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I love diving into these stories to explore new ideas and viewpoints. Not to just re-watch what I already know. This was a complete waste of time. I was excited to read an MC with ghost rider power but what I got was a Luffy simp😔
That got disappointing really fast you are just using the template of original one piece and adding your mc's dialogue to make things boring you made him join luffy clue. The one piece world is full of criminals that he can hunt to be stronger but you made a ghost rider the spirit of vengeance into the to clean up their masses
it's just a fuc*ing trash don't ever read this it all every trashy thing a novel can have it's just purely trash 🗑️🗑️🗑️ just fuc*ing trash
The mc is insanely powerful at start and still joined luffy's crew it is like having a 21 year old national football player in your kinder garden team I stopped reading when he revived a dead person It just removes the risk factor of a adventure story
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I was drawn in by the synopsis and it ended up being quite disappointing... ..............................................................................
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most of these 5 stars are fake guys, don't be fooled by the rating the story is very bland like food without salt. Just imagine the story is the same as the original except added some dialogue
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This fanfic is great so far , keep up the good work and also add Yamato . This fanfic is great so far , keep up the good work and also add Yamato .
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Betrayed mc?. very unoriginal, Disappointed. I expected alot From this, seeing it's a Ghost Rider Related. But I Only Got Disappoinment. sigh
Writing Quality: (4/5) Easy to read with little to no issue with the writing structure itself. Not perfect but still leagues ahead of many other novels. Stability of Updates: (5/5) I started reading when there were already a nice selection of chapters available, so I didn't really run into any update issues. Story Development: (1/5) Honestly, just read the One Piece manga and you'll know exactly what happens. I read up to ch 18 and nothing significant changes in the story. I mean, the MC does do some things that SHOULD make a big impact buuuut... nothing. Character Design: (1/5) The only true OC character is the MC and he feels like any other MC from the mass of other generic fanfics. I get that some events take place that make you want to care about him, but he just feels very.... boring, bland, edge lord almost in a way. Point is it's difficult to truly take him serious after a point. World Background: (5/5) I feel this one is kind of a cheap/cheat five out of five. While the novel doesn't feel like it fails at any world background connecting stuff, it also doesn't feel like it goes out of its way to actually try either. Summary: This feels like any other generic One Piece fanfic out there. The only thing the novel does is add in the MC to the One Piece crew and have the surrounding cast react to the MC's abilities or fall in love with him; all whilst following the original One Piece story line. To be fair though, the author does state that this novel is a wish fulfillment piece of work. Good overall for a first step into writing a fanfic; you got great writing punctuation and clean writing, so work and build off of that. As far as your next novels (or the next world for the MC if you want to go that route), just be more creative and be more willing to expand beyond the pre-established narrative of the source material. Be more courageous with just throwing your MC out there or something like that. Anyways, good job on your novel so far but I'll be waiting till it improves somewhat.
Most of those 5 Star Reviews is mostly Fake. Story sucks your Cliche Cringey Mc. Claims to make the character a solo adventure then proceeds to make him join a pirate group when he is the Ghost Rider.
I hope you come back soon for this story is very good, the plot is amazing, the protagonist's personality and his development is great, the harem or for now Nami found it very interesting I hope it stays that way, I recommend it a lot, you won't be sorry
Story, its one piece - so it's a 5. main character- I love a heartless, but still has emotions like love, mc so this is a 5. romance/harem is my type of genre when reading a ff, so another 5, overall a 5. keep it up and please dont drop this
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My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined
Complete disappointment after he joined the straw hats , he even told them his secret , who does that? and after being betrayed by a gold digger he goes into a relationship with nami and uses an op ability that costs him to revive her mother 😑
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😑 Author promised a Mc that will be more like a solo person without other but then till the latest chapter he is just like any Trash Mc with luffy since ch 6. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😔😑😑🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
That got disappointing really fast you are just using the template of original one piece and adding your mc's dialogue to make things boring you made him join luffy clue. The one piece world is full of criminals that he can hunt to be stronger but you made a ghost rider the spirit of vengeance into the to clean up their masses
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Please more chapterss i need it hehe For my boredom and i like it if the mc is not always crazy or get insaned Good novel please keep up the good work
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I love diving into these stories to explore new ideas and viewpoints. Not to just re-watch what I already know. This was a complete waste of time. I was excited to read an MC with ghost rider power but what I got was a Luffy simp😔
That got disappointing really fast you are just using the template of original one piece and adding your mc's dialogue to make things boring you made him join luffy clue. The one piece world is full of criminals that he can hunt to be stronger but you made a ghost rider the spirit of vengeance into the to clean up their masses
it's just a fuc*ing trash don't ever read this it all every trashy thing a novel can have it's just purely trash 🗑️🗑️🗑️ just fuc*ing trash
The mc is insanely powerful at start and still joined luffy's crew it is like having a 21 year old national football player in your kinder garden team I stopped reading when he revived a dead person It just removes the risk factor of a adventure story
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I was drawn in by the synopsis and it ended up being quite disappointing... ..............................................................................
