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Chapter 3: Chapter 3 3 years ago 
the story makes no sense at all from what I've read so far. The reason the author gives for his loved one's betrayal makes no sense and is just hastily thrown together. They then all decide to kill ash for some reason???? I'm not trying to sound like a hater but the beginning just makes no sense for me and sounds so stupid. The idea is pretty cool with ash being colder/evil-ish but the way you made him turn just is so unbelievable to me.