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Just binge read it. quite emotional on arc 1 and it seems auhor have title cutting ninja onion on system’s title [img=recommend]
To the author I say this I hate you you have now written three beautiful books that I have read to completion and I am absolutely blown away by this amazing books and in eager anticipation of updates so kudos and keep it up.
I am really enjoying reading thIs book the updates seem to come every week but irregulary. I hope this book continues on long into the future
i really love this story I like the way the story is progressing and how it is done all I can hope for is for the author not to drop this wonderful story
good! more chap! give me morre chapter.. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
I think its a great story but it would be nice if the chapters were reliced a little faster but I understand that good chapters take more time so its understandable.
The first sentence has a blatant error. Of the sort that's constantly repeated. The author doesn't bother to check what they wrote. If you're okay with that, then you can try it. Personally, I can't stand such a low standard of effort.
Best of Best, but but please change Alisha's attitude, make her a stupid system, for a smart system that speaks to a billion players, and gives everyone some goodies, this is beyond evil, + spoils the impression of work. the first 50% of the piece were very emotional, and tell the story very well but beyond further errors went 1. Where did the government come from so quickly? 2. why did the mother start calling someone, if she was a doctor, she could understand something herself + where is the doctor's excellence ?! 3. the appearance of Seraphim NPC, what is it all about ?! we have a + - DARK beginning and then some kind of soap opera in the middle and comedy at the end..
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omg i found this book last night and it is just absolutely amazing i hope u don't drop author :) i hope u don't drop author :) i hope u don't drop author :)
Good goooooood . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .... . . . . . . . .. . . .. .. . . .. .......................................
another great gender bend story by the author! the story is fun and pretty unique for me. the concept of soulmate make it so fun to read. I just wish author to NEVER DROP THIS AND UPDATE at least 5 chapters in a week :)(lol I am greedy)
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ive read both of this authors gender bender ( pretty much all i read is this) novels & i absolutely love both. but i absolutely love the idea of a slow transformation. not many do it they prefer the shorter route. but i love reading it cause it gives the mc a chance to slowly get used to things. as long as it aint to slow cause then they dread it
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Verygood ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
For a relatively new novel it's already coming along quite nicely, can't wait to see where it will go! ***Random text to reach the minimum letter limit***
Shameless Self review, I am trying very hard to make this my best book yet, and I think I am doing a much better job at story telling then my other books.
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More more more more more more more more more more more more more nore more more more more more more more more .......................................
Love the story so far (read till chapter 31). The plot is looking amazing and i am loving the characters. This story has an amazing amount of potential!!! Keep up the good work!
Just binge read it. quite emotional on arc 1 and it seems auhor have title cutting ninja onion on system’s title [img=recommend]
To the author I say this I hate you you have now written three beautiful books that I have read to completion and I am absolutely blown away by this amazing books and in eager anticipation of updates so kudos and keep it up.
I am really enjoying reading thIs book the updates seem to come every week but irregulary. I hope this book continues on long into the future
i really love this story I like the way the story is progressing and how it is done all I can hope for is for the author not to drop this wonderful story
good! more chap! give me morre chapter.. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
I think its a great story but it would be nice if the chapters were reliced a little faster but I understand that good chapters take more time so its understandable.
The first sentence has a blatant error. Of the sort that's constantly repeated. The author doesn't bother to check what they wrote. If you're okay with that, then you can try it. Personally, I can't stand such a low standard of effort.
Best of Best, but but please change Alisha's attitude, make her a stupid system, for a smart system that speaks to a billion players, and gives everyone some goodies, this is beyond evil, + spoils the impression of work. the first 50% of the piece were very emotional, and tell the story very well but beyond further errors went 1. Where did the government come from so quickly? 2. why did the mother start calling someone, if she was a doctor, she could understand something herself + where is the doctor's excellence ?! 3. the appearance of Seraphim NPC, what is it all about ?! we have a + - DARK beginning and then some kind of soap opera in the middle and comedy at the end..
Spoiler de révélation omg i found this book last night and it is just absolutely amazing i hope u don't drop author :) i hope u don't drop author :) i hope u don't drop author :)
Good goooooood . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .... . . . . . . . .. . . .. .. . . .. .......................................
another great gender bend story by the author! the story is fun and pretty unique for me. the concept of soulmate make it so fun to read. I just wish author to NEVER DROP THIS AND UPDATE at least 5 chapters in a week :)(lol I am greedy)
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ive read both of this authors gender bender ( pretty much all i read is this) novels & i absolutely love both. but i absolutely love the idea of a slow transformation. not many do it they prefer the shorter route. but i love reading it cause it gives the mc a chance to slowly get used to things. as long as it aint to slow cause then they dread it
Spoiler de révélation Verygood ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
For a relatively new novel it's already coming along quite nicely, can't wait to see where it will go! ***Random text to reach the minimum letter limit***
Shameless Self review, I am trying very hard to make this my best book yet, and I think I am doing a much better job at story telling then my other books.
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More more more more more more more more more more more more more nore more more more more more more more more .......................................
Love the story so far (read till chapter 31). The plot is looking amazing and i am loving the characters. This story has an amazing amount of potential!!! Keep up the good work!