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4.67
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rayos estoy esperando con ansias a ver que escribe el autor pero cuando mas pasan los dias las esperenza que lo sigas se esta esfumando solo espero que lo siga autor-san
Lol Some dude on YouTube seems to be posting an audio book version of this anyway this has nothing to do with the review just thought it was funny and wanted to share anyway. it's pretty good I wish the author would post most often but it's understandable. the characters are good. the world building is alright for chapter 10 pretty good ⭐⭐⭐⭐
This is great love the storyline 🤩. Will you be posting on a regular schedule? aàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaqqqqaaaaaqqqqwqqwqwwwwwwfjdfkgfdghjgfgdfggfhjddgjjgffhjfdfhgfhjjvvfghjhggggggggghhhhhhhggggggvgggghghh
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me gusta la historia la verdad espero con ansias lo que escribiras lo unico malo es que no actualizas muy seguido esta historia ya que tienes otras obras pero de resto un placer seguir leyendo tu historias
What if mikoto cheated on fugaku with minato and because of that giyu got blue eyes and a natural water affinity and sasuke got a natural lightning affinity.
The story has a very original idea and it's really fun to follow the reactions of the protagonist and the characters around him, so far the only problem is the author with his publication of chapters
me gustado bastente la historia espero que sigas lansando mas capitulo gracia pore escribir ....................................................................
This series was up on qidian. Despite having the system mechanics, it doesn't take up the story. The breathing style and chakra setting mesh well together. I hope to see more chapters soon.
rayos estoy esperando con ansias a ver que escribe el autor pero cuando mas pasan los dias las esperenza que lo sigas se esta esfumando solo espero que lo siga autor-san
Lol Some dude on YouTube seems to be posting an audio book version of this anyway this has nothing to do with the review just thought it was funny and wanted to share anyway. it's pretty good I wish the author would post most often but it's understandable. the characters are good. the world building is alright for chapter 10 pretty good ⭐⭐⭐⭐
This is great love the storyline 🤩. Will you be posting on a regular schedule? aàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaqqqqaaaaaqqqqwqqwqwwwwwwfjdfkgfdghjgfgdfggfhjddgjjgffhjfdfhgfhjjvvfghjhggggggggghhhhhhhggggggvgggghghh
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me gusta la historia la verdad espero con ansias lo que escribiras lo unico malo es que no actualizas muy seguido esta historia ya que tienes otras obras pero de resto un placer seguir leyendo tu historias
What if mikoto cheated on fugaku with minato and because of that giyu got blue eyes and a natural water affinity and sasuke got a natural lightning affinity.
The story has a very original idea and it's really fun to follow the reactions of the protagonist and the characters around him, so far the only problem is the author with his publication of chapters
me gustado bastente la historia espero que sigas lansando mas capitulo gracia pore escribir ....................................................................
This series was up on qidian. Despite having the system mechanics, it doesn't take up the story. The breathing style and chakra setting mesh well together. I hope to see more chapters soon.
it has a good quality, the only problem is the updating speed