dumps and the info is spread evenly explaining as you go. It gets a bit boring reading the info and understanding it. *** I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY AND IT'S THE TYPE I LIKE *** You could have made it a bit better getting to things slowly as you go. it was a good read over all and i found it hard to put down.... there were things that was hard to understand at the beginning such as ()the man who says |FOR BALANCE| ()random people just popping up ___ Every thing i said is just my opinion and you don't have to listen to it if you don't have to. I am not really good at writing reviews.... --- Overall GREAT JOB!!! Hope you SPICE it up in the coming chapters... SEE YA!!!
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This work is simply unputdownable. I enjoyed myself reading in it. I hope you find time to write more stories. ********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************†***†*******†****************************************************************************†***********************************************†************""""""***********************************************************************"""""*********************************************************************************************************†*****†***††***************************************************************************"*****************************†*************************************""""""""""***†***********************************************************†******†**"""""”"""""""********************** This work is simply unputdownable. I enjoyed myself reading in it. I hope you find time to write more stories. *****†*********†**********************************†** Cheers!
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This is a really well done novel, I believe the lore and Worldbuilding of it is absolutely expansive and the only I’d really say as any form of notes is the characters feel a bit cliche, but this doesn’t really distract from the well written plot
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Not the best reads. Story is about a kid born with the will of the universe with the ability to kill gods themselves. MC is op genius in combat and intelligence even at his young age. The story lacks meaningful characters, not a lot of them are developed well, 1 is his FMC nanny and 1 FMC 2 with "a bigger plot". The story starts off with a long prologue of what child of destruction is born and slowly transitions in to a school arc which I found unnecessary. Here, the MC flaunts his power and intelligence. Teachers and directors are mere toys compared to him and 99% of the students are arrogant young masters. So far, the academy arc is just a plot point to stroke his ego and show off his arrogance where there's a bigger plot to play but I can't find myself to go through it to find out.
The novel was good up unto the chapter where he was doing his magic awakening or something like dat, when I sad the chapter name about him maybe being a defect I wanted to drop the novel straight away but I changed my mind, I was gonna say how u gon give him a great background and then he can't awaken, but I also don't like the Character personality l, he hates them calling him a genius and almost gave up on his dream of being a swordsman cus a knight left🤨 but the novel is great Def recommend it
Superb description and a good food for imagining. From the beginning, it felt as though I was watching a movie of titans and gods, with a super cool MC 😎.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
the humor is everything, the storyline the characters development I'm very intrigued by the greek and Egyptian mythology so that's a plus ... waiting patiently for updates
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The story seems intriguing enough to make one continue reading. The flashforward in the beginning sets up an interesting plot to look foward to. It's a good read! Keep up the good work!
Love the development, the MC and the story hope you bring out more[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love greek and egyotian mythology and anything to do with mythical gods. The author did good in describing the characters and their worlds. If you still didnt read, just give it a try!.
A very interesting story line, funny characters, nice development, fast updating too and more to come. I can't wait. (This 140 characters of a thing)
It's me the author. And yes!, i'm shameless enough to give myself five stars. I'm new to writing so i hope you all would support me on this journey. I'm hoping for your review on what you think about the book. Constructive criticisms are allowed too. If you like it, please rate and share too. Also, cut me some slack if you see any typos, i'd do my best to re read the chapters after posting so i can correct any errors. Thanks for joining me on this journey of our Godlayer's Legend.
This is good waiting for more chapters, the writings quality is updated which I mean great and the storyline is more creative. A good novel coming from q good author
The story seems intriguing enough to keep going. The flashforward in the beginning sets up an interesting plot to stay interested. Good work! Keep on going!
The book is a leisure read. I like how it doesn't take itself all too seriously and is quite heavy on the humor, some of the jokes might feel as though they're ridiculous which probably is one good way to stay bemused. The magic in the series is unoriginal save for an interesting addiction as in casualty... which makes for a nice sprinkle of ungenericity. The characters belong in the humorous world... although the prologue is quite not so humorous. It would be great if writer-nim improves the quality of his grammar.
