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I'm reading it's manwha and I like it very much and want to try its novel version. wish that it's more detailed than the manwha. Gonna give it full marks!
.................Nice cap........................................................ty................good world......................................................................................
I appreciate your effort in trying to translate this novel, it is a very good novel, but the translation is horrible. It's very difficult to understand certain things.
Please author can you try to make the novel abit more understandable, I've been reading the manhua of this novel and it was nice but i came here to read the novel only to see the word's all over the place, at time's i don't even know who is speaking and who is talking to who. Please you should try to clarify this thing's with the way you use " " .
I just wanted to share this great story! An easy way to save a good story and even share it with those you don't know. so since I repeat. THIS STORY DOES NOT BELONG TO ME.
Good and interesting to read. The manga is a little bit different. It is more aggressive in manga compared to the presentation here. I'm still exploring their big difference since I only read 1 chapter of novel compared to 104 chapter of manga.
Spoiler de révélation I'm reading it's manwha and I like it very much and want to try its novel version. wish that it's more detailed than the manwha. Gonna give it full marks!
.................Nice cap........................................................ty................good world......................................................................................
I appreciate your effort in trying to translate this novel, it is a very good novel, but the translation is horrible. It's very difficult to understand certain things.
Please author can you try to make the novel abit more understandable, I've been reading the manhua of this novel and it was nice but i came here to read the novel only to see the word's all over the place, at time's i don't even know who is speaking and who is talking to who. Please you should try to clarify this thing's with the way you use " " .
I just wanted to share this great story! An easy way to save a good story and even share it with those you don't know. so since I repeat. THIS STORY DOES NOT BELONG TO ME.
Good and interesting to read. The manga is a little bit different. It is more aggressive in manga compared to the presentation here. I'm still exploring their big difference since I only read 1 chapter of novel compared to 104 chapter of manga.
Spoiler de révélation