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writing quality - magnificent stability of updates - whilst not the best, still better than a lot of people and anyways i liked this webnovel a lot so ye I'll pardon the previously slow updates. story development - ^^^^ not much development but stable and cozy, overall really good for a dxd novel character design - was dropped before i could've give a good review for this world background - it's not a au so you can't really give much of a world background, and it just got into canon, so yeah can't give a thorough review for this part.
Welp thank you for making this fanfic author Ahah hope you continue to have a good life wherever you may go love you mwa.................................................................
ah, it got dropped ;-: it was a good read while it lasted , i thank you for making this fanfic even if it got dropped. stay healthy and don’t stress :) 💕
Its was a sweet ride while it lasted and now it drop thank for you hard work
more chapter please. ********************************************************************************************************************************************************
Главное не бросай и все будет супер.!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!! !¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!
Great fanfic. The story has been going great so far. Keep us the good work! !! !! !! !!! !! !!!!! ! !!!!!! !!!!!! ! !!! !! !! !!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
Arthur is this romance and if so, whit what gender Lkfkfkfkfkfkgfkgkgkgjtjjggkgkgigifigkkgtkktktkttktktktkyykkttkyktkykyykykykyiyiyiyiyiyiititit
I like the story development very much. Interaction between girls is very interesting so don't stop unloading the chapters. I would like to watch it till the end of the srory.
Love seeing a dxd story with the main character being a girl as most of them are done with boy main characters. I also love that you are bringing other factions in and are not sticking to just Christianity like most of them hope you keep going down that line. And love that you are okay with changing some events like her bishop I hope she get her own "evil pieces" so she can keep her friends alive for much longer
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Nice Story,...... I don't know how much fanfic like this dropped, keep your hard work.............. .................. ........................ ................................ ................................. .......
Man it rare to see a female fanfic in dxd because it all about harem good job author not thinking with your d*k Keep going Ps: Hope you didn't get offended if you did here is a loli ....................
I've read up to chapter seven and I like it...................................... ...... ..... ...... .......... .... .... ... .............
MORE CHAPTER.............................................................................................................................PLS
this is a good one I like it other readers try this its good its change of pace from always MC as a male from MC as a female and thanks author san for your hard work don't stop keep going 👍😀😊[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good fanfic on dxd honestly super💯💯but why, why is it dropped 😭😭😭😭 it would be great if someone took it I wanna see what happens after Mc went to hindhu gods
writing quality - magnificent stability of updates - whilst not the best, still better than a lot of people and anyways i liked this webnovel a lot so ye I'll pardon the previously slow updates. story development - ^^^^ not much development but stable and cozy, overall really good for a dxd novel character design - was dropped before i could've give a good review for this world background - it's not a au so you can't really give much of a world background, and it just got into canon, so yeah can't give a thorough review for this part.
Welp thank you for making this fanfic author Ahah hope you continue to have a good life wherever you may go love you mwa.................................................................
ah, it got dropped ;-: it was a good read while it lasted , i thank you for making this fanfic even if it got dropped. stay healthy and don’t stress :) 💕
Its was a sweet ride while it lasted and now it drop thank for you hard work
more chapter please. ********************************************************************************************************************************************************
Главное не бросай и все будет супер.!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!! !¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!
Great fanfic. The story has been going great so far. Keep us the good work! !! !! !! !!! !! !!!!! ! !!!!!! !!!!!! ! !!! !! !! !!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
Arthur is this romance and if so, whit what gender Lkfkfkfkfkfkgfkgkgkgjtjjggkgkgigifigkkgtkktktkttktktktkyykkttkyktkykyykykykyiyiyiyiyiyiititit
I like the story development very much. Interaction between girls is very interesting so don't stop unloading the chapters. I would like to watch it till the end of the srory.
Love seeing a dxd story with the main character being a girl as most of them are done with boy main characters. I also love that you are bringing other factions in and are not sticking to just Christianity like most of them hope you keep going down that line. And love that you are okay with changing some events like her bishop I hope she get her own "evil pieces" so she can keep her friends alive for much longer
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Nice Story,...... I don't know how much fanfic like this dropped, keep your hard work.............. .................. ........................ ................................ ................................. .......
Man it rare to see a female fanfic in dxd because it all about harem good job author not thinking with your d*k Keep going Ps: Hope you didn't get offended if you did here is a loli ....................
I've read up to chapter seven and I like it...................................... ...... ..... ...... .......... .... .... ... .............
MORE CHAPTER.............................................................................................................................PLS
this is a good one I like it other readers try this its good its change of pace from always MC as a male from MC as a female and thanks author san for your hard work don't stop keep going 👍😀😊[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good fanfic on dxd honestly super💯💯but why, why is it dropped 😭😭😭😭 it would be great if someone took it I wanna see what happens after Mc went to hindhu gods