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I love the imagination you started the story on, gives it so much potential in that once you finish the limited twilight series you could expand the supernatural world beyond Vampires and shape shingles.
Yo man, where did you go? are you well?? hope so. . . been waiting for this to update for a while, did you drop hopefully not, and I hope you can release some chapters soon, this book is really my favorite Twilight Fanfic. please try to continue this in the nearest time possible,
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~Seems like no harem~ Your life is EVERYTHING! You serve ALL PURPOSE! You should treat yourself NOW! And give yourself, a piece of that oxygen, in the ozone layer, that's covered up so then you can breathe in this blue trapped bubble! 'Cause you know I'm here for it! To worship YOU! Love YOURSELF! I mean that with a hundred percent! With a thousand percent!
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Please please please please Please please please please Please please please please Please please please please don't stop i love this novel to much im from moroco so see franch mac me feel happy Your talented please don't stop 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
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moaaaar i need moaaar great work so far i loved character interactions and how you introduced *&-"é in the story as the FML and how she acts just like the or almost like the original great work keep the chapters rolling
I’m really enjoying the story. I had a few questions, does OFA include all the powers of OFA like the black whip and all that stuff, and if he doesn’t become a vampire and remains human what would his life expectancy be with his powers maxed out? Keep up the great work an always waiting for more chapters. 😁👍
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honestly I love it and imma keep supporting it 100% 👍👍👍👍👍. .. . . . . . .. . .. . . .. .. . .. . . . . . .. .. . . .. . .. . . .. . . .
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I liked the almost impeccable writing as much as the story. downsides: author seems not to accept criticisms related to the power of the mc, as mentioned in the first chap. the power of one for all is accumulation yes, but it goes through several hosts, so it's impossible to tell if it gets stronger with time or with accumulations of different powers. and man, why this 15k chapter? honestly on this site no one really cares about it
Please update this also, I really love your works and it is one of a kind Author-san 🥺
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I love the imagination you started the story on, gives it so much potential in that once you finish the limited twilight series you could expand the supernatural world beyond Vampires and shape shingles.
Yo man, where did you go? are you well?? hope so. . . been waiting for this to update for a while, did you drop hopefully not, and I hope you can release some chapters soon, this book is really my favorite Twilight Fanfic. please try to continue this in the nearest time possible,
Плохо..,.....,................,...........................,....,...........................,,......,.....................................................................................................................................................,.......,..........,.......,......
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~Seems like no harem~ Your life is EVERYTHING! You serve ALL PURPOSE! You should treat yourself NOW! And give yourself, a piece of that oxygen, in the ozone layer, that's covered up so then you can breathe in this blue trapped bubble! 'Cause you know I'm here for it! To worship YOU! Love YOURSELF! I mean that with a hundred percent! With a thousand percent!
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Please please please please Please please please please Please please please please Please please please please don't stop i love this novel to much im from moroco so see franch mac me feel happy Your talented please don't stop 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
Please don't drop this is really good and can't wait for more and support your writing[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
moaaaar i need moaaar great work so far i loved character interactions and how you introduced *&-"é in the story as the FML and how she acts just like the or almost like the original great work keep the chapters rolling
I’m really enjoying the story. I had a few questions, does OFA include all the powers of OFA like the black whip and all that stuff, and if he doesn’t become a vampire and remains human what would his life expectancy be with his powers maxed out? Keep up the great work an always waiting for more chapters. 😁👍
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honestly I love it and imma keep supporting it 100% 👍👍👍👍👍. .. . . . . . .. . .. . . .. .. . .. . . . . . .. .. . . .. . .. . . .. . . .
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there's not enough twilight fanfics out there................,................................................................................
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moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I liked the almost impeccable writing as much as the story. downsides: author seems not to accept criticisms related to the power of the mc, as mentioned in the first chap. the power of one for all is accumulation yes, but it goes through several hosts, so it's impossible to tell if it gets stronger with time or with accumulations of different powers. and man, why this 15k chapter? honestly on this site no one really cares about it
Please update this also, I really love your works and it is one of a kind Author-san 🥺