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thank you for all support, I still a newbie here. but I'm so happy to see peoples enjoy my soft slow daily theme novel. feel free to comment and criticize me[img=recommend]
enjoy the love healing stories that happens around us, and make us growing to face this world. cause love is growing us to be a better person
This was an amazing story. simple and looks like a natural story. beautiful characters. I really enjoy it. excited for next part of story. curious for tall guy. just love it your story.
i hope you enjoy this novel... i will continue giving my best and improving as writer. it will be a 8 volume novel plus side story. thank you so much
thank you for all support, I still a newbie here. but I'm so happy to see peoples enjoy my soft slow daily theme novel. feel free to comment and criticize me[img=recommend]
enjoy the love healing stories that happens around us, and make us growing to face this world. cause love is growing us to be a better person
This was an amazing story. simple and looks like a natural story. beautiful characters. I really enjoy it. excited for next part of story. curious for tall guy. just love it your story.
i hope you enjoy this novel... i will continue giving my best and improving as writer. it will be a 8 volume novel plus side story. thank you so much