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Γcrire un avisi dont really like the mc as of yet but i understand that that is probably since he doesnt have proper character devlepment yet. FMCS also seemed rush and idrl pokemon harems. Writing is decent, updating seems decent, story development is good, his system is op and i m hyped for the future. 1 plot hole i would say is, he is supposed to get 200 EXP everytime he rests up, but after 8 months, which should be 8 X 30 X 200 48,000 EXP and all the other quests he should be getting, do well in class, beat this person etc, he shld be strongest than 5th seat, maybe 1st. Other than that its a good story, just waiting for to be developed. Also excited to see what Aizen has to say
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So few bleach fanfics on this site! This is looking promising already, keep up the good work! I hope you continue to write and don't drop it.
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un MC que no conoce la trama , es como ver BLEACH por primera vez, personalmente no me sirve, pero esta bien escrito para la gente que no le importa
i dont really like the mc as of yet but i understand that that is probably since he doesnt have proper character devlepment yet. FMCS also seemed rush and idrl pokemon harems. Writing is decent, updating seems decent, story development is good, his system is op and i m hyped for the future. 1 plot hole i would say is, he is supposed to get 200 EXP everytime he rests up, but after 8 months, which should be 8 X 30 X 200 48,000 EXP and all the other quests he should be getting, do well in class, beat this person etc, he shld be strongest than 5th seat, maybe 1st. Other than that its a good story, just waiting for to be developed. Also excited to see what Aizen has to say
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So few bleach fanfics on this site! This is looking promising already, keep up the good work! I hope you continue to write and don't drop it.
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un MC que no conoce la trama , es como ver BLEACH por primera vez, personalmente no me sirve, pero esta bien escrito para la gente que no le importa