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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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While there are a few mistakes when it comes to writing, you can still get the gist of it. It's an interesting concept that will hopefully turn into an amazing story. It may be a bit early to judge though seeing as there's only 1 chapter as of now.
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While there are a few mistakes when it comes to writing, you can still get the gist of it. It's an interesting concept that will hopefully turn into an amazing story. It may be a bit early to judge though seeing as there's only 1 chapter as of now.
When is next chapter?