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The story read well and had good potential until Hathaway. After Hathaway his logic failed and the story was ruined.
Very good book with good transitions. The ending could have been a little better but it was a very decent read.
A perfect example of book written without a plan with huge inconsistencies in world building and multiple times of MC power changing up and down with no explanation
I've got to say that the author of this story is very forgetful and chaotic. The mc is essentially just handed everything and just instantly knows how best to fight like some godly martial arts tactician while everyone around him is weak idiots. His information on how his creatures are upgraded changes repeatedly and the author disregards or forgets his own information such as the fact that the mc was silver rank since the beginning of the book or how his main beast went from stage one to stage three with only 100 points while the rest of his beasts need billions of yuan and over 1000 points to upgrade. This book could be used as a good base for another book, but only if the author fixes the leveling system and works on their mc.
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a very strange story. it was enjoyable but imo fell off rapidly after the whole water city arc. the younger sister was with him much earlier and they were mutually appreciative but then he just got with the older sister and just up and left to travel??? what about the whole nominal punishment thing or about the sis u just ditched?? the whole story just becomes rushed thanks to the old man, and the last chapter was a joke. definitely should have been many more chapters longer.
The idea is good, and the presentation entertaining. But there are so so so many inconsistencies that I have to wonder if the author is sane. The ranking system is a mess and changed 4-5 times. The character names and even behavior changed suddenly. At some point the whole story is like another book, making references to God knows what that did not actually happen in this book.
A good story (and almost incredible ones) , but your story has one big major inconsistency. Your rank system !! !. Be it for beast rank system or to beastmasters rank one, both show inconsistency. Author change 3 or 4 times. .give me a headache
I was offered 1 day free reading of this by my membership. I read to chapter 30 or so and it was a struggle, the translator seemed competent, but the story boomeranged about between story arc's with no depth or logic. The grading system and evolution requirements were absolutely flaunted repeatedly. I can't in good conscience recommend spending money on this travesty. Author - If you want to continue writing proofread or use a story board to keep track of your plot elements so as not to get crossed up.
while the translator did a wonderful job, the author needs to be checked for alcohol poisoning and narcotics. With multiple inconsistencies the author must be working to drive people insane. the story itself is interesting if nothing spectacular but with the author changing aspects chapter to chapter...
Im just here confused t 200ish or 270ih chapters how did this novel turn into a more like spy novel then into a cultivation novel huh it was supposed to be futuristic
Y DID U STOP WRITING SO SOON?? THOS OS ONE OF MY FAVORITE BOOKS AND I REALLY LIKE IT FOR THE MOST PART. THERES A COUPLE THINGS THAT I WOULD CHANGE,ADD OR TAKE OUT BUT ITS NOT ENOUGH TO SAY ITS A BAD BOOK.... 8TS ONE OF THE BETTER ONES I READ... I HOPE U WOULD RECONSIDER and start writing again!!
autor should read or reread his work. TOOOOO MANY inconsistency in his work. if he makes it correct (consistent), it would make for a really good novel. but that's my humble oppinion, not a fact.
I love it and I'm sad it ended so soon, I came back to check on this book to see of there were any others by darn you, and can't find any, so I decided to write a review to help this amazing novel get out to a larger audience
The premise of the book of the book is good but the inconsistency of the author makes it just not worth reading. The cities are renamed, the power system has 3 sets of terms that keep getting interchanged. The author will conveniently forget details for seemingly no reason. If the mc needs something and it has been said he needs to acquire it, it is fair game to just already be in his possession next chapter.
the book was very engaging for the first 200 chapters or so, then when the completion of his 1st mission happens, it gets really wierd. i feel like important info was never relayed and it starts randomly making time jumps. the ending is very disappointing, very rushed
From chapters 252 to 253 the story changes drastically, nothing plot wise is carried over. It's almost like a new book, and it's not the first time the plot was inconsistent, in fact it happened often. But it was the biggest, by a long shot. What he needs is somebody to check his work and keep his writing in line with his intentions(since he won't do it himself), and make sure any changes don't ruin the flow of the book. Also, the story Jump I first mentioned allows the potential to add an estimated 50 chapters at best in between them. This is guaranteed proof that he pays little attention to the previous story content. Also the person I assume is the translator tries to explain the authors faults, but clearly gives up at some point. I forget Which chapter.
