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this is honestly one of the best webnovels I have ever read, it seems as though the author poured their very lifeblood into it, thank you
The book was doing so well with the character development and everything but the recent chapters aren't good in comparison to how the book started. When Resh got his memory back, the change in character was too abrupt but understandable. But what is this sudden realisation and system messages of starting a new life. This is ridiculous. If you wanted to change the thought process of the character just do so with logic and good plot. But don't just bring those cliches of system giving them a notification about some random skills to start a new life. And change in mentality doesn't happen just because of few random system notifications. Seriously? I was expecting a lot from you, since I liked the book was progressing but seeing how the mc is behaving.... And the recent blunder of sleeping on a gryphon knowing very well that the humans were riding it a moment ago. Our very human mc goes straight on top of that animal without any regard for his tiny self that can be obliterated with a single scratch of the animal. Okay, I can understand that this is a mythical creature so he got excited and all and can somewhat be understandable. But that wasn't all the mc did. He fn slept on the creature. When I read it, it sounded so ridiculous. I moment I read it I knew where this story was going. He will be found by the humans who rode the gryphons, and some new story will start. :) . Even his earlier not so aware slime self which didn't have much brain power could process what should be done and what will bring danger. I just can't get it what the writer is thinking making such abrupt change in character and such disregard for life. 99% of the recent chapters are about him contemplating life and talking about this is gross or that is gross and about skill descriptions. I had so high expectations when I first started, now I am just disappointed.
Author here with a shameless review but also! Writing speed is slow I know but more chapters are available on other platforms as well! Royalroad, Webnovel of course, Wattpad, Neovel and Patreon!
Love the book one of the few devour and evolve novels I've read on any platform it has a great plot with amazing development of the main characters abilities
this is honestly one of the best webnovels I have ever read, it seems as though the author poured their very lifeblood into it, thank you
The book was doing so well with the character development and everything but the recent chapters aren't good in comparison to how the book started. When Resh got his memory back, the change in character was too abrupt but understandable. But what is this sudden realisation and system messages of starting a new life. This is ridiculous. If you wanted to change the thought process of the character just do so with logic and good plot. But don't just bring those cliches of system giving them a notification about some random skills to start a new life. And change in mentality doesn't happen just because of few random system notifications. Seriously? I was expecting a lot from you, since I liked the book was progressing but seeing how the mc is behaving.... And the recent blunder of sleeping on a gryphon knowing very well that the humans were riding it a moment ago. Our very human mc goes straight on top of that animal without any regard for his tiny self that can be obliterated with a single scratch of the animal. Okay, I can understand that this is a mythical creature so he got excited and all and can somewhat be understandable. But that wasn't all the mc did. He fn slept on the creature. When I read it, it sounded so ridiculous. I moment I read it I knew where this story was going. He will be found by the humans who rode the gryphons, and some new story will start. :) . Even his earlier not so aware slime self which didn't have much brain power could process what should be done and what will bring danger. I just can't get it what the writer is thinking making such abrupt change in character and such disregard for life. 99% of the recent chapters are about him contemplating life and talking about this is gross or that is gross and about skill descriptions. I had so high expectations when I first started, now I am just disappointed.
Author here with a shameless review but also! Writing speed is slow I know but more chapters are available on other platforms as well! Royalroad, Webnovel of course, Wattpad, Neovel and Patreon!
Love the book one of the few devour and evolve novels I've read on any platform it has a great plot with amazing development of the main characters abilities