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Écrire un avisFirst of all, the gramatical errors are everywhere. Normally I don't give this too much importance, but here there are so many errors that quite a few times I can't make sense if what is written. Then, storywise there is no plot. Period. Not even a little. The mc jumps around between three worlds (Naruto, Bleach, Fairy Tail) and simply fools around doing ridiculous things that have nothing to do with the plot, like going on a picnic with some characters. As for the personality of the mc, one can say that he is a mixture of crazy and fool. Well, this is actually a bit dificult to guess because the reader can't know for sure if the constant amount of nonsense that the mc says is the result of a bad translation or not. Honestly, I'd say it's 50/50. But anyway, he definitely has a very childish actitude and some times it is very hard seeing any logic in his actions. But what annoys me the most is that the author added the tags of 'Hentai' and 'R18' to the description of the story and this is not only a lie, but it is actually the opposite of how it really is. There is nothing mature related and everything has a very naive and childish vive to it.
welcome autor . **********************************************************************************************************************************************************
Lol. This is a translation of Russian fanfiction. He was good. Good luck with the translation. Молодец))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimosEvita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.
this is machine-translated and it definitely needs to be edited it hurts just to read it the premise is good and I'm sure the story is even good if it was properly edited cuz that's it stands now it sucks so for everybody involved it's best if you edit edit edit edit edit edit
alright at first i thought it would be a good novel as it had an interesting start but eventually like every problem that comes usually it came, too much sweet words and too emotional for someone already reincarnated twice
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Spoiler de révélationGreat translation and FF [img=recommend][img=update] just a question, What is the raw name? Just asking 😊.................................
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I declare as a Russian person. I RESPECT YOU. The fan fiction is good and many will like it, so keep translating. And he also warned in the description that he is not the owner of this fanfiction.
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First of all, the gramatical errors are everywhere. Normally I don't give this too much importance, but here there are so many errors that quite a few times I can't make sense if what is written. Then, storywise there is no plot. Period. Not even a little. The mc jumps around between three worlds (Naruto, Bleach, Fairy Tail) and simply fools around doing ridiculous things that have nothing to do with the plot, like going on a picnic with some characters. As for the personality of the mc, one can say that he is a mixture of crazy and fool. Well, this is actually a bit dificult to guess because the reader can't know for sure if the constant amount of nonsense that the mc says is the result of a bad translation or not. Honestly, I'd say it's 50/50. But anyway, he definitely has a very childish actitude and some times it is very hard seeing any logic in his actions. But what annoys me the most is that the author added the tags of 'Hentai' and 'R18' to the description of the story and this is not only a lie, but it is actually the opposite of how it really is. There is nothing mature related and everything has a very naive and childish vive to it.
welcome autor . **********************************************************************************************************************************************************
Lol. This is a translation of Russian fanfiction. He was good. Good luck with the translation. Молодец))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimosEvita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.Evita los clones de sombra en los actos íntimos.
this is machine-translated and it definitely needs to be edited it hurts just to read it the premise is good and I'm sure the story is even good if it was properly edited cuz that's it stands now it sucks so for everybody involved it's best if you edit edit edit edit edit edit
alright at first i thought it would be a good novel as it had an interesting start but eventually like every problem that comes usually it came, too much sweet words and too emotional for someone already reincarnated twice
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Spoiler de révélationGreat translation and FF [img=recommend][img=update] just a question, What is the raw name? Just asking 😊.................................
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I declare as a Russian person. I RESPECT YOU. The fan fiction is good and many will like it, so keep translating. And he also warned in the description that he is not the owner of this fanfiction.
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