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This is the best one 😍🥰😊🥰😊☺️😊,i wish it’s get a thousand chapter , sooo good . Author kindly come back 😔😔😔
Hello Author, How many chapters this novel will have, I kinda like this novel, I hope it will have thousands of chapter. Can you give us hint how many chapter, just approximately. Thanks and you guys reading this novel. Yipeee happy reading
did the author drop this book 🤨has anyone has any idea 🤔🤔if someone know anyone mind share,this book hooked me up well i kinda waiting for update but no update for months though ☹️☹️
the story is good for introvert people 😅 may be they can learn some shameless tricks or talk.... but I must say this story is good. Thanks for ur hard work author ....its must have been hard for u 2
Spoiler de révélation
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
So far I already love it to my exceed of previous novel of too a perverted mc, even though I'm just in kinda a small chapter, not in any exciting or main plot yet, maybe later I'm already there, anyways, I always love shameless and lustfu* mc, cough, cough, ahem, forget that part, cough (Oh dear, my sinful syndrome appearing again). Keep up the good work author-saa.
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Fantastic story with shameless and openminded characters. Very goox jof from autor. As reader i didnt felt bored and was satisfied, although i am only in the beginning :) sweet story with supernatural abilities and apokalypse...🤗🤗🤗🙁🙁
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
😆 I just loved it. The couple dynamics is very very rare. The both of them are shameless and like playing innocent yet it is not irritating at all. it is even funny. I love story where the Mc has high EQ. I am tired of dense mc(this is hypocritical of me) and our Ads already like Elijah(not a spoiler). Loved it, hope there is no angst yet. I am not mentally ready.
This is such a fun read! Plot itself is very interesting, but the author's writing style made it more fun. The characters are well made and I found myself laughing numerous times. The pace is fast, just good for the story. Overall, this one is a good read!
Just can't believe that I read 23 chapters in one go. Excellent! Intriguing! I liked everything about the novel. The character design, the writing style, and the story development were excellent. I was smiling as I scrolled from one chapter to another. Loved the bond between the leads. Will continue reading and will remain in my lib! Keep Going!!
I'm in love with the story . can't get enough of the book . looking forward to seeing more chapters and twists . love the main characters . 🙃
I love both of MC and ML dynamic, they are match made in heaven especially ML shameless attitude hehe, the novel is pretty written well, as I can understand. story wise it's pretty good overall its a good novel. Thank you author for creating this Novel 💞
A whirlwind start. Adrian is an unusual lead which makes the story even more compelling. He’s full of life and mischief and that will make you keep reading this well told tale with all it has to offer. Well done author.
i love it, especially the the quote in the first part, it's like i'm under a magical spell, drawing me deep inside to read the full story. i like the character development. i just want to take elijah home. i want to read more chapters of this. i love it.
Well, the story is interesting. The story is funny and I love the two leads. Jus Ad should be a little cooler, I mean he is a little crude and all. But overall all is good. I love how we are already into a pseudo-relationship of the lead since the beginning it makes the story more lively Keep up the great work author.
Full of youthfull enthusiasm and character, this novel was made with the tongue of a sailor. Although the beginning was grammatically bumpy, the author’s skill imrpoves with every chapter, reaching a precipise of mastery by Chapter 30. Keep rising!
its not that good in a sense of writing, grammar is a bit off sometimes. The mc and ml are a bit eccentric and a bit psyhotic Overall tho it a fun read for now :)
This is the best one 😍🥰😊🥰😊☺️😊,i wish it’s get a thousand chapter , sooo good . Author kindly come back 😔😔😔
Hello Author, How many chapters this novel will have, I kinda like this novel, I hope it will have thousands of chapter. Can you give us hint how many chapter, just approximately. Thanks and you guys reading this novel. Yipeee happy reading
did the author drop this book 🤨has anyone has any idea 🤔🤔if someone know anyone mind share,this book hooked me up well i kinda waiting for update but no update for months though ☹️☹️
the story is good for introvert people 😅 may be they can learn some shameless tricks or talk.... but I must say this story is good. Thanks for ur hard work author ....its must have been hard for u 2
Spoiler de révélation 1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
So far I already love it to my exceed of previous novel of too a perverted mc, even though I'm just in kinda a small chapter, not in any exciting or main plot yet, maybe later I'm already there, anyways, I always love shameless and lustfu* mc, cough, cough, ahem, forget that part, cough (Oh dear, my sinful syndrome appearing again). Keep up the good work author-saa.
😌😍😍🥰😙😗😘😚😋😛🤪😝😝🤨🤓🤓🤩🥸😎🥳😏🤩😒😟😔😞😕🙁☹️😫😩😢😠😤😭😡🤬🤬🤯🥶🥶😳😶🌫️😱😨😓😓😥😰🤗🤔🤔🤭😶🤥🤫😐😑😬😦😯😯🙄😧😧😮😲🤤😴🥱🥱😮💨😵😮💨😪😵💫🤐🥴😺😸
Fantastic story with shameless and openminded characters. Very goox jof from autor. As reader i didnt felt bored and was satisfied, although i am only in the beginning :) sweet story with supernatural abilities and apokalypse...🤗🤗🤗🙁🙁
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
😆 I just loved it. The couple dynamics is very very rare. The both of them are shameless and like playing innocent yet it is not irritating at all. it is even funny. I love story where the Mc has high EQ. I am tired of dense mc(this is hypocritical of me) and our Ads already like Elijah(not a spoiler). Loved it, hope there is no angst yet. I am not mentally ready.
This is such a fun read! Plot itself is very interesting, but the author's writing style made it more fun. The characters are well made and I found myself laughing numerous times. The pace is fast, just good for the story. Overall, this one is a good read!
Just can't believe that I read 23 chapters in one go. Excellent! Intriguing! I liked everything about the novel. The character design, the writing style, and the story development were excellent. I was smiling as I scrolled from one chapter to another. Loved the bond between the leads. Will continue reading and will remain in my lib! Keep Going!!
I'm in love with the story . can't get enough of the book . looking forward to seeing more chapters and twists . love the main characters . 🙃
I love both of MC and ML dynamic, they are match made in heaven especially ML shameless attitude hehe, the novel is pretty written well, as I can understand. story wise it's pretty good overall its a good novel. Thank you author for creating this Novel 💞
A whirlwind start. Adrian is an unusual lead which makes the story even more compelling. He’s full of life and mischief and that will make you keep reading this well told tale with all it has to offer. Well done author.
i love it, especially the the quote in the first part, it's like i'm under a magical spell, drawing me deep inside to read the full story. i like the character development. i just want to take elijah home. i want to read more chapters of this. i love it.
Well, the story is interesting. The story is funny and I love the two leads. Jus Ad should be a little cooler, I mean he is a little crude and all. But overall all is good. I love how we are already into a pseudo-relationship of the lead since the beginning it makes the story more lively Keep up the great work author.
Full of youthfull enthusiasm and character, this novel was made with the tongue of a sailor. Although the beginning was grammatically bumpy, the author’s skill imrpoves with every chapter, reaching a precipise of mastery by Chapter 30. Keep rising!
its not that good in a sense of writing, grammar is a bit off sometimes. The mc and ml are a bit eccentric and a bit psyhotic Overall tho it a fun read for now :)
One of the best, and my favourite love this, 😍🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🏽