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most of these 5 stars are fake guys, don't be fooled by the rating the story is very bland like food without salt. Just imagine the story is the same as the original except added some dialogue
bootlick through the multiverse bootlick through the multiverse bootlick through the multiverse bootlick through the multiverse bootlick through the multiverse
This fanfic is great so far , keep up the good work and also add Yamato . This fanfic is great so far , keep up the good work and also add Yamato .
###€€€%Good story ,very enjoyable%€€€### ###€€€%Good story ,very enjoyable%€€€### ###€€€%Good story ,very enjoyable%€€€### ###€€€%Good story ,very enjoyable%€€€###
Betrayed mc?. very unoriginal, Disappointed. I expected alot From this, seeing it's a Ghost Rider Related. But I Only Got Disappoinment. sigh
Writing Quality: (4/5) Easy to read with little to no issue with the writing structure itself. Not perfect but still leagues ahead of many other novels. Stability of Updates: (5/5) I started reading when there were already a nice selection of chapters available, so I didn't really run into any update issues. Story Development: (1/5) Honestly, just read the One Piece manga and you'll know exactly what happens. I read up to ch 18 and nothing significant changes in the story. I mean, the MC does do some things that SHOULD make a big impact buuuut... nothing. Character Design: (1/5) The only true OC character is the MC and he feels like any other MC from the mass of other generic fanfics. I get that some events take place that make you want to care about him, but he just feels very.... boring, bland, edge lord almost in a way. Point is it's difficult to truly take him serious after a point. World Background: (5/5) I feel this one is kind of a cheap/cheat five out of five. While the novel doesn't feel like it fails at any world background connecting stuff, it also doesn't feel like it goes out of its way to actually try either. Summary: This feels like any other generic One Piece fanfic out there. The only thing the novel does is add in the MC to the One Piece crew and have the surrounding cast react to the MC's abilities or fall in love with him; all whilst following the original One Piece story line. To be fair though, the author does state that this novel is a wish fulfillment piece of work. Good overall for a first step into writing a fanfic; you got great writing punctuation and clean writing, so work and build off of that. As far as your next novels (or the next world for the MC if you want to go that route), just be more creative and be more willing to expand beyond the pre-established narrative of the source material. Be more courageous with just throwing your MC out there or something like that. Anyways, good job on your novel so far but I'll be waiting till it improves somewhat.
Most of those 5 Star Reviews is mostly Fake. Story sucks your Cliche Cringey Mc. Claims to make the character a solo adventure then proceeds to make him join a pirate group when he is the Ghost Rider.
I hope you come back soon for this story is very good, the plot is amazing, the protagonist's personality and his development is great, the harem or for now Nami found it very interesting I hope it stays that way, I recommend it a lot, you won't be sorry
Story, its one piece - so it's a 5. main character- I love a heartless, but still has emotions like love, mc so this is a 5. romance/harem is my type of genre when reading a ff, so another 5, overall a 5. keep it up and please dont drop this
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My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined
Complete disappointment after he joined the straw hats , he even told them his secret , who does that? and after being betrayed by a gold digger he goes into a relationship with nami and uses an op ability that costs him to revive her mother 😑
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😑 Author promised a Mc that will be more like a solo person without other but then till the latest chapter he is just like any Trash Mc with luffy since ch 6. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😔😑😑🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
That got disappointing really fast you are just using the template of original one piece and adding your mc's dialogue to make things boring you made him join luffy clue. The one piece world is full of criminals that he can hunt to be stronger but you made a ghost rider the spirit of vengeance into the to clean up their masses
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It is good ☺️🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 🙂.
Please more chapterss i need it hehe For my boredom and i like it if the mc is not always crazy or get insaned Good novel please keep up the good work
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