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The Secret of the Young Man named Ellis

Fantasy 22 Chapitres 19.1K Affichage
Auteur: Jeanne_Marcus

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Synopsis

The young man, Teivel C. Ellis, is the second son of the prestigious family of healers in the modern magical world. He is young but a capable healer, the only problem is his weak attitude causing him lots of traumas and pain. He then transferred to the prestigious school named Stofford Academy and have met his old friend Orion. Will his life change for the better or is it another hell?

PS. I am starting to make more decent cover, in this case we have our beloved Arnold Lukes, can you picture him blush at Teivel's teasing? Fufufu.

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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zd4zaas

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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Twilight_Rose

I like the style of writing of Jeanne_Marcus. I also commend the character development, by the way, I know the title has 'Ellis' in it but I can't tell who is the real protagonist. Can you at least give him a chapter on his own point of view? Well, I'll continue reading it as long as it's interesting.

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Twilight_Rose

Rararararararararararara-rawr!!!!! Teivel is so beautiful, so cool, but Arnold is good too. I really am waiting for updates everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Twilight_Rose

Oh my goodness, another fight scene, I feel like I am starting to see the flags for the main arc, Ice versus Fire and it ends with the both of them half-dead. In the end it was just a joke from their superior, if I am to have someone like that in my job I'll quit already, hahahah.

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Twilight_Rose

It has been quiet for a while. I thought you would have dropped this story already. I am glad that it is still continuing, I want to know the reality of this world lol

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Alciel_von_Tepes

Oh, this is quite a good find. I am usually reading at wattpad but there are really good readings here huh. It is pretty good of a mystery-fantasy which I really like. Good work!!!

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ScarletPhantom_107

SO HEY!!! How ca you be so cruel and create a character that just literally appears to die!!! I pity Emma. At least give her a proper reason for her death and why she died. I want to know what is the reason why her whole family is massacred too!!! Please update quicker!!!

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ScarletPhantom_107

I like how I thought that Teivel is the Emperor and he is just pretending to be dead but there really is an emperor different than Teivel. I want to unveil the identity of the emperor. The characters are also good, especially Arnold, I liked hiss reactions when being teased by Teivel. Overall, can you make a proper cover though? It feels like your cover is rushed or something... anyway, I'm rooting for you. I want to read more of this.

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