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If I could give lower review I would. Bro starts to charge after like 2 ch. so 1 star
Couldn't read anything. there are no preview chapters. so I don't know if I want to read the story and sick around. you got to pay starting at chapter one. author forgets this is webnovels not e-books or Amazon books... =,(
If your wondering why the review only has two of the sections filled out that are not in the middle its because I didn’t read the story. The reason you ask. Well the first chapter of the actual story is locked and I like many others am not going to waste my coins and fast passes on a story I can’t preview. My advice would be to open some free chapters and let people get a feel for it before you start charging them.
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Hey Author, i think you have made a mistake and replaced actual story chapters With anunsment chapters. because right now there is a big time skip after the first chapter
Is this a fanfic? Why are all the chapters locked? . ........ ...... ....... ........ ......... ......
All the preview chapters are filled with begging for stones and coins to unlock the first chapter with any actual content. This author is obviously Being pushed up by the app if he can get so many positive Reviews with the novel in the state its in. He literall stated in the second chapter that he wont post anything if his precived level of appropriate support is not met. Entitled without proof of skill sir.
Honestly a pretty interesting story, flow might be a bit slow, but not too slow. For the grammar junkies this story should not be a problem to read either. Anyway just wanted to leave a good review to boost it up a bit considering it is more interesting than many others who seem popular for no reason.
I've only skimmed it because the story is vague and undescriptive so take this review with a grain of salt, the only reason i am even doing this review is because the author has seemed to confused inspiration and plagerisim, you see if i took the entire plot of the first 10 movies in the marvel universe then changed up some names, slapped it onto webnovel, then started to write a unique story nothing would change. and i saw in a comment that webnovel would remove any novels that plagerise, which is super weird becaue they themselves plagerise for example ED the rights to translate it were bought straight from the author on wuxiaworld yet here it is on this website with a "dropped" status i wonder why, if that's not good enough for you look at 60-80 percent of all the novels in the whats next section pretty much all of them are ripped from Chinese websites, can you guess what those Chinese websites do most of the time. also a side note you should probably stop making stories then immediately dropping it.
Just read the novel without reading the comments, form your own opinion on the novel. Its a good novel with good story, good characters and good plot. If you read it, you will like it.
Can you be specific on his actual personality? The synopsis was pretty vague. I’ll gve you five stars since it looks good
As soon I saw the summary I knew this was the kind of style I like where the main character inst a good person, i like when there evil and on the road to destruction
So far I haven't found anything wrong about the novel, in fact I kinda like reading it (or it must be due to me having the taste in this kind of genre.). the writing was so vivid that it made me immerse in the author's novel world. the mc had a great character design, too. the problem is the writing stability which is easy to fix so the author can rest assure.
I didn't read the story but I'm sus of something why is every review here level one and doesn't have more than movements I think Author-san is boosting but I really don't care as long as the story is good so is anyone here actually going to tell me if the story is good or no?
don't understand the story and no background information sorry but not a story for me ... .. . （╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\（╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\（╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\
An interested take on a reincarnation story, I'm amazed at how the author can update so frequently. If you can't stand waiting for chapters, give this story a read!
The cover made me think that the story is about a werewolf. but not the case. I really like the narration and the way the author describes the scenes. Amazing!
This is a solid novel! There is much detail put into the early years and you can really feel like you are taking the journey together with the protagonist. The author takes sweet time in developing the characters and paying heed to his relationships. Good job!
The story itself is pretty interesting, it keeps me want to continue reading it. Also, the fact that mc now lives as a demon and adapts to it makes a strong point of character development, It gets more interesting the longer you read it.
Well for a story plot, and world development this good. Have been reading a lot system stories lately, that I grew tired of it. Since am on vacation, I might as well read some Twilight. Thumbs up autho- san, am also adding this to my library.
Reviewing my first reading novel, awesome work author did. Especially the characters are unique, the world development start in a steady pace. The typos and errors are negligeable, so anyone interested in weak to strong twilight novel, this is good.
Wow, the baby part got my interesting piqued, as I continued to read more. Well for a fact, this novel is a hidden gem, though there are few typos and errors. Am keeping this in my library.
This is my first novel, as a newbie and a female in WN. I know it isn't my usual Barbie, but was a bit curious trying other aspects of novel and I must say am really impressed and I really enjoyed it.
Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeee. Novel, chapter one seems interesting, so I might as well click the second chapter.
my oh my, seems like another goofy reincarnation novel at first until, you read a bit deeper. Then you start feeling, the thrill and getting the hang of it. Am adding this to my colls
Great novel, the first chapter got me laughing and piqued, at the same time. At least this not, your usual system novel and such, if you are interested in reincarnation, action and interesting plot. Come on in.
Good. Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Thumbs up to a wonderful novel.
Wholesome novel, good story writing tho there are a few lame part, the novel still has a drive to push forward. Overall, this is a hidden gem, thumbs up author.
Good novel, though there are typos and errors, it doesn't cover the fact that the author put lots of thought, into writing the novel. Developing the world and it character, thumbs up author.
So, your sypnosis is good. It is worth reading because of how it really kinda summarizing the story. Plus, 28 chapters in a week? It is good on how consistent you are. Keep up and good luck on the contest.
Author supporting his own work, this is a novel that will be updated daily as you support my work. An action weak to strong, in a twilight twist, as the character develop in a world... which was not anything like the one he lived in. It was darker, bleaker and down right cruel, a demon child who are sworn destructor of humanity. But not only does he have to struggle with his upside down life, but he must also take advantage of his situation to grow in an existence known as "Pride Dracula."