Logic, what a feeble thing... I've said what I wanted to say, let me post the review. Cmon are you gonna make me ramble on? I just want thi
Man I’m only at chapter 36 but there has been plot hole after plot hole and things keep getting changed for example the for his second or third egg he needed material(s) that weren’t in stock and yet within the next chapter or two he magically got them with the rest of the stuff he ordered, ability for one of the eggs got changed within a few chapters, all in all not very consistent and there is characters who pop up with no explanation, mind you I’m not even past the FREE chapters I’m gonna keep reading for now only because it is my free daily novel
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Not worth wasting your time. 2/3 of the story is great but the rest 1/3 is sh#t. The rest 1/3 story makes the story down the drains. . .
i don't know why but I read the title as, world of breasts.... anyway it's a good read ............................................,...........
Sorry but, i can only give you 2.4 stars. I mostly gave one point for world background and story development. Because the author keeps changing established fact, he established like 5 -7 chapters ago. Or he cant remember the level of his character. Deliberately changing story elements to fit the storyline you have in your mind just destroys this novel It feels like the author does not are about this book and the characters he created and only tries to grab the money out of the gullible people here.
It's impossible to read, every chapter something happened like previous chapters don't exist. Mixing Skill names is the smallest mistake what autor doing, so many thing don't catch up with each other from previous chapters. The biggest mistake to buy that novel 😢 wish really good luck and indifference when somebody try to read that.
author cant seem to stick to their own story development. 1 second the character gets recognized for going up a tier for 10 chapters, and then boom! that "tier upgrade" never happened, never gets brought back up, and gets upgraded to the same tier 100+ chapters later. The final straw for me to drop the story tho was when out of nowhere the MC falls in love and just abandons all his plans. the kicker? the chick he fell in love with is supposed to b the new governor of a city, and is punsihed with FIVE years of being unable to leave her post or the city. the next day she runs off with the MC after he tells everyone he is quitting his current occupation and gunna explore the world... the quality seems to dip and dive, to the point no "arc" lasts more then a few chapters, and the build up to those arcs seem mundane.
book was all over the place. constantly changing everything and not making any sense. I only finished due to wondering just how bad it ended
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The book is good but it turn into garbage. The author just killed the story. [img=Mad][img=angry][img=Mad]
The story read well and had good potential until Hathaway. After Hathaway his logic failed and the story was ruined.
Very good book with good transitions. The ending could have been a little better but it was a very decent read.
A perfect example of book written without a plan with huge inconsistencies in world building and multiple times of MC power changing up and down with no explanation
I've got to say that the author of this story is very forgetful and chaotic. The mc is essentially just handed everything and just instantly knows how best to fight like some godly martial arts tactician while everyone around him is weak idiots. His information on how his creatures are upgraded changes repeatedly and the author disregards or forgets his own information such as the fact that the mc was silver rank since the beginning of the book or how his main beast went from stage one to stage three with only 100 points while the rest of his beasts need billions of yuan and over 1000 points to upgrade. This book could be used as a good base for another book, but only if the author fixes the leveling system and works on their mc.
Spoiler de révélation a very strange story. it was enjoyable but imo fell off rapidly after the whole water city arc. the younger sister was with him much earlier and they were mutually appreciative but then he just got with the older sister and just up and left to travel??? what about the whole nominal punishment thing or about the sis u just ditched?? the whole story just becomes rushed thanks to the old man, and the last chapter was a joke. definitely should have been many more chapters longer.
The idea is good, and the presentation entertaining. But there are so so so many inconsistencies that I have to wonder if the author is sane. The ranking system is a mess and changed 4-5 times. The character names and even behavior changed suddenly. At some point the whole story is like another book, making references to God knows what that did not actually happen in this book.
A good story (and almost incredible ones) , but your story has one big major inconsistency. Your rank system !! !. Be it for beast rank system or to beastmasters rank one, both show inconsistency. Author change 3 or 4 times. .give me a headache
I was offered 1 day free reading of this by my membership. I read to chapter 30 or so and it was a struggle, the translator seemed competent, but the story boomeranged about between story arc's with no depth or logic. The grading system and evolution requirements were absolutely flaunted repeatedly. I can't in good conscience recommend spending money on this travesty. Author - If you want to continue writing proofread or use a story board to keep track of your plot elements so as not to get crossed up.
while the translator did a wonderful job, the author needs to be checked for alcohol poisoning and narcotics. With multiple inconsistencies the author must be working to drive people insane. the story itself is interesting if nothing spectacular but with the author changing aspects chapter to chapter...
