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Go go go author! I support you! This novel was one of a kind. Having the perks of native speakers, this will take a flight higher than none native speakers. I can say that this is a good start! More power in your writings as I see it has potential in winning. Spirity here we go! Hope you win both prizes... the Webnovel one and the Tencent tv adaptation. Kudos!
The novel is pretty great. I want to see more from the protagonist and the flow of the story. Although it has minor errors like wrong usage of punctuation marks, I just ignored it since you're just starting like me. Good luck to you WSA Journey and Keep it up.
Excellent start. Great potential. Added to library. My single issue are the occasional grammar mistakes and stuff, like with the spelling of the name "johnny." however, since the author is fixing that now, i'll let it slide. Can't wait to see how it turns out
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The story got a potential! I would like the author wrote the chapters a little bit longer. but anyway I love it! It has a great start and I want to know the character development of Charlie. In tthe future chapters... I love it!
This book has got great potential! If you're a fan of systems and the concept of reincarnation , give this book a try. The author has just started writing but I believe it will get even better in the coming chapters. ( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)
What an amazing fantasy story! I can't wait to know more about MC's future. that's a cool story to have while sipping my coffee in the morning.
Hi! Author review here. I really hope that you enjoy the story, please support and share ☺️ This is my first published fiction. Any comments and feedback are welcome!
Go go go author! I support you! This novel was one of a kind. Having the perks of native speakers, this will take a flight higher than none native speakers. I can say that this is a good start! More power in your writings as I see it has potential in winning. Spirity here we go! Hope you win both prizes... the Webnovel one and the Tencent tv adaptation. Kudos!
The novel is pretty great. I want to see more from the protagonist and the flow of the story. Although it has minor errors like wrong usage of punctuation marks, I just ignored it since you're just starting like me. Good luck to you WSA Journey and Keep it up.
Excellent start. Great potential. Added to library. My single issue are the occasional grammar mistakes and stuff, like with the spelling of the name "johnny." however, since the author is fixing that now, i'll let it slide. Can't wait to see how it turns out
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The story got a potential! I would like the author wrote the chapters a little bit longer. but anyway I love it! It has a great start and I want to know the character development of Charlie. In tthe future chapters... I love it!
This book has got great potential! If you're a fan of systems and the concept of reincarnation , give this book a try. The author has just started writing but I believe it will get even better in the coming chapters. ( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)
What an amazing fantasy story! I can't wait to know more about MC's future. that's a cool story to have while sipping my coffee in the morning.
Hi! Author review here. I really hope that you enjoy the story, please support and share ☺️ This is my first published fiction. Any comments and feedback are welcome!