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Great story! and good characters I've been waiting for a good one piece story. (Also do you have any plans to make a new hunter x hunter story I really likes the first two)
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pretty good for a fan fiction . . . hhjjnnnnnnjjjjjjjjjjj more characters. 5 star [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .
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I loved the protagonist, and also the story, one of your best HolyJoker works. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
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I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed.
awesome, i will give you 5 stars because i really enjoy read it. well there some part that i don't like it, but overall the story was 👌. .....
Perfect. Nuff said I love the MC’s personality and Machiavellian world view. One has to be pragmatic to survive in their harsh world and he has come a long way from a weakling to a yonko level admiral
bro i hope this story will grow and be continued and not stop it seems like s pretty cool story and i like the plot and that he dont have a system and some wishes and some cheats and have a growth development
I’ve read a few storys in my time and and only so many have made it into my personal greats yet Holy Jokers fIcs always seem to creep in, its like eating your favourite candy yet every piece is a new fantastic flavour. There is just something that attracts me to his stuff from his great twists to unique characters and how theIr interaction fit Perfectly to their respective worlds One day I hope Joker can take on the daunting task of writing a original work as i believe his style and world building could make for a new universe of fun Sorry if this review seems weird my first time doing it 😉
Joker has continued to improve his writing and this is a poor dude with an ordinary zoan who manages to rise up in their tough world as a marine who seeks true justice - freedom from the oppression of the world government! Can’t praise this enough
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Top-notch work, as always, you never disappoint, it's perfect in every way, no cheats only make the story better, continue your work it's one of the best I have read in a while
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I saw spam reviews. Lots of 5 stars just because they liked the author of this novel. So I gave 1 star for balance. . . . . .......................................
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Joker and his fanfiction never disappoint me. A journey of a coward guy in one piece world who would do anything for his survival, as his strength grow so does his ambition.
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God God God Una muy buena historia y una ejecución impecable, si bien la bear fruit me desánimo al principio, pronto me enamoró la manera de amasar poder del MC.
Great story! and good characters I've been waiting for a good one piece story. (Also do you have any plans to make a new hunter x hunter story I really likes the first two)
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pretty good for a fan fiction . . . hhjjnnnnnnjjjjjjjjjjj more characters. 5 star [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .
Spoiler de révélation I loved the protagonist, and also the story, one of your best HolyJoker works. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
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I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed. I love this book. Read it! you won't be disappointed.
awesome, i will give you 5 stars because i really enjoy read it. well there some part that i don't like it, but overall the story was 👌. .....
Perfect. Nuff said I love the MC’s personality and Machiavellian world view. One has to be pragmatic to survive in their harsh world and he has come a long way from a weakling to a yonko level admiral
bro i hope this story will grow and be continued and not stop it seems like s pretty cool story and i like the plot and that he dont have a system and some wishes and some cheats and have a growth development
I’ve read a few storys in my time and and only so many have made it into my personal greats yet Holy Jokers fIcs always seem to creep in, its like eating your favourite candy yet every piece is a new fantastic flavour. There is just something that attracts me to his stuff from his great twists to unique characters and how theIr interaction fit Perfectly to their respective worlds One day I hope Joker can take on the daunting task of writing a original work as i believe his style and world building could make for a new universe of fun Sorry if this review seems weird my first time doing it 😉
Joker has continued to improve his writing and this is a poor dude with an ordinary zoan who manages to rise up in their tough world as a marine who seeks true justice - freedom from the oppression of the world government! Can’t praise this enough
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Top-notch work, as always, you never disappoint, it's perfect in every way, no cheats only make the story better, continue your work it's one of the best I have read in a while
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Spoiler de révélation I saw spam reviews. Lots of 5 stars just because they liked the author of this novel. So I gave 1 star for balance. . . . . .......................................
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Spoiler de révélation Joker and his fanfiction never disappoint me. A journey of a coward guy in one piece world who would do anything for his survival, as his strength grow so does his ambition.
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God God God Una muy buena historia y una ejecución impecable, si bien la bear fruit me desánimo al principio, pronto me enamoró la manera de amasar poder del MC.