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Essa obra pra mim foi um horror, desculpe mas com a quantidade que você quebrou a 4°parede ficou insuportável. 🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️
While the idea is cool, the actual writing leaves something to be desired. It will randomly go off on tangents that make very little sense and is hard to follow. A few times, I had to go back and re-read parts to make sure I didn't miss something, only to find that it was just a tangent or random thought.
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I LOVE MYSELF SO MUCH! I recommend you read it because i have improved the storyline to make it more exciting than what i did before where i was just fooling around. I also strongly recommend that you give reviews and power stones.
leaving this, I hate fanfics where the reincarnated protagonist does not know the story, he makes his MC read the deimon wiki to know what the author is interested in but he does not watch the series so that the MC does not know what is going to happen and have an excuse to repeat the same mistakes as in the series and not deviate from the original story, and simply change the personality of deimon a bit and that's what I watch the series for.
Hello people, author here. I just want to relieve those who are worried i will drop it someday or the 4th wall break will make the story awful,do not worry i am having so much fun writing this to drop it.(MC:I call BS author,you're just here to give yourself a good revi-) And that's it, thank you for reading.
Honestly it’s pretty good but the random comments and tangents that end up happening during a simple discussion is annoying. Also someone needs to get Felix Fixit bcz the 4th wall has been absolutely demolished over and over since chapter 1.
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Love the story, especially the comments so Please continue as I will follow it closely and no I am definitely not a stolker in my free time.
If you can can you make the writing a little more clear but other than that its really good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I was looking for a fanfiction like this. Yay................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Why asked to be Damon if the MC doesn't know the character. Reading his wiki is not the same as reading or watching TVD because you will not know his sorrows, his joys, everything about the character with emotion. The idea looks cool but the character is too powerful for TVD universe, it gets boring. From the first chapter he makes stupid decisions, why go home to eat 🤨, I try to understand the reason for this decision. in short, the story is missing a lot, I hope the author will do a better rewrite next time.
Essa obra pra mim foi um horror, desculpe mas com a quantidade que você quebrou a 4°parede ficou insuportável. 🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️
While the idea is cool, the actual writing leaves something to be desired. It will randomly go off on tangents that make very little sense and is hard to follow. A few times, I had to go back and re-read parts to make sure I didn't miss something, only to find that it was just a tangent or random thought.
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I LOVE MYSELF SO MUCH! I recommend you read it because i have improved the storyline to make it more exciting than what i did before where i was just fooling around. I also strongly recommend that you give reviews and power stones.
leaving this, I hate fanfics where the reincarnated protagonist does not know the story, he makes his MC read the deimon wiki to know what the author is interested in but he does not watch the series so that the MC does not know what is going to happen and have an excuse to repeat the same mistakes as in the series and not deviate from the original story, and simply change the personality of deimon a bit and that's what I watch the series for.
Hello people, author here. I just want to relieve those who are worried i will drop it someday or the 4th wall break will make the story awful,do not worry i am having so much fun writing this to drop it.(MC:I call BS author,you're just here to give yourself a good revi-) And that's it, thank you for reading.
Honestly it’s pretty good but the random comments and tangents that end up happening during a simple discussion is annoying. Also someone needs to get Felix Fixit bcz the 4th wall has been absolutely demolished over and over since chapter 1.
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Love the story, especially the comments so Please continue as I will follow it closely and no I am definitely not a stolker in my free time.
If you can can you make the writing a little more clear but other than that its really good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I was looking for a fanfiction like this. Yay................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Why asked to be Damon if the MC doesn't know the character. Reading his wiki is not the same as reading or watching TVD because you will not know his sorrows, his joys, everything about the character with emotion. The idea looks cool but the character is too powerful for TVD universe, it gets boring. From the first chapter he makes stupid decisions, why go home to eat 🤨, I try to understand the reason for this decision. in short, the story is missing a lot, I hope the author will do a better rewrite next time.