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This is a great book and concept!! Pls keep the story going I want more but it’s bin so long! I’m dying here! anyways this is indeed a book worth your time if you want to be left yearning for more….
I don't know why this isn't selected. It has a fun concept, and what's more? There isn't racism and nationalism like other novels. MC is quite a likeable guy and it is interesting.
I love how this book tells its story. i want it to be continued and not lost like many other good books that weren’t with the trend at the momeny so they were picked by whoever does that.
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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
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Love this hope it gets picked only read 20 chapters but if picked ill buy the whole thing🥰😍. ....................
just overall good things just needs more chapters but I don't want to rush you if you can't........................... .....................
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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I like this so far. I wonder if the mc is preparing the world for a galactic civilization or something, maybe he's even preparing the world for a magical technology era. I'm really looking forward to this 💕
What good and interesting story we have here... Definitely recommended to read.
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Surprisingly great read as of Chapter 25. We’ll have to see whether the author drops the ball or not in the future.
Haven't seen any mistakes with the translation quality so far, and you can't really review much for the stability of updates as most of the chapters were released on the same day (There are 25 chapters as of now). Story develops in a unique way though it some times is confusing. The character design is amazing and, delves into the characters personality, human nature and, point of view it isn't perfect but it is one of the charms the story. World background is where it suffers a bit but it doesn't hinder you from reading. Overall Review: So far flawless translation quality seemingly good update stability with a unique story board and excellent character design with okay world background.
The story is slow paced with lots of potential. The world building is only ok I guess. The story might not be for everyone as it is slowpaced.
This is very promising, one of the best books in this trial period. I really hope the editor’s pick this one. The plot is very interesting i look forward to seing where this leads to.
This is good. Extremely good, probably the bets in its batch. It has a slow pace, but that just beautifies the story and immerses the reader. The only issue(maybe) is the fact that i got confused of the location of the incarnation(oak tree). I will have to read again to be sure. Anyway, overall, it is top tier.....on par with Fantasy Simulator and Signing in at the Cold Palace.
This a super interesting novel with great potential ! The pace of the novel is neither slow nor fast its perfect. I hope this book gets picked up !
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This is a great book and concept!! Pls keep the story going I want more but it’s bin so long! I’m dying here! anyways this is indeed a book worth your time if you want to be left yearning for more….
I don't know why this isn't selected. It has a fun concept, and what's more? There isn't racism and nationalism like other novels. MC is quite a likeable guy and it is interesting.
I love how this book tells its story. i want it to be continued and not lost like many other good books that weren’t with the trend at the momeny so they were picked by whoever does that.
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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I really want to give power stones to this book it's really good so please let me give power stone................................................................ ..................................................................
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why did you not pick thiiiisss 😭😭 I really wanted to read more😢 .......................,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.
Love this hope it gets picked only read 20 chapters but if picked ill buy the whole thing🥰😍. ....................
just overall good things just needs more chapters but I don't want to rush you if you can't........................... .....................
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Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! —————————————————————— Hopfully it wil continue to get more chapther. ................................................................. ——————————————————————
good but can do better ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️💕♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I like this so far. I wonder if the mc is preparing the world for a galactic civilization or something, maybe he's even preparing the world for a magical technology era. I'm really looking forward to this 💕
What good and interesting story we have here... Definitely recommended to read.
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Surprisingly great read as of Chapter 25. We’ll have to see whether the author drops the ball or not in the future.
Haven't seen any mistakes with the translation quality so far, and you can't really review much for the stability of updates as most of the chapters were released on the same day (There are 25 chapters as of now). Story develops in a unique way though it some times is confusing. The character design is amazing and, delves into the characters personality, human nature and, point of view it isn't perfect but it is one of the charms the story. World background is where it suffers a bit but it doesn't hinder you from reading. Overall Review: So far flawless translation quality seemingly good update stability with a unique story board and excellent character design with okay world background.
The story is slow paced with lots of potential. The world building is only ok I guess. The story might not be for everyone as it is slowpaced.
This is very promising, one of the best books in this trial period. I really hope the editor’s pick this one. The plot is very interesting i look forward to seing where this leads to.
This is good. Extremely good, probably the bets in its batch. It has a slow pace, but that just beautifies the story and immerses the reader. The only issue(maybe) is the fact that i got confused of the location of the incarnation(oak tree). I will have to read again to be sure. Anyway, overall, it is top tier.....on par with Fantasy Simulator and Signing in at the Cold Palace.
This a super interesting novel with great potential ! The pace of the novel is neither slow nor fast its perfect. I hope this book gets picked up !
Good novels never get selected. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]