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i like authors who can spell i like authors who have a general grasp of the english language i like authors who arent mentally challenged what a great author 3/3
Worth the Read! Slow start but is picking up speed. As an author myself, I can see the building and placement for the future of the story. Like the MC, the author is building a foundation for a long Webnovel. I hope to see more chapters and more speedy updates!
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It's only logical that a strong cultivator should be affiliated with a force that gives him resources, men, techniques. Relying on pure luck is stupid.
A kingdom bulding story in a cultivation world context ? A polygamous guy who will spread his genius genes of cultivation (future genius because yes intelligence is a form of genius) ? Where is the author of this story so that I can call him grandpa ?!
Five stars in every category because I strive for that level of authorship. The Dao of Storytelling is my goal. I plan to update at least one chapter a day. I plan to upload more on my days off of work, but I want quality of quantity. The length of my chapters varies, but I will not post anything under 2,000 words. There are very few grammatical errors and hopefully no misspellings. Paragraph comments with corrections are welcome. The development isn't the typical fast cultivation road. I plan to write more detail and hopefully bring my characters to life in the story. First, though, there is an R-18 and Polgamy tag. Those are just elements that make up the whole story. Not a harem seeker or a sex-addicted MC. No underage chicks and no legal lolis. The world background will become more expansive as the story evolves. Don't expect many info dumps as I like to tell the story instead of blatantly revealing the goal. I.e., "This is a kingdom-building journey" vs. " To return to the height of our ancestors, we will need an army." As for my MC, he has no cheats. He's born as a young master of a fallen clan. Yet, he maintains his maturity and the woes of his past life. He never wanted to reincarnate but comes to value his life and fights to succeed in his current life where he failed in the past. Well, that's it for now.
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i like authors who can spell i like authors who have a general grasp of the english language i like authors who arent mentally challenged what a great author 3/3
Worth the Read! Slow start but is picking up speed. As an author myself, I can see the building and placement for the future of the story. Like the MC, the author is building a foundation for a long Webnovel. I hope to see more chapters and more speedy updates!
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooreee
It's only logical that a strong cultivator should be affiliated with a force that gives him resources, men, techniques. Relying on pure luck is stupid.
A kingdom bulding story in a cultivation world context ? A polygamous guy who will spread his genius genes of cultivation (future genius because yes intelligence is a form of genius) ? Where is the author of this story so that I can call him grandpa ?!
Five stars in every category because I strive for that level of authorship. The Dao of Storytelling is my goal. I plan to update at least one chapter a day. I plan to upload more on my days off of work, but I want quality of quantity. The length of my chapters varies, but I will not post anything under 2,000 words. There are very few grammatical errors and hopefully no misspellings. Paragraph comments with corrections are welcome. The development isn't the typical fast cultivation road. I plan to write more detail and hopefully bring my characters to life in the story. First, though, there is an R-18 and Polgamy tag. Those are just elements that make up the whole story. Not a harem seeker or a sex-addicted MC. No underage chicks and no legal lolis. The world background will become more expansive as the story evolves. Don't expect many info dumps as I like to tell the story instead of blatantly revealing the goal. I.e., "This is a kingdom-building journey" vs. " To return to the height of our ancestors, we will need an army." As for my MC, he has no cheats. He's born as a young master of a fallen clan. Yet, he maintains his maturity and the woes of his past life. He never wanted to reincarnate but comes to value his life and fights to succeed in his current life where he failed in the past. Well, that's it for now.
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