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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆○ - a very interesting concept. I really like how you did the story it feels like joker. the only thing I didn't like about the story was the demon slayer BS. if I ignore that part it would be really great story ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆○ - a good build up for the character, showing how he slowly turn how he is was great. thoe that Dimon slayer part keep messing story(I don't know about the other readers but mixing Dimon slayer on this story really ruins it for me) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
I think that's it's a great book and the fact that Midoriya didn't get a quirk from AFO is nice because of all the other fanfics he will just get a powerful quirk from him and dominate everyone and they can't continue the story later. But I think your story has potential and it's nice up till now. So keep up the good work.
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It's alright but I'm expecting it to grt better(:----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆○ - a very interesting concept. I really like how you did the story it feels like joker. the only thing I didn't like about the story was the demon slayer BS. if I ignore that part it would be really great story ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆○ - a good build up for the character, showing how he slowly turn how he is was great. thoe that Dimon slayer part keep messing story(I don't know about the other readers but mixing Dimon slayer on this story really ruins it for me) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
I think that's it's a great book and the fact that Midoriya didn't get a quirk from AFO is nice because of all the other fanfics he will just get a powerful quirk from him and dominate everyone and they can't continue the story later. But I think your story has potential and it's nice up till now. So keep up the good work.
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Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book Overall it's a great book
It's alright but I'm expecting it to grt better(:----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------