Reviews of DC: The Astrea by CryingJoker - Webnovel

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3ddy

don't mind i am just here waiting for an update

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Pclerk

The grammar, spelling, and syntax have some errors here in there. None of it is bad and is very easy to understand. Updates do occur but not in great number so it becomes something just to check on every so often. The story has a terrible time with pacing. His company development etc happens way to fast and powers gained way to quickly. There needs to be some sort of explanation about his powers because it’s very confusing. Basically just gets what he wants??? All the characters are basic personalities and don’t seem to have much… for now (read all as of Aug 28, 2022). While we all know the world he is in, it doesn’t not to any degree go into any detail about the environment. It just feels like it was rushed and could definitely have more added in to fill in parts. Author should definitely continue but update and add on to previous chapters to make improvements.

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Sloppy_Milkshake

I knew they would drop this most authors are the same 😒………………… It was good though it would have been better if you had continued. I’ll still give 1 star cause I’m petty

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NJ_309003

Great fanfic mc is also great with brains and less super hero morels only problem is updated please upload more chapters bro👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Melshan

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TFH

Not bad, but the updates are 1500 or so words a month.... So this makes me hesitate whether to read this or not. So one can say that there is almost no progress. [img=exp]

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gilgamesh_heroking

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Alex_Boen

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Henrique_Paiao

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SirSuicideSurvivor

awesome FANFICTION comrade looking forward to more chapters.🥇🏆👍👌😁😎🥇🏆👍👌😁😎🥇🏆👍👌😁😎🥇🏆👍👌😁😎🥇🏆👍👌😁😎🥇🏆👍👌😁😎🥇🏆👍👌😁😎

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OddZilla

this is good.....why dont you make a marvel fanfic and the mc is son of odin his powers will be Od Laguna like this one?...well dont take it seriously if your busy....

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godie

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Sterky67

es una buena novela. típica en el sentido de un personaje un poco roto en la escala de poder pero al menos no es un santurron o un psicópata

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NPSC2377

I would like to present to you some female characters from the dc universe and if there are any recurring female characters that you have chosen, I apologize. A female character in the DC universe that I would like to propose to. linda park deedee marcy graves catwoman huntress batgirl supergirl powergirl galatea circe ivy harley lois paran hawkgirl giganta emerald empress saturn girl tala starsaphire volcana queenbee(young justice) livewire killerfrost cheetah zatanna wonderwoman stargirl vixen blackcanary ms.martian(young justice) artemis(young justice) starfire blackfire terra raven jinx rose superwoman cheshire(young justice) audrey talia maxima Darci Mason Roulette Morgaine le Fey

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El_sencillo_uwu

Muy buena bro pero si la subes mas seguido seria grandísimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes muchísimas gracias tus capítulos son los mejores

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HereticSmurf

Great fic, like the time you're taking to establish the setting and characters. ------------------------------------------------------------------

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ThoTslayer_10l

JUST READ IT F***NG READ IT NOW F**ERS[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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hlh987655321

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starking

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Henrique_Paiao

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Dragonfenixx

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Lord_Beliall

Конечно еще рант об этом говорить, но похоже на начало довольно хорошей истории. Есть парочка минусов с которыми надеюсь автор вскоре сможет справиться. Во многих произвведениях именно так, но это не значит, что это хорошо. А именно отсутствие диалогов. Диалоги как по мне очень важны и раскрывают ваших персонажей намного лучше чем просто описание как бы со стороны. Поэтому прошу больше диалогов и большую дитализацию разных сцен и персонажей. Не стесняйтесь описывать чувства персонажей, их действия и желания. Спасипо автору.

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Dragonfenixx

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_Who_

Fun story so far with a new ability from ROB. I like it so far. The mitochondria is the powerhouse of the cell The mitochondria is the powerhouse of the cell

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Afonso_Aaron

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Jordan_Fletcher_8918

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Azazel_70

don't drop. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . .