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I loved this book I cried chapter 61 through 69 I was so happy when they got back together
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A rate of 5 is well deserved for this storyline. Rated R for readers 18y/o and above. All emotions are well detailed, the suspense, mystery, most of all the unconditional love for every couple and their true friendships til they grow.. I love the ending, justice is serve for the ML & FL. 🥰😍
it's amazing book everyone would try reading if you are interested in novels
Finally finished reading it. One of the best-underrated books here in webnovel. Keep writing this kind of story author!
I love it, just some grammar problems. Also, I don't understand the main character: in the begening of the novel, she apeared as the bad play girl, now, I mean, I am still in chapter 21, she is sensitive, and more like a cry baby, she wants to protect Jaydan even thought she didn't protect herself. She is complecated. But in general, it's good!
Hello dear readers! Jayden and Peggy's love story will continue soon... As Jayden struggled with his mental disorder, Peggy tried her best to find the man who was responsible for her daughter's death. Can they still find comfort with each other? Will she be able to understand her husband's alternate identities or it would be the start of the couple's uncertainty towards each other? Let us all find out this coming October 1st... ❤❤❤
great story I just love the all characters and the plot is also very strong ...........................💓💓💓💓💓💓👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄
The story is promising and unique..but I just want to rant here..the story became complicated as far as i know..the enemy keep coming back and ofc with plot twist..the chapter jump around between side story and main story..i prefer author put side story at the end of the main story..I know that doesn’t matter because you can skip the side story, but I think more better if side story included at the end..love the ML improvement tho..but I still worry with author plot twist..HAHAHAHA.. for FL, I pity her. She going through so much and her suffering not end yet..I hope author make the happiest ending for her..poor girl
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The story is great, I really enjoy it, but I just want a bit of spoiler, will ML soon breakup with FL, bcs I don't want that, I don't know why I have a feeling he'll hurt her.
let's say I have a weak heart and can't take the time skip lol I ran away after that but it was good for chap1-44 I'm a coward can't take heartbreaks
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Yo be honest the Fl screams DADDY ISSUES...for the first part I thought its gonna be a toxic one, but I like the character development of both the characters.
A bit late but as promised, here's the character illustration of Jayden. Our couple's son, Caden will be uploaded soon. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Please read their story! Enjoy!
Wow this is gonna be good. Read a gee chapters and I’m hooked. Can’t wait to see where it leads is to. Characters are very well writen. And it keeps me wanting to beng read it. Thank God I work from home and can read all day😂😂😂
It's well written. The world development is pretty good. It has a lot of promise. I guess I'm just not really into male leads that that aggressively and sexually pursue the female lead even though she has already expressed interest in ending the relationship. just not really into the whole non-consent thing.
Shameless Review lol but I just want to share with you the character illustration of Peggy. I will be uploading Jayden by next month. Click like or send me a heart if you like Peggy. ❤️
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this novel is interesting and worth my time, even though there are some stressing chaps, still looking forward how this will end.. thank you author for this effort in writing this novel (even though it is not finished yet, still thank you)...
i got nothing a lot to say.. this is really an intriguing book👀... I am looking forward for upcoming chapters✨.. ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ Fightin' Author💪💪💪💪💪
Hello dear readers, only 36 chapters left and Jayden and Peggy will be saying goodbye. 😭But don't be sad, coming up next is Caden and Alira's love story. As thanks for your support with my first book in webnovel, I would like to share the AI-generated visual of Alira Smith Wilson, the crown princess of Flousia. Caden's visual will be up soon 🥰🥰
Spoiler de révélation I loved this book I cried chapter 61 through 69 I was so happy when they got back together
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
A rate of 5 is well deserved for this storyline. Rated R for readers 18y/o and above. All emotions are well detailed, the suspense, mystery, most of all the unconditional love for every couple and their true friendships til they grow.. I love the ending, justice is serve for the ML & FL. 🥰😍
it's amazing book everyone would try reading if you are interested in novels
Finally finished reading it. One of the best-underrated books here in webnovel. Keep writing this kind of story author!
I love it, just some grammar problems. Also, I don't understand the main character: in the begening of the novel, she apeared as the bad play girl, now, I mean, I am still in chapter 21, she is sensitive, and more like a cry baby, she wants to protect Jaydan even thought she didn't protect herself. She is complecated. But in general, it's good!
Hello dear readers! Jayden and Peggy's love story will continue soon... As Jayden struggled with his mental disorder, Peggy tried her best to find the man who was responsible for her daughter's death. Can they still find comfort with each other? Will she be able to understand her husband's alternate identities or it would be the start of the couple's uncertainty towards each other? Let us all find out this coming October 1st... ❤❤❤
great story I just love the all characters and the plot is also very strong ...........................💓💓💓💓💓💓👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄👄
The story is promising and unique..but I just want to rant here..the story became complicated as far as i know..the enemy keep coming back and ofc with plot twist..the chapter jump around between side story and main story..i prefer author put side story at the end of the main story..I know that doesn’t matter because you can skip the side story, but I think more better if side story included at the end..love the ML improvement tho..but I still worry with author plot twist..HAHAHAHA.. for FL, I pity her. She going through so much and her suffering not end yet..I hope author make the happiest ending for her..poor girl
Spoiler de révélation The story is great, I really enjoy it, but I just want a bit of spoiler, will ML soon breakup with FL, bcs I don't want that, I don't know why I have a feeling he'll hurt her.
let's say I have a weak heart and can't take the time skip lol I ran away after that but it was good for chap1-44 I'm a coward can't take heartbreaks
udhdvdvddbd hi JJ dbdkdudbdkrgd in dbdidbd in dbdidvisbdudbs oh dvd oh dviddgdusbdihdd in iebddbdidbd in dvdidhdjbddjdbdjdbdidbdjdbdudhdbdjjdidn
❤️❤️😭😭😭😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️😔❤️👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑😭😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑
Yo be honest the Fl screams DADDY ISSUES...for the first part I thought its gonna be a toxic one, but I like the character development of both the characters.
A bit late but as promised, here's the character illustration of Jayden. Our couple's son, Caden will be uploaded soon. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Please read their story! Enjoy!
Wow this is gonna be good. Read a gee chapters and I’m hooked. Can’t wait to see where it leads is to. Characters are very well writen. And it keeps me wanting to beng read it. Thank God I work from home and can read all day😂😂😂
It's well written. The world development is pretty good. It has a lot of promise. I guess I'm just not really into male leads that that aggressively and sexually pursue the female lead even though she has already expressed interest in ending the relationship. just not really into the whole non-consent thing.
Shameless Review lol but I just want to share with you the character illustration of Peggy. I will be uploading Jayden by next month. Click like or send me a heart if you like Peggy. ❤️
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this novel is interesting and worth my time, even though there are some stressing chaps, still looking forward how this will end.. thank you author for this effort in writing this novel (even though it is not finished yet, still thank you)...
i got nothing a lot to say.. this is really an intriguing book👀... I am looking forward for upcoming chapters✨.. ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ Fightin' Author💪💪💪💪💪
Hello dear readers, only 36 chapters left and Jayden and Peggy will be saying goodbye. 😭But don't be sad, coming up next is Caden and Alira's love story. As thanks for your support with my first book in webnovel, I would like to share the AI-generated visual of Alira Smith Wilson, the crown princess of Flousia. Caden's visual will be up soon 🥰🥰
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