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I liked, me gusta muchísimo, el enfoque de un Yun Chetos que valora todo sin tirarse a la primera al peligro. Solo que si falta ver más reacción de las mujeres de Yun Che, ya que no expresan mucho y no se sabe que piensan o que sienten al ver al MC diferente...
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Great job with an extraordinary storytelling! The author, you are well done and errors in the text to a minimum. Keep up the good work! I advise you to read!
It's me, an author that's shamelessly review his own work. This is my first novel after I dropped two original books because I realized I still have a lot to learn. This is the first time I write an action novel, so please, bear with me. If you choose to stick around, you will see my progress in writing as the chapters count goes up and it could be fun! I post 5 chapters a week, one chapter a day from Monday to Friday. Although, I will post more whenever I have free time or will dump the chapters in a day or two when I get busy, but I will maintain the 5 chapters release rate unless something happens. That being said, I hope you enjoy reading this book as much as I enjoy writing it. Have a nice day and take care!
Interesting story so far. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
La verdad esta madre esta buena, y no son mamadas. Aunque dejenla novela despues de que Yun Che muriera al activar el asura y no conozco mas halla la trama, eh de decir que esta madre esta mejor que el original en mi humilde opinión
I liked, me gusta muchísimo, el enfoque de un Yun Chetos que valora todo sin tirarse a la primera al peligro. Solo que si falta ver más reacción de las mujeres de Yun Che, ya que no expresan mucho y no se sabe que piensan o que sienten al ver al MC diferente...
Spoiler de révélation Great job with an extraordinary storytelling! The author, you are well done and errors in the text to a minimum. Keep up the good work! I advise you to read!
It's me, an author that's shamelessly review his own work. This is my first novel after I dropped two original books because I realized I still have a lot to learn. This is the first time I write an action novel, so please, bear with me. If you choose to stick around, you will see my progress in writing as the chapters count goes up and it could be fun! I post 5 chapters a week, one chapter a day from Monday to Friday. Although, I will post more whenever I have free time or will dump the chapters in a day or two when I get busy, but I will maintain the 5 chapters release rate unless something happens. That being said, I hope you enjoy reading this book as much as I enjoy writing it. Have a nice day and take care!
Interesting story so far. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
La verdad esta madre esta buena, y no son mamadas. Aunque dejenla novela despues de que Yun Che muriera al activar el asura y no conozco mas halla la trama, eh de decir que esta madre esta mejor que el original en mi humilde opinión