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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Super slow development. MC is not changing his charecter. He is not brave to face problem heads on. There is no goal for MC. Even he does not now his goal or will be goal and he has no vision.
Pretty good start I'd say. Keep on writing author. I think the character development in your story is really good particularly. Good job!!!!!!
its hard to get a good rating with how many chapters are out now(20), but i really am enjoying this novel. its pretty interesting kixing some cliche and unique plot points. cant wait for more from the author
A very slow novel, it's not recommended for people who don't like to read slow novels. I never give novels higher than a 4* or 4.5*, since novels have mistakes here and there. I'll continue to read to see how the characters and world background grow and whatnot. Keep up the good work Author!
Super slow development. MC is not changing his charecter. He is not brave to face problem heads on. There is no goal for MC. Even he does not now his goal or will be goal and he has no vision.
Pretty good start I'd say. Keep on writing author. I think the character development in your story is really good particularly. Good job!!!!!!
its hard to get a good rating with how many chapters are out now(20), but i really am enjoying this novel. its pretty interesting kixing some cliche and unique plot points. cant wait for more from the author
A very slow novel, it's not recommended for people who don't like to read slow novels. I never give novels higher than a 4* or 4.5*, since novels have mistakes here and there. I'll continue to read to see how the characters and world background grow and whatnot. Keep up the good work Author!