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too gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
One of the best mha fanfics. GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
if u aint dropped rewrite latest chapters, too many villains and u buffed tomura too much giving him all the information and making warp guy not even get interrupted and perfectly teleport everyone where he wants too which is crazy since they all got debuffed and swarmed by endless villains 1A literally stands no chance, most of the characters are already on the brink of death and then like 3 STRONGER villains walk out to beat them down even more, also black whip midoriya. other than latest arc, the fanfics great
One of the best mha fanfics i have read. This shows that izuku really can be alot stronger if he had these qualities. I RLY wish that there would be more uploads and it is not dropped
good read a bit high in the side but perfect all around I enjoyed it write more chapters yahooo bahooo gahooo sahoooo nahooo tahooo hehehehehehe
This is a great novel buddy and I like the way story is progressing, plus I wish to introduce my novel without copy right but have anime character Life Requiem: He is already dead right. I hope you will continue to write this novel and if have time read my novel too. given Lala Astral from tk Love Ru will be there in chapter 30 from tonight 9 pm of IST
A really great bnha fanfic,.............................................................................................................................
Overpowered.
This story is amazing and the only reason it's not a full 5 stars is because of some hiccups here and there which are really easy to ignore. I love this story so far and also how the timeline changed due to Izuku's new personality, especially when he and Tomura had met 5 years before UA and thus Tomura is much more mature and less childlike. Please continue with this story as it's difficult to find one as well written as this.
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A really well made FF, Im looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. This FF is if midoriya was smart, Keep up the good work.
A great story and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 . . . . . .
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Your story is good, you make different personalities that surprise me. Izuku with confidence, Bakugo with more friendly and you make Izuku x Bakugo are besties. And on top of that Bakugo has a beautiful, sexy, and hot girlfriend. I want to read more
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This is one of the best MHA fanfics if not the best one ive ever read. If you drop this i will drop kick your first born child , 😎
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one of the best fanfics that i have read till now, its quality is impressive and ihave to say that its references made my day, keep up the good work!
I give this story 5/5 so far its really well written and the author has taken time to make Well thought out chapters with plausible ideas. I love the banter between deku and bakugo
My top novel MHA AU 100% recommended, it's refreshing 👍 ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Pretty good, if I say so myself aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
The Story is pretty good for a MHA Fan-fic and it has an interesting plot that the author made which makes me want to read it more and the characters design is good you will not feel that they tere just to feel the world they have their own roles in the story. I recommend reading this and this story has potential and I hope the author finish this story and not drop it like most authors who write fanfic.
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Uma das fanfics de MHA que tô gostando mais, o desenvolvimento está progredindo lindamente, mas o que torna ainda melhor, é que o autor não mudou a essência da obra original ou dos personagens, apenas um caminho que poderia ter acontecido com a mentalidade mais pró ativa do Izuku.
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A really great bnha fanfic, it's a take on what if izuku was as smart as was kept being mentioned in the anime/manga and used his brain and trained himself physically from a young age to become a hero. I just love this trope because izuku in this fanfic works hard to become a hero from childhood knowing he has no quirk. He trains in martial arts and later on seeing his heroics, All Might decides to give him OFA. This izuku knows how to fight and uses his legs as well to fight. So do check it out won't be disappointed.
too gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
One of the best mha fanfics. GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
if u aint dropped rewrite latest chapters, too many villains and u buffed tomura too much giving him all the information and making warp guy not even get interrupted and perfectly teleport everyone where he wants too which is crazy since they all got debuffed and swarmed by endless villains 1A literally stands no chance, most of the characters are already on the brink of death and then like 3 STRONGER villains walk out to beat them down even more, also black whip midoriya. other than latest arc, the fanfics great
One of the best mha fanfics i have read. This shows that izuku really can be alot stronger if he had these qualities. I RLY wish that there would be more uploads and it is not dropped
good read a bit high in the side but perfect all around I enjoyed it write more chapters yahooo bahooo gahooo sahoooo nahooo tahooo hehehehehehe
This is a great novel buddy and I like the way story is progressing, plus I wish to introduce my novel without copy right but have anime character Life Requiem: He is already dead right. I hope you will continue to write this novel and if have time read my novel too. given Lala Astral from tk Love Ru will be there in chapter 30 from tonight 9 pm of IST
A really great bnha fanfic,.............................................................................................................................
Overpowered.
This story is amazing and the only reason it's not a full 5 stars is because of some hiccups here and there which are really easy to ignore. I love this story so far and also how the timeline changed due to Izuku's new personality, especially when he and Tomura had met 5 years before UA and thus Tomura is much more mature and less childlike. Please continue with this story as it's difficult to find one as well written as this.
Spoiler de révélation A really well made FF, Im looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. This FF is if midoriya was smart, Keep up the good work.
A great story and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 . . . . . .
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Your story is good, you make different personalities that surprise me. Izuku with confidence, Bakugo with more friendly and you make Izuku x Bakugo are besties. And on top of that Bakugo has a beautiful, sexy, and hot girlfriend. I want to read more
Spoiler de révélation This is one of the best MHA fanfics if not the best one ive ever read. If you drop this i will drop kick your first born child , 😎
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one of the best fanfics that i have read till now, its quality is impressive and ihave to say that its references made my day, keep up the good work!
I give this story 5/5 so far its really well written and the author has taken time to make Well thought out chapters with plausible ideas. I love the banter between deku and bakugo
My top novel MHA AU 100% recommended, it's refreshing 👍 ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Pretty good, if I say so myself aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
The Story is pretty good for a MHA Fan-fic and it has an interesting plot that the author made which makes me want to read it more and the characters design is good you will not feel that they tere just to feel the world they have their own roles in the story. I recommend reading this and this story has potential and I hope the author finish this story and not drop it like most authors who write fanfic.
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Uma das fanfics de MHA que tô gostando mais, o desenvolvimento está progredindo lindamente, mas o que torna ainda melhor, é que o autor não mudou a essência da obra original ou dos personagens, apenas um caminho que poderia ter acontecido com a mentalidade mais pró ativa do Izuku.
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A really great bnha fanfic, it's a take on what if izuku was as smart as was kept being mentioned in the anime/manga and used his brain and trained himself physically from a young age to become a hero. I just love this trope because izuku in this fanfic works hard to become a hero from childhood knowing he has no quirk. He trains in martial arts and later on seeing his heroics, All Might decides to give him OFA. This izuku knows how to fight and uses his legs as well to fight. So do check it out won't be disappointed.
I really love this concept. Improvised Deku.