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I will read more later - but I just have to say I appreciate that someone would also think of the "collateral damage" that comes along with great and heroic plots...it's not like you can make an omelette without breaking some eggs, but I laughed. Then I felt kinda guilty, since hey, anyone could end up as collateral damage in a novel. Then I laughed more, because the ideas and the sheer absurdity of these situations are legit hilarious.
This book was added to my library as soon as I finished the synopsis. The author’s sense of humor gets me every single time and I already really like it. World Background can’t possibly be built but I’m sure that you atleast know some of these tropes and can therefore think of their families and everything. The update rate so far has been good and well eventually you run out of idea for this kinda stuff unless you plan to spend the rest of your life reading garbage webnovels so I guess at one point it will be irregular. All I can say is that this is a sort of shooting star, one that I’ll really enjoy... or maybe it won’t, maybe the author will churn out tropes that’ll have me rolling on the floor. Just keep up the good work author👍
Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand. You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.
I'm writing this because I'm bored, if anyone git any ideas here or a story about your favorite npc that you want to share, you're welcome. Enjoy this... thing
I will read more later - but I just have to say I appreciate that someone would also think of the "collateral damage" that comes along with great and heroic plots...it's not like you can make an omelette without breaking some eggs, but I laughed. Then I felt kinda guilty, since hey, anyone could end up as collateral damage in a novel. Then I laughed more, because the ideas and the sheer absurdity of these situations are legit hilarious.
This book was added to my library as soon as I finished the synopsis. The author’s sense of humor gets me every single time and I already really like it. World Background can’t possibly be built but I’m sure that you atleast know some of these tropes and can therefore think of their families and everything. The update rate so far has been good and well eventually you run out of idea for this kinda stuff unless you plan to spend the rest of your life reading garbage webnovels so I guess at one point it will be irregular. All I can say is that this is a sort of shooting star, one that I’ll really enjoy... or maybe it won’t, maybe the author will churn out tropes that’ll have me rolling on the floor. Just keep up the good work author👍
Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand. You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.
I'm writing this because I'm bored, if anyone git any ideas here or a story about your favorite npc that you want to share, you're welcome. Enjoy this... thing