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great book very interesting you will definitely enjoy it. the characters are very interesting the author has a very great sense of humor. though I'm yet to read it but the preview has said a lot about the book
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Very well written. It's the kind of cute story (this far) that is super sweet. The interactions between the MC and ML make my jaw ache from the sweetness. The characters aren't overly unique (at the moment) but they're fun and have some depth to them. over all, it seems like a really cute story. Good for when your heart hurts.
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love this book can't wait for it to continue. not my usual sort of book but I love this. it really drags you into the story and makes you feel involved
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Awesome characters building and fulfilling story plots. Waiting to read the rest of the story. Please choose this novel 😍😍😍😍😍😍 oooooooooooo🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖
Okay so I am in love with this novel already and I don't like most novels with systems in them. There are a few grammatical errors but that's to be expected, especially if English is not the first language of the author. As for updating stability I am not sure how that will go as I am only able to read the trial version as of right now. I got to the end of chapter 30, found out there were no more chapters at this time and I almost cried. Please, please, please I beg of you author release more chapters I am on pins and needles right now wanting more.
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Who doesn’t want a lovely couple like this? Though it’s a reborn story and you have a cheating machine, it is quite romantic when two people just simply show their affections towards each other.
Amazing and fantastic. Just caught me unaware with the awesome story line and plots. Looking forward to read the rest of the story. Please choose this novel 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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fantastic start to a wonderful story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter and find out what is next in store for our heros update please .
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Normally the rebirth stories are more dark or have a lot of negative emotions at the beginning but this one is not. The FL made up her mind and is determined to set things right. At this point she has a cute and positive outlook for how she is going to live this time. the revenge plots have not been finalized yet, but I think her and her fiancee will setup some epic events.
for now it's very sweet and made me smile a lot, hope this will be a sweet love story, looking forward to it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
I am really enjoying the story very much The FL is reborn and ready to get together with ML who missed their chance in the last life. Looking forward to reading more. I hope this story is selected
There really isn't a lot for me to go off of yet. However, I still recommend this book. Over all the writing quality is what your want from a translated work. It flows smoothly and I didn't have to re-read sentences to understand them. I can't really comment on the story development. But I didn't feel like it deserved to have any stars taken away. Characters as of this moment are what you expect from this line is novel. I haven't seen anything new yet personality wise. I can't really say there is much depth outside of the ML and FL. And even with them it's debatable. This isn't bad, just not really 5star worthy. (To add, I enjoy the ML more than I do for most of his trope type. No abusive traits towards the FL, just occasional darker thoughts.) I can't comment on the updating yet. Much like the characters, I don't feel a lot of depth to the world. It doesn't feel wooden, but it doesn't quiet feel alive either.
Well written, am waiting for more episodes to be unlocked. Interesting that FL transmigrated into a novel and she requires likeability points to unlock the next level, similar to that of a computer game.
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great book very interesting you will definitely enjoy it. the characters are very interesting the author has a very great sense of humor. though I'm yet to read it but the preview has said a lot about the book
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Very well written. It's the kind of cute story (this far) that is super sweet. The interactions between the MC and ML make my jaw ache from the sweetness. The characters aren't overly unique (at the moment) but they're fun and have some depth to them. over all, it seems like a really cute story. Good for when your heart hurts.
amazing story i can't wait to read it @kay.com.............?????.............................................................................
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love this book can't wait for it to continue. not my usual sort of book but I love this. it really drags you into the story and makes you feel involved
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Awesome characters building and fulfilling story plots. Waiting to read the rest of the story. Please choose this novel 😍😍😍😍😍😍 oooooooooooo🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖
Okay so I am in love with this novel already and I don't like most novels with systems in them. There are a few grammatical errors but that's to be expected, especially if English is not the first language of the author. As for updating stability I am not sure how that will go as I am only able to read the trial version as of right now. I got to the end of chapter 30, found out there were no more chapters at this time and I almost cried. Please, please, please I beg of you author release more chapters I am on pins and needles right now wanting more.
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Who doesn’t want a lovely couple like this? Though it’s a reborn story and you have a cheating machine, it is quite romantic when two people just simply show their affections towards each other.
Amazing and fantastic. Just caught me unaware with the awesome story line and plots. Looking forward to read the rest of the story. Please choose this novel 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
IM IN NEED OF MOREE, also, I would really like to try making medical dishes [img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
fantastic start to a wonderful story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter and find out what is next in store for our heros update please .
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Normally the rebirth stories are more dark or have a lot of negative emotions at the beginning but this one is not. The FL made up her mind and is determined to set things right. At this point she has a cute and positive outlook for how she is going to live this time. the revenge plots have not been finalized yet, but I think her and her fiancee will setup some epic events.
for now it's very sweet and made me smile a lot, hope this will be a sweet love story, looking forward to it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
I am really enjoying the story very much The FL is reborn and ready to get together with ML who missed their chance in the last life. Looking forward to reading more. I hope this story is selected
There really isn't a lot for me to go off of yet. However, I still recommend this book. Over all the writing quality is what your want from a translated work. It flows smoothly and I didn't have to re-read sentences to understand them. I can't really comment on the story development. But I didn't feel like it deserved to have any stars taken away. Characters as of this moment are what you expect from this line is novel. I haven't seen anything new yet personality wise. I can't really say there is much depth outside of the ML and FL. And even with them it's debatable. This isn't bad, just not really 5star worthy. (To add, I enjoy the ML more than I do for most of his trope type. No abusive traits towards the FL, just occasional darker thoughts.) I can't comment on the updating yet. Much like the characters, I don't feel a lot of depth to the world. It doesn't feel wooden, but it doesn't quiet feel alive either.
Well written, am waiting for more episodes to be unlocked. Interesting that FL transmigrated into a novel and she requires likeability points to unlock the next level, similar to that of a computer game.
lol hahahaha i cant brain what the ps said that the old man ml is actually 4 years older than the fl age [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵😘😘😘😘really nice i wait to read more… this comic surprised me so much bruh like FR FR woooow ✨👀👀👀🥵🥵🥵🐖💨✨looooooveeeeeee it
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