/ Book&Literature / HP: A New World账
Synopsis
He opened his eyes, and saw himself in an entirely new world. It was very familiar to the one he knew in his previous life, but wait! Is this magic? He is going to Hogwarts? Am I in the world of Harry Potter?
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Chapter release schedule : 7 chapters per week, one chapter per day
Chapter length - 700 words
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Writing Quality: 5 stars This fanfiction contains good language and grammar in general. There are hardly any major mistakes that would disrupt your flow of reading. Each sentence isn't too long nor does it contain many punctuations. It is good and pleasing to read, and I would rate it 4.7 stars, rounding up to 5. Stability of updates: 5 stars So far, it has been 2 per day, but I'm not sure whether the author is planning to continue this pace. Until this fanfic stabilizes, it would remain at 4.5 stars, rounded up to 5 stars. Story development: 4 stars It's interesting so far, but it doesn't really contain anything that stands out amongst everything out there. The introduction and plot so far is pretty generic, but since it wasn't cringely written or anything like that, it scored better than what I would usually give. I would rate it 4.3-4.5 stars, rounded down to 4 stars. Character Design: 4 stars So far, only the main character's design had been revealed, while the side characters like his parents were barely mentioned at all. I know that we should focus more on the main character, but we cannot neglect the interaction between the side characters and our main character too much. We only know that the mc is born in the royal family as their crown prince, but apart from the few descriptions about the mc's goals, ambitions, morals, ethics, type of personality so far, and little to no descriptions about anything else, I would give it a 4.4-4.6 stars, rounded down to 4 stars. World Background: 5 stars This is a magic and knight's world that is based on a Chinese novel, I suppose. Since the main character's name is Chinese and all. So far, the general power system had been revealed, but the character's power level had not been revealed yet. Since this is a magic and knight's world and supposed fanfiction, the world background should be more or less developed by the original author. Though, since I can't accurately judge how this author is going to develop the world background, until more can be said, I would rate this 4.7-4.8 stars. In total: 4.57 stars, rounded up to 4.6 stars. This is a good read with good language, but until more information about how the author is planning to continue this fanfiction can be revealed, this is sadly going to have only a 4.6-star rating.
This is someone who has no clue about the timeline of Harry Potter. Mc is born after Voldemort goes after the potter family and *dies*... In which the Mc would be 2 grades below HP and co... low and behold he is in the same year as Harry... Then all the characters basically bow down to the mc's grandfather who puts the Mc through some random ritual with no guarantee of success, acts distant and almost hateful to the mc's parents and himself, gives a mysterious gift to the Mc who is afraid of his grandpa for obvious reasons yet the Mc immediately puts on this enchanted necklace that won't come off causes pain and obeys his grandfather by hiding it from everyone with no explanation... Honestly the Mc shows no intelligence whatsoever, no cunning, doesn't seem to care about his family so far, and doesn't seem ambitious or cunning... So a hatstall who doesn't belong anywhere. All in all, don't waste your time if your hoping for a smart or crafty mc...
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The story started out decently but you can tell that the author is starting to loose interest already, the chapters have been getting shorter and shorter after around chapter 15. Also I can't help but feel that the reincarnated person in the first chapter isn't the MC but rather his new grandfather, both experimenting on him as a baby and effectively branding him like a slave, I fully expect the grandfather to somehow take over his body by chapter 50 if it makes it that far.
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I really liked it but what I would have liked for the boy to be more cunning and to behave in a somewhat nice way with Draco and the other pure bloods because with his grandfather we don't know
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Excellent writing , really enjoyed the story telling . Rhe world building in this story is one of the beat ive read so far . Characters are written really well, they are mentally adapt unlike other fan fics where only yhe mc has intelligence. So far a fantastic read