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The Adventures of 'Tartarus' - The Strongest
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"If you say you don't want it, you can just leave it here."
"Haha-...I'll take it graciously, but what is it? I've never seen this before..."
"You'll find out one day. as long as things go like expected, I don't think you will be needing it there, well it now all depends up to fate and you, "
Finishing his spiel, the king's back turned before he departed.
"This is farewell. You already know that I dislike depressing things, right? I won't be seeing you off. Take care."
"Sure. You too. Goodbye...it was fun."
"Yeah...too fun."
It was there that the story of the hero met its end–.
***
He gazed down at the circular pendant, with nostalgia, regret, and many other emotions. Just as he was about to dive deeper into his thoughts, he rammed into something, or more precisely someone.
He groaned as he rubbed his head, to soothe the pain. When he lifted his head he was looking at something, that didn't... make sense.
"E-Everyone......what happened, all of a sudden? D-Don’t tell me this is a prank?"
"Haha-......what the hell"
His head was becoming blank. His feet staggered. The throbs in his chest accelerated. His only thoughts were
What the hell is happening here?
***
Hello, readers, Author here.
This is the first time I am writing such a story, so you might see some mistakes, but I will try to improve my writing with each chapter. So I hope you guys can encourage me and support me, also feel free to comment on the story. I am writing this as my hobby and to improve my English.
Thank You for reading this story
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Hi Mrinavv, I have gone with the chapter 1. I like your approach in writing the climax on the plot. Keep it up. Want to see more in the directions where you can give more innovative twist and scenes.
Hey there and you might be thinking this is not that good of a book but you have yet to see what might come, so wait and see as this author shall slowly but steadily get more experience in writing. We all shall take part in his journey as we encourage him to do bigger, better and maybe one day he shall be a author of a best-selling book. Now I shall leave you all to that and by the way this comment is when Mrinavv wrote his first chapter.