Im just here confused t 200ish or 270ih chapters how did this novel turn into a more like spy novel then into a cultivation novel huh it was supposed to be futuristic
Y DID U STOP WRITING SO SOON?? THOS OS ONE OF MY FAVORITE BOOKS AND I REALLY LIKE IT FOR THE MOST PART. THERES A COUPLE THINGS THAT I WOULD CHANGE,ADD OR TAKE OUT BUT ITS NOT ENOUGH TO SAY ITS A BAD BOOK.... 8TS ONE OF THE BETTER ONES I READ... I HOPE U WOULD RECONSIDER and start writing again!!
autor should read or reread his work. TOOOOO MANY inconsistency in his work. if he makes it correct (consistent), it would make for a really good novel. but that's my humble oppinion, not a fact.
I love it and I'm sad it ended so soon, I came back to check on this book to see of there were any others by darn you, and can't find any, so I decided to write a review to help this amazing novel get out to a larger audience
The premise of the book of the book is good but the inconsistency of the author makes it just not worth reading. The cities are renamed, the power system has 3 sets of terms that keep getting interchanged. The author will conveniently forget details for seemingly no reason. If the mc needs something and it has been said he needs to acquire it, it is fair game to just already be in his possession next chapter.
the book was very engaging for the first 200 chapters or so, then when the completion of his 1st mission happens, it gets really wierd. i feel like important info was never relayed and it starts randomly making time jumps. the ending is very disappointing, very rushed
From chapters 252 to 253 the story changes drastically, nothing plot wise is carried over. It's almost like a new book, and it's not the first time the plot was inconsistent, in fact it happened often. But it was the biggest, by a long shot. What he needs is somebody to check his work and keep his writing in line with his intentions(since he won't do it himself), and make sure any changes don't ruin the flow of the book. Also, the story Jump I first mentioned allows the potential to add an estimated 50 chapters at best in between them. This is guaranteed proof that he pays little attention to the previous story content. Also the person I assume is the translator tries to explain the authors faults, but clearly gives up at some point. I forget Which chapter.
Logic, what a feeble thing... I've said what I wanted to say, let me post the review. Cmon are you gonna make me ramble on? I just want thi
Man I’m only at chapter 36 but there has been plot hole after plot hole and things keep getting changed for example the for his second or third egg he needed material(s) that weren’t in stock and yet within the next chapter or two he magically got them with the rest of the stuff he ordered, ability for one of the eggs got changed within a few chapters, all in all not very consistent and there is characters who pop up with no explanation, mind you I’m not even past the FREE chapters I’m gonna keep reading for now only because it is my free daily novel
Spoiler de révélation Not worth wasting your time. 2/3 of the story is great but the rest 1/3 is sh#t. The rest 1/3 story makes the story down the drains. . .
i don't know why but I read the title as, world of breasts.... anyway it's a good read ............................................,...........
Sorry but, i can only give you 2.4 stars. I mostly gave one point for world background and story development. Because the author keeps changing established fact, he established like 5 -7 chapters ago. Or he cant remember the level of his character. Deliberately changing story elements to fit the storyline you have in your mind just destroys this novel It feels like the author does not are about this book and the characters he created and only tries to grab the money out of the gullible people here.
It's impossible to read, every chapter something happened like previous chapters don't exist. Mixing Skill names is the smallest mistake what autor doing, so many thing don't catch up with each other from previous chapters. The biggest mistake to buy that novel 😢 wish really good luck and indifference when somebody try to read that.
author cant seem to stick to their own story development. 1 second the character gets recognized for going up a tier for 10 chapters, and then boom! that "tier upgrade" never happened, never gets brought back up, and gets upgraded to the same tier 100+ chapters later. The final straw for me to drop the story tho was when out of nowhere the MC falls in love and just abandons all his plans. the kicker? the chick he fell in love with is supposed to b the new governor of a city, and is punsihed with FIVE years of being unable to leave her post or the city. the next day she runs off with the MC after he tells everyone he is quitting his current occupation and gunna explore the world... the quality seems to dip and dive, to the point no "arc" lasts more then a few chapters, and the build up to those arcs seem mundane.
book was all over the place. constantly changing everything and not making any sense. I only finished due to wondering just how bad it ended
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The book is good but it turn into garbage. The author just killed the story. [img=Mad][img=angry][img=Mad]