Im excited for the future this story looks like it has alottt of potential , new chapter everyday though i would like some more lines form his mom since her personality was pretty funny
it's quit a good book and all but a lot of side characters chapter and released rate is low come on man at least 7 a weak
wow nice ...yuipjvdagjllnvcxzgjkmvdshkllkjb mifsj mgsjdv ahnxu udjncydij[img=update]
Spoiler de révélation evrythink is great until author tone it down/nerf,child of destruction who ve been prophecy will bcome a great being who can kill a god turnout to be a defect,it lead to a question does all the sheer out there also a defect? and then come the most clasic arc ,academy ....lol thats it going to the next novel,
Hey Author!! I do like the unoriginal style, incorporating many things to keep the story interesting. The Background is done very well, the character design and development is pretty good. i just felt like there could have been less info dumps and the info is spread evenly explaining as you go. It gets a bit boring reading the info and understanding it. *** I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY AND IT'S THE TYPE I LIKE *** You could have made it a bit better getting to things slowly as you go. it was a good read over all and i found it hard to put down.... there were things that was hard to understand at the beginning such as ()the man who says |FOR BALANCE| ()random people just popping up ___ Every thing i said is just my opinion and you don't have to listen to it if you don't have to. I am not really good at writing reviews.... --- Overall GREAT JOB!!! Hope you SPICE it up in the coming chapters... SEE YA!!!
Spoiler de révélation This work is simply unputdownable. I enjoyed myself reading in it. I hope you find time to write more stories. ********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************†***†*******†****************************************************************************†***********************************************†************""""""***********************************************************************"""""*********************************************************************************************************†*****†***††***************************************************************************"*****************************†*************************************""""""""""***†***********************************************************†******†**"""""”"""""""********************** This work is simply unputdownable. I enjoyed myself reading in it. I hope you find time to write more stories. *****†*********†**********************************†** Cheers!
Spoiler de révélation This is a really well done novel, I believe the lore and Worldbuilding of it is absolutely expansive and the only I’d really say as any form of notes is the characters feel a bit cliche, but this doesn’t really distract from the well written plot
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Not the best reads. Story is about a kid born with the will of the universe with the ability to kill gods themselves. MC is op genius in combat and intelligence even at his young age. The story lacks meaningful characters, not a lot of them are developed well, 1 is his FMC nanny and 1 FMC 2 with "a bigger plot". The story starts off with a long prologue of what child of destruction is born and slowly transitions in to a school arc which I found unnecessary. Here, the MC flaunts his power and intelligence. Teachers and directors are mere toys compared to him and 99% of the students are arrogant young masters. So far, the academy arc is just a plot point to stroke his ego and show off his arrogance where there's a bigger plot to play but I can't find myself to go through it to find out.
The novel was good up unto the chapter where he was doing his magic awakening or something like dat, when I sad the chapter name about him maybe being a defect I wanted to drop the novel straight away but I changed my mind, I was gonna say how u gon give him a great background and then he can't awaken, but I also don't like the Character personality l, he hates them calling him a genius and almost gave up on his dream of being a swordsman cus a knight left🤨 but the novel is great Def recommend it
Superb description and a good food for imagining. From the beginning, it felt as though I was watching a movie of titans and gods, with a super cool MC 😎.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
the humor is everything, the storyline the characters development I'm very intrigued by the greek and Egyptian mythology so that's a plus ... waiting patiently for updates
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The story seems intriguing enough to make one continue reading. The flashforward in the beginning sets up an interesting plot to look foward to. It's a good read! Keep up the good work!
Love the development, the MC and the story hope you bring out more[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love greek and egyotian mythology and anything to do with mythical gods. The author did good in describing the characters and their worlds. If you still didnt read, just give it a try!.
A very interesting story line, funny characters, nice development, fast updating too and more to come. I can't wait. (This 140 characters of a thing)
It's me the author. And yes!, i'm shameless enough to give myself five stars. I'm new to writing so i hope you all would support me on this journey. I'm hoping for your review on what you think about the book. Constructive criticisms are allowed too. If you like it, please rate and share too. Also, cut me some slack if you see any typos, i'd do my best to re read the chapters after posting so i can correct any errors. Thanks for joining me on this journey of our Godlayer's Legend.
This is good waiting for more chapters, the writings quality is updated which I mean great and the storyline is more creative. A good novel coming from q good author
The story seems intriguing enough to keep going. The flashforward in the beginning sets up an interesting plot to stay interested. Good work! Keep on going!