If I could give lower review I would. Bro starts to charge after like 2 ch. so 1 star
Couldn't read anything. there are no preview chapters. so I don't know if I want to read the story and sick around. you got to pay starting at chapter one. author forgets this is webnovels not e-books or Amazon books... =,(
If your wondering why the review only has two of the sections filled out that are not in the middle its because I didn’t read the story. The reason you ask. Well the first chapter of the actual story is locked and I like many others am not going to waste my coins and fast passes on a story I can’t preview. My advice would be to open some free chapters and let people get a feel for it before you start charging them.
...................................................................... ........................................ ..........................
Hey Author, i think you have made a mistake and replaced actual story chapters With anunsment chapters. because right now there is a big time skip after the first chapter
Is this a fanfic? Why are all the chapters locked? . ........ ...... ....... ........ ......... ......
All the preview chapters are filled with begging for stones and coins to unlock the first chapter with any actual content. This author is obviously Being pushed up by the app if he can get so many positive Reviews with the novel in the state its in. He literall stated in the second chapter that he wont post anything if his precived level of appropriate support is not met. Entitled without proof of skill sir.
Honestly a pretty interesting story, flow might be a bit slow, but not too slow. For the grammar junkies this story should not be a problem to read either. Anyway just wanted to leave a good review to boost it up a bit considering it is more interesting than many others who seem popular for no reason.
I've only skimmed it because the story is vague and undescriptive so take this review with a grain of salt, the only reason i am even doing this review is because the author has seemed to confused inspiration and plagerisim, you see if i took the entire plot of the first 10 movies in the marvel universe then changed up some names, slapped it onto webnovel, then started to write a unique story nothing would change. and i saw in a comment that webnovel would remove any novels that plagerise, which is super weird becaue they themselves plagerise for example ED the rights to translate it were bought straight from the author on wuxiaworld yet here it is on this website with a "dropped" status i wonder why, if that's not good enough for you look at 60-80 percent of all the novels in the whats next section pretty much all of them are ripped from Chinese websites, can you guess what those Chinese websites do most of the time. also a side note you should probably stop making stories then immediately dropping it.
Just read the novel without reading the comments, form your own opinion on the novel. Its a good novel with good story, good characters and good plot. If you read it, you will like it.
Can you be specific on his actual personality? The synopsis was pretty vague. I’ll gve you five stars since it looks good
As soon I saw the summary I knew this was the kind of style I like where the main character inst a good person, i like when there evil and on the road to destruction
So far I haven't found anything wrong about the novel, in fact I kinda like reading it (or it must be due to me having the taste in this kind of genre.). the writing was so vivid that it made me immerse in the author's novel world. the mc had a great character design, too. the problem is the writing stability which is easy to fix so the author can rest assure.
I didn't read the story but I'm sus of something why is every review here level one and doesn't have more than movements I think Author-san is boosting but I really don't care as long as the story is good so is anyone here actually going to tell me if the story is good or no?
don't understand the story and no background information sorry but not a story for me ... .. . （╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\（╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\（╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\
An interested take on a reincarnation story, I'm amazed at how the author can update so frequently. If you can't stand waiting for chapters, give this story a read!
The cover made me think that the story is about a werewolf. but not the case. I really like the narration and the way the author describes the scenes. Amazing!
This is a solid novel! There is much detail put into the early years and you can really feel like you are taking the journey together with the protagonist. The author takes sweet time in developing the characters and paying heed to his relationships. Good job!
The story itself is pretty interesting, it keeps me want to continue reading it. Also, the fact that mc now lives as a demon and adapts to it makes a strong point of character development, It gets more interesting the longer you read it.
Well for a story plot, and world development this good. Have been reading a lot system stories lately, that I grew tired of it. Since am on vacation, I might as well read some Twilight. Thumbs up autho- san, am also adding this to my library.
Reviewing my first reading novel, awesome work author did. Especially the characters are unique, the world development start in a steady pace. The typos and errors are negligeable, so anyone interested in weak to strong twilight novel, this is good.
Wow, the baby part got my interesting piqued, as I continued to read more. Well for a fact, this novel is a hidden gem, though there are few typos and errors. Am keeping this in my library.
This is my first novel, as a newbie and a female in WN. I know it isn't my usual Barbie, but was a bit curious trying other aspects of novel and I must say am really impressed and I really enjoyed it.
Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeee. Novel, chapter one seems interesting, so I might as well click the second chapter.
my oh my, seems like another goofy reincarnation novel at first until, you read a bit deeper. Then you start feeling, the thrill and getting the hang of it. Am adding this to my colls
Great novel, the first chapter got me laughing and piqued, at the same time. At least this not, your usual system novel and such, if you are interested in reincarnation, action and interesting plot. Come on in.
Good. Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Thumbs up to a wonderful novel.
Wholesome novel, good story writing tho there are a few lame part, the novel still has a drive to push forward. Overall, this is a hidden gem, thumbs up author.
Good novel, though there are typos and errors, it doesn't cover the fact that the author put lots of thought, into writing the novel. Developing the world and it character, thumbs up author.
So, your sypnosis is good. It is worth reading because of how it really kinda summarizing the story. Plus, 28 chapters in a week? It is good on how consistent you are. Keep up and good luck on the contest.
Author supporting his own work, this is a novel that will be updated daily as you support my work. An action weak to strong, in a twilight twist, as the character develop in a world... which was not anything like the one he lived in. It was darker, bleaker and down right cruel, a demon child who are sworn destructor of humanity. But not only does he have to struggle with his upside down life, but he must also take advantage of his situation to grow in an existence known as "Pride Dracula."