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Wow! One interesting story to hangout! Amazing! 😁😁 Well done Author. keep up the good work. I support you with full force 💪💪💪🥰🥰 I wait for every update ..
i really like the style of your writing. all mysterious and addictive! story is quite nice. the best thing is you know how to not bore your readers out. Good work! keep going👍🏼❤❤
wow wow wow. I'm so in love with this book. I'm highly recommeding this book. The author did a great job here. Please post more chapters. I'm waiting 😍😍
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this is just getting better and better, I can't even imagine what's going to happen next, Liam's character is so mysterious, Andria's character is so powerful, the novel is so beautifully written.
The book is exceptional. If you are looking for a good fantasy, then go for this book. The plot is intriguing and flow of writing is good. I feel synopsis do no good for the amazing plot inside.
When I read the synopsis, I did not expect much in the story, but after reading a few chapters, I was intrigued by the development and Andro turning out to be a woman, well that never crossed my mind. Interesting story author.
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I didn't expect such a great book after reading the synopsis, The writer makes it feel like such a movie, I was surprised its such a amazing high fantasy novel, bravo author!!
good descriptions , good, characters, great writing. it's intriguing from the description to the beginning and through. the idea is good and was executed and written well
honestly, the synopsis threw me off because I was not expecting much. to my surprise I found myself in an awesome movie. I literally enjoyed each chapter and how the characters expressed themselves. kudos to the author
Hm!!. An absolute banging start I could say. Well done leaving an intriguing mist on your synopsis that's what lead me to click on your chapters. It's really a new experience for me and this type of story should exist more!!. Good job man... overall it's an excellent book. Thank you author for this work!!!
Of the chapters, I've read, I get a witcher feal from this story. The way the characters feel and interact with each other is fascinating. I say this because it takes me back to a simple fantasy world that has an amazing amount of room for growth.
If you enjoy high fantasy this is the novel for you. An expansive world with realistic and relatable characters. With some editing this novel is sure to be an adventurous read.
The author has a lot of potential and the intro was intriguing, but they lack suitable expression which makes reading their story rather tricky. The inconsistent punctuation, spelling and strange use of language also makes the novel a particularly tumultuous read. I hope the author is able to amend these issues and once they have I know for sure that the story will be packed full of potential and great ideas! Good luck :)
Great plot plus super unique, realistic characters even tho it's a fantasy, amazing writing style the author surely knows how to use the words so many plot twists which I actually liked! and the women rights wow you can learn some morals from this, you did a great job HS
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You have to read this guys because from the start the story is well good especially its main character is strong and unique. The content really cought my attention and it has moral lesson to learn from it.
What a unique and intriguing concept of a story. I love it and can’t wait to see the story and the adventure that unfolds between the two main characters. Everyone should read this!
The story is nice and interesting. The characters stand out too. However as a reader I jut want a little more tragedy.[img=update] The synopsis could have been a little detailed. Overall it's a good read for my late night crankiness. please keep updating.
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Amazing! I just finished the first few chapters and I can't wait to read the next chapters! I love how short but mysterious and intriguing the synopsis are. I love how unique the plot is and the author also has a great writing style/skill that I am getting immersed in this book plus the lingering mystery feeling left in my mind after reading the first few chapters. You did a great job Author! This is a must read everyone!
I just started reading but i simply cant get enough!!! The Synopsis is so unique and the descriptions i read are so good. Well done author cant to read more!
I love how descriptive the story is, from the start of the book it had me hooked. I don't normally like reading this genre but the story was interesting plus I like the authors writing style. Thank you DS for giving us the gem keep it up.
I can't help but notice how good the novel was written. Every word used as description of events helps the readers picture out was was really happening in the scene. Also, the line, "We're all actors in the play aren't we?" Really caught me there. Good job, Author!
Amazing history. A unique plot, I love the way it is narrated, the mystery feels on the surface and I look forward to more chapters This story is on my reading list, I am really liking everything that is happening
Wow what a talented writer! Amazing novel well written and a great unique idea....the plot twists are really shocking which leaves me wanting more the characters designing is awesome totally love it great novel totally recommend.
