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I enjoyed this novel. characters were well developed. Very good Storyline. English translation was a bit rough but it was easy to figure the meaning out.
This book is one of those rare finds. It started off as a light and funny story. Then a dash of mystery....and finally the author drops the bomb on us where the whole story ties together. It was tied together really well. For a short read there really were lots of twist and turns as well as nice surprises!!
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this is very good book to read and the storyline and build up of the story is very good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
very good book, but sometimes the word are not in a good order. i would still read other books by this author. good story line. liked at a lot
A great short book. An had many twists and turns and a lovely sweet love story. Twins so cute. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖(Some editing needs to be done on the female and male pronouns as used wrongly sometimes.)
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Very good story line too intrigued ,by the end can't read @ once coz of limitations of pass. Hope i can read the story continuously ,🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂💯💯🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓
Awww so love it short story but good one... lots of lessons love and destiny... i like the twins and the escarrere family also they do accept allie and also how a person struggles for his guilt love and depression.. well done authors congrats
I never expected that a book I accidentally stumbled upon would turn out to be so good . Love the plot, how it progresses and the twists and turns. Worth the read. Looking forward to more wonderful works by the author
This story is so good. The characters are well developed. We have drama, romance, plot, secrets, a lot of feminine empowerment, cute kids, good parents, God help and much more.
There are a lot of grammatical errors throughout the whole story. Some names are used for the wrong persona in a couple of chapters. The flow of the story is okay, but there is room for improvement. In some aspects I miss the connection and the ability to stay engaged in the story.
This story is very touching. I find myself brought to tears a number of times. The ending is rather sweet as well. I won't spoil anything more.
i loved the story overall. the characters and plot development fit nicely within the genre. my only concern is misuse of articles, syntax, and pronouns. oh deary. I was rewriting sentences in my mind, thinking this author needs a copy editor. or a subscription to Grammarly. I know English as a native writer and speaker can be difficult. Anyone writing in English, as a non-english speaker can find these three areas challenging. Grammarly or a decent copy editor can fix that issue. it's what publishing houses use for their authors. the modern way, get Grammarly. you won't regret it.
love the entire book! very happy for ellie and ulie... hope hadley found her happy ever after with nick.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
ya I like it n quite interesting. it i imaginary n open minded too. it also shows women ability in both business n family work which is cool .
yahhhhh! this is so goodddd. a love story that starts like this pleaseeeeeee. I really wanted to be a one hella young, independent and successful woman with this kind of loveee, but as much as possible , I don't want it to be a one night stand hehe but it can actually be too. still i loved this book. I really do! thank you authorrrr!
I love this kind of story, that I even purchased coins for the lock chapter. imagine that! You're a good author in capturing your readers. Five star for your story.
A beautiful and emotional novel. The story development excellent characters design adorable especially the twins. Updating stability very good. I LOVE the novel for it's simplicity and no elongated chapters. Kudos to the author 👌👌👌👌👌
Its a nice novel, Love the plot !! 😍 Waiting to see how the story and characters develops. [img=recommend] Want to read more and more, I can't stop. [img=update]
Both characters are successful in their life and Don’t want to be tied up to each other. It’s kind of funny how her planned failed. I think that concept of this novel is different than others Which I think is a good thing.
I haven't read it all yet but so far I live the book already you are such a good writer.. Keep it up! [img=recommend][img=faceslap] I hope you keep writing and i hope to read a lot more stories and books from you.
I enjoyed this novel. characters were well developed. Very good Storyline. English translation was a bit rough but it was easy to figure the meaning out.
This book is one of those rare finds. It started off as a light and funny story. Then a dash of mystery....and finally the author drops the bomb on us where the whole story ties together. It was tied together really well. For a short read there really were lots of twist and turns as well as nice surprises!!
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this is very good book to read and the storyline and build up of the story is very good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
very good book, but sometimes the word are not in a good order. i would still read other books by this author. good story line. liked at a lot
A great short book. An had many twists and turns and a lovely sweet love story. Twins so cute. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖(Some editing needs to be done on the female and male pronouns as used wrongly sometimes.)
🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻
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Very good story line too intrigued ,by the end can't read @ once coz of limitations of pass. Hope i can read the story continuously ,🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂💯💯🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓🆓
Awww so love it short story but good one... lots of lessons love and destiny... i like the twins and the escarrere family also they do accept allie and also how a person struggles for his guilt love and depression.. well done authors congrats
I never expected that a book I accidentally stumbled upon would turn out to be so good . Love the plot, how it progresses and the twists and turns. Worth the read. Looking forward to more wonderful works by the author
This story is so good. The characters are well developed. We have drama, romance, plot, secrets, a lot of feminine empowerment, cute kids, good parents, God help and much more.
There are a lot of grammatical errors throughout the whole story. Some names are used for the wrong persona in a couple of chapters. The flow of the story is okay, but there is room for improvement. In some aspects I miss the connection and the ability to stay engaged in the story.
This story is very touching. I find myself brought to tears a number of times. The ending is rather sweet as well. I won't spoil anything more.
i loved the story overall. the characters and plot development fit nicely within the genre. my only concern is misuse of articles, syntax, and pronouns. oh deary. I was rewriting sentences in my mind, thinking this author needs a copy editor. or a subscription to Grammarly. I know English as a native writer and speaker can be difficult. Anyone writing in English, as a non-english speaker can find these three areas challenging. Grammarly or a decent copy editor can fix that issue. it's what publishing houses use for their authors. the modern way, get Grammarly. you won't regret it.
love the entire book! very happy for ellie and ulie... hope hadley found her happy ever after with nick.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
ya I like it n quite interesting. it i imaginary n open minded too. it also shows women ability in both business n family work which is cool .
yahhhhh! this is so goodddd. a love story that starts like this pleaseeeeeee. I really wanted to be a one hella young, independent and successful woman with this kind of loveee, but as much as possible , I don't want it to be a one night stand hehe but it can actually be too. still i loved this book. I really do! thank you authorrrr!
I love this kind of story, that I even purchased coins for the lock chapter. imagine that! You're a good author in capturing your readers. Five star for your story.
A beautiful and emotional novel. The story development excellent characters design adorable especially the twins. Updating stability very good. I LOVE the novel for it's simplicity and no elongated chapters. Kudos to the author 👌👌👌👌👌
Its a nice novel, Love the plot !! 😍 Waiting to see how the story and characters develops. [img=recommend] Want to read more and more, I can't stop. [img=update]
Both characters are successful in their life and Don’t want to be tied up to each other. It’s kind of funny how her planned failed. I think that concept of this novel is different than others Which I think is a good thing.
I haven't read it all yet but so far I live the book already you are such a good writer.. Keep it up! [img=recommend][img=faceslap] I hope you keep writing and i hope to read a lot more stories and books from you.
Finally a good from beginning to end good job author !