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I think you should re post this story weither your updating it or not, I thought it was amazing and was really looking forward to re reading it but I can't. I think it would be cool to your readers and fans if you just put what you had of it back up so we can have something at least.
Good until chapter 10 then it went downhill. Truely wasted potential. The memory loss is implemeted in a very bad way and ruins the whole story as a whole. Feeling sad now.
Umm, it started off great with how the MC and the Cullens were getting along. However, some things happen the MC dies then 'Kaboom!' it all went downhill from there. This FanFic is another example of how memory loss is used in a horrible way.
Nunca senti tanto ódio na minha vida! Autor-san, uma coisa pra te fala, a parti do momento em que você não possuem suas memorias, não é uma reencarnação! *suspiro* enfim, parabéns, meu dia foi pro lixo depois disso.
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This story's best part would be up to chapter 10 and seemed like the mpst original/non cliche twilight fanfic. The story would have me crying to the point I couldn't read the chapters. I even paniced when the author said they might drop it but im glad they haven't and will continue to read this fanfic and recommend it your reading this. Ps: Listening to the songs while reading the lyrics helps imaginations and seems to boost emotions when singing
Great story please dont drop. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . . .
Preferia a versão original da história Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras
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Hello, new review, to begin I have not read this story, why? well everyone knows that twilight fanfics never live beyond the first 30 chapters so the one who gets mad at any irrelevant event. Bye
Imma be honest most twilight ff are all the same they get op powers and its all eqsy but here theres actually some form of challenge but thats not all no the story is pretty intresting there are a few grammar mistakes but its a ff not “new yorks bestseller” overall it pretty good
Enjoyed the story before it was changed,Wished the author would have stayed with the werewolf Story since It felt a lot better of Drama,Story telling,And really Its a lot more interesting than the usual Vampire fic. but if author you read this,Good luck on your story and I wished you would have kepted it the same,Have a Good one
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Honestly I don't understand why everyone is complaining about chapter 10 i guess the best thing that ever happened was losing his memory since the story is romantic and going to the volturi was better For some variety anyway thank you for this fanfic it's the best one among every twilight fanfic i'v read for me it's a masterpiece pleas dont drop this and give us more
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I think this is way better before being rewrite,.... MC came back to life not reincarnate with werewolf bloodline.... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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rewrite chapter 10 and i will rewrite my review, for now it will temporary 1 stat...... ...........,....................................
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I really like how you have rewritten this. Right now, I undoubtedly believe this will turn out for the better, I completely believe that you made the write choice in this rewrite. Keep up the good work my guy. Try not to push yourself to hard, and continue to write what you love, not what you dread to write.
I really liked this rewrite of the second part[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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man all is cool till i reached the 10th chapter . sorry but I'm out ............................................................................................................................................................................................
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Me gusto mucho el principio, me gustaría que siguiera [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
not worth reading, too bad story Development, losing memory, really??😑😔...............................................................................................................................
the story is really good much better than other fanfictions I've read the storyline is a little rocky at some points but it can be overlooked and the updating takes a while but if it wasn't for that I'd give it a five star keep up the good work
This is one of the best twilight i ever read , its original and there a lot of character developement and what i really love is thas the mate of the mc is note rosalie and alice but edithe and that really cool because there are not a lot of fanfic with edithe as the love interest So i really Recommende you to read it Goodbye 👋
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Очень прикольно спасибо за написание мне понравились сами персонажи и очень интересно во второй части где он как Ликан и также мне понравился сам персонаж Эдит надеюсь он не будит отвергать её и надеюс на Гарем из Эдит и пары девушек может и Розали
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I think you should re post this story weither your updating it or not, I thought it was amazing and was really looking forward to re reading it but I can't. I think it would be cool to your readers and fans if you just put what you had of it back up so we can have something at least.
Good until chapter 10 then it went downhill. Truely wasted potential. The memory loss is implemeted in a very bad way and ruins the whole story as a whole. Feeling sad now.
Umm, it started off great with how the MC and the Cullens were getting along. However, some things happen the MC dies then 'Kaboom!' it all went downhill from there. This FanFic is another example of how memory loss is used in a horrible way.
Nunca senti tanto ódio na minha vida! Autor-san, uma coisa pra te fala, a parti do momento em que você não possuem suas memorias, não é uma reencarnação! *suspiro* enfim, parabéns, meu dia foi pro lixo depois disso.
Spoiler de révélation This story's best part would be up to chapter 10 and seemed like the mpst original/non cliche twilight fanfic. The story would have me crying to the point I couldn't read the chapters. I even paniced when the author said they might drop it but im glad they haven't and will continue to read this fanfic and recommend it your reading this. Ps: Listening to the songs while reading the lyrics helps imaginations and seems to boost emotions when singing
Great story please dont drop. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . . .
Preferia a versão original da história Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras Completar 140 letras
uff can´t give this ff a good rating...................................................................................................................................
Hello, new review, to begin I have not read this story, why? well everyone knows that twilight fanfics never live beyond the first 30 chapters so the one who gets mad at any irrelevant event. Bye
Imma be honest most twilight ff are all the same they get op powers and its all eqsy but here theres actually some form of challenge but thats not all no the story is pretty intresting there are a few grammar mistakes but its a ff not “new yorks bestseller” overall it pretty good
Enjoyed the story before it was changed,Wished the author would have stayed with the werewolf Story since It felt a lot better of Drama,Story telling,And really Its a lot more interesting than the usual Vampire fic. but if author you read this,Good luck on your story and I wished you would have kepted it the same,Have a Good one
Spoiler de révélation Honestly I don't understand why everyone is complaining about chapter 10 i guess the best thing that ever happened was losing his memory since the story is romantic and going to the volturi was better For some variety anyway thank you for this fanfic it's the best one among every twilight fanfic i'v read for me it's a masterpiece pleas dont drop this and give us more
🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥
I think this is way better before being rewrite,.... MC came back to life not reincarnate with werewolf bloodline.... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Хуйню наворотили полный шлак просто умри🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕🖕🏿🖕🏿🖕
rewrite chapter 10 and i will rewrite my review, for now it will temporary 1 stat...... ...........,....................................
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I really like how you have rewritten this. Right now, I undoubtedly believe this will turn out for the better, I completely believe that you made the write choice in this rewrite. Keep up the good work my guy. Try not to push yourself to hard, and continue to write what you love, not what you dread to write.
I really liked this rewrite of the second part[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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man all is cool till i reached the 10th chapter . sorry but I'm out ............................................................................................................................................................................................
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Me gusto mucho el principio, me gustaría que siguiera [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
not worth reading, too bad story Development, losing memory, really??😑😔...............................................................................................................................
the story is really good much better than other fanfictions I've read the storyline is a little rocky at some points but it can be overlooked and the updating takes a while but if it wasn't for that I'd give it a five star keep up the good work
This is one of the best twilight i ever read , its original and there a lot of character developement and what i really love is thas the mate of the mc is note rosalie and alice but edithe and that really cool because there are not a lot of fanfic with edithe as the love interest So i really Recommende you to read it Goodbye 👋
Spoiler de révélation Очень прикольно спасибо за написание мне понравились сами персонажи и очень интересно во второй части где он как Ликан и также мне понравился сам персонаж Эдит надеюсь он не будит отвергать её и надеюс на Гарем из Эдит и пары девушек может и Розали
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