Not usually my cup of tea, but after the first 2 chapters I was pulled into reading more. Its a great book, and has a unique plot. definitely going to wait on more chapters 👍
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I am not a fantasy reader but I am glad I did click that read button Nicely written, good description, and wonderful world background. it is a must-read to all readers out there and I look forward to reading more chapters. Great work, you deserve the support
Wow! One interesting story to hangout! Amazing! 😁😁 Well done Author. keep up the good work. I support you with full force 💪💪💪🥰🥰 I wait for every update ..
i really like the style of your writing. all mysterious and addictive! story is quite nice. the best thing is you know how to not bore your readers out. Good work! keep going👍🏼❤❤
wow wow wow. I'm so in love with this book. I'm highly recommeding this book. The author did a great job here. Please post more chapters. I'm waiting 😍😍
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this is just getting better and better, I can't even imagine what's going to happen next, Liam's character is so mysterious, Andria's character is so powerful, the novel is so beautifully written.
The book is exceptional. If you are looking for a good fantasy, then go for this book. The plot is intriguing and flow of writing is good. I feel synopsis do no good for the amazing plot inside.
When I read the synopsis, I did not expect much in the story, but after reading a few chapters, I was intrigued by the development and Andro turning out to be a woman, well that never crossed my mind. Interesting story author.
Spoiler de révélation I didn't expect such a great book after reading the synopsis, The writer makes it feel like such a movie, I was surprised its such a amazing high fantasy novel, bravo author!!
good descriptions , good, characters, great writing. it's intriguing from the description to the beginning and through. the idea is good and was executed and written well
honestly, the synopsis threw me off because I was not expecting much. to my surprise I found myself in an awesome movie. I literally enjoyed each chapter and how the characters expressed themselves. kudos to the author
Hm!!. An absolute banging start I could say. Well done leaving an intriguing mist on your synopsis that's what lead me to click on your chapters. It's really a new experience for me and this type of story should exist more!!. Good job man... overall it's an excellent book. Thank you author for this work!!!
Of the chapters, I've read, I get a witcher feal from this story. The way the characters feel and interact with each other is fascinating. I say this because it takes me back to a simple fantasy world that has an amazing amount of room for growth.
If you enjoy high fantasy this is the novel for you. An expansive world with realistic and relatable characters. With some editing this novel is sure to be an adventurous read.
The author has a lot of potential and the intro was intriguing, but they lack suitable expression which makes reading their story rather tricky. The inconsistent punctuation, spelling and strange use of language also makes the novel a particularly tumultuous read. I hope the author is able to amend these issues and once they have I know for sure that the story will be packed full of potential and great ideas! Good luck :)
Great plot plus super unique, realistic characters even tho it's a fantasy, amazing writing style the author surely knows how to use the words so many plot twists which I actually liked! and the women rights wow you can learn some morals from this, you did a great job HS
Surprise, surprise..... The knight is a girl!!!!! Good plot, author. I like it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You have to read this guys because from the start the story is well good especially its main character is strong and unique. The content really cought my attention and it has moral lesson to learn from it.
What a unique and intriguing concept of a story. I love it and can’t wait to see the story and the adventure that unfolds between the two main characters. Everyone should read this!
The story is nice and interesting. The characters stand out too. However as a reader I jut want a little more tragedy.[img=update] The synopsis could have been a little detailed. Overall it's a good read for my late night crankiness. please keep updating.
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Amazing! I just finished the first few chapters and I can't wait to read the next chapters! I love how short but mysterious and intriguing the synopsis are. I love how unique the plot is and the author also has a great writing style/skill that I am getting immersed in this book plus the lingering mystery feeling left in my mind after reading the first few chapters. You did a great job Author! This is a must read everyone!
I just started reading but i simply cant get enough!!! The Synopsis is so unique and the descriptions i read are so good. Well done author cant to read more!
I love how descriptive the story is, from the start of the book it had me hooked. I don't normally like reading this genre but the story was interesting plus I like the authors writing style. Thank you DS for giving us the gem keep it up.
I can't help but notice how good the novel was written. Every word used as description of events helps the readers picture out was was really happening in the scene. Also, the line, "We're all actors in the play aren't we?" Really caught me there. Good job, Author!
Amazing history. A unique plot, I love the way it is narrated, the mystery feels on the surface and I look forward to more chapters This story is on my reading list, I am really liking everything that is happening
Wow what a talented writer! Amazing novel well written and a great unique idea....the plot twists are really shocking which leaves me wanting more the characters designing is awesome totally love it great novel totally recommend.
Not usually my cup of tea, but after the first 2 chapters I was pulled into reading more. Its a great book, and has a unique plot. definitely going to wait on more chapters 👍
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I am not a fantasy reader but I am glad I did click that read button Nicely written, good description, and wonderful world background. it is a must-read to all readers out there and I look forward to reading more chapters. Great work, you deserve the support