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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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ch 1-7/ So far so good besides a few grammar errors. Seems like it will be a great fanfic so keep up the good work and I hope you don't drop it.
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Keep going and try to update more often, grammar is okay and story ongoing are great, anyway i can't wait for more. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
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ch 1-7/ So far so good besides a few grammar errors. Seems like it will be a great fanfic so keep up the good work and I hope you don't drop it.
Keep going and try to update more often, grammar is okay and story ongoing are great, anyway i can't wait for more. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]