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This is author's 3rd book and my 2nd book.....From my previous experience with rise of worm sovereign i feel this is also gonna be blast. Author writes quite a good plot with very few holes and an extensive world building with apt description. So here we have our MC who is not from the main bloodline family and found an ultimate inheritance but that needs to sacrifice people. so he brings people from the family and sacrifice them and in them includes his lover who is pregnant(he doesnt know). Both MC and his lover offered sacrifices to make the deal with the devil with MC sacrificing his team for power and his lover sacrificed their baby so that MC doesnt get this power and since devil had to honor both the deals MC was banished to other world. This will surely be a blast
(Looks around *SCREAMS* Okay lets start this *Clears throat to type*) First of all I want to hate Lucius (MC) but I can't, who will dislike a ruthless yet cunning, witty and a man who will do anything to achieve his goals. (T_T) Yes, he's your