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awesome i love it so much.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................goodjob[img=merekomendasikan][img=merekomendasikan][img=merekomendasikan]
Nothing really changes from the cannon except the mc is kage level already and copy jutsu but not gonna use them. The mc power is getting stronger each day but not plan to use them to keep the timeline the same. So yeah, it felt like reading or watching the cannon story.
Novel yang menarik bagiku karena rata" Reinkarnator akan selalu berusaha mengubah semua hal yang akan terjadi namun disini MC tidak terlalu banyak mengubah jalan cerita. Sedikit kurang pada novel ini pada penggunaan kata saja seperti kata "saat" Yang terlalu banyak digunakan
hahhh, good writing but a lot of plothole like is it just to use chakra paper to check affinity because what i know swift release is come from lightning+wind affinity and many more plotholes
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If you want a story that makes sense leave. one moment it says naruto have kage level chakra then the Next it says he has jonin level. also even though naruto has sage body he still needs the summons locations to become a sage. Mc also Unlocks his sharingan by just pushing chakra In his eyes( not activate he unlocks it) and its never explained how. this is just a bit i got from the first 5 chapters so read this if you arnt going to pay attention to it.
The few chapters, The grammar was a little whacky, And some word's are missing, But eventually it gets better so good job, Your updates in chapters are very fast, But that will affect your grammar mistakes, So i recommend atleast slowing it down, The MC itself is pretty nice, I enjoy reading this so far
"just like in canon" I can't count the number of time I read these word he don't lie when he say he's lazy Naruto is overpowered but nothing change in the story. no butterfly effect it's really the original story with a side story of Naruto getting stronger
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Good novel. I hope this novel has many readers and I also hope that the novelist can write until the last chapter or finish. ....................................................................................................................................
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awesome i love it so much.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................goodjob[img=merekomendasikan][img=merekomendasikan][img=merekomendasikan]
Nothing really changes from the cannon except the mc is kage level already and copy jutsu but not gonna use them. The mc power is getting stronger each day but not plan to use them to keep the timeline the same. So yeah, it felt like reading or watching the cannon story.
Novel yang menarik bagiku karena rata" Reinkarnator akan selalu berusaha mengubah semua hal yang akan terjadi namun disini MC tidak terlalu banyak mengubah jalan cerita. Sedikit kurang pada novel ini pada penggunaan kata saja seperti kata "saat" Yang terlalu banyak digunakan
hahhh, good writing but a lot of plothole like is it just to use chakra paper to check affinity because what i know swift release is come from lightning+wind affinity and many more plotholes
👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿
If you want a story that makes sense leave. one moment it says naruto have kage level chakra then the Next it says he has jonin level. also even though naruto has sage body he still needs the summons locations to become a sage. Mc also Unlocks his sharingan by just pushing chakra In his eyes( not activate he unlocks it) and its never explained how. this is just a bit i got from the first 5 chapters so read this if you arnt going to pay attention to it.
The few chapters, The grammar was a little whacky, And some word's are missing, But eventually it gets better so good job, Your updates in chapters are very fast, But that will affect your grammar mistakes, So i recommend atleast slowing it down, The MC itself is pretty nice, I enjoy reading this so far
"just like in canon" I can't count the number of time I read these word he don't lie when he say he's lazy Naruto is overpowered but nothing change in the story. no butterfly effect it's really the original story with a side story of Naruto getting stronger
good good good good good good good good good ...,.... . . . . ... . . .. . .. . . . .good good good good good good good good good good good
Good novel. I hope this novel has many readers and I also hope that the novelist can write until the last chapter or finish. ....................................................................................................................................
more please more respect for you buddy great story awesome more please more respect for you buddy great story awesome more please more respect for you buddy great story awesome
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
gak kreatif persis Canon dengan bumbu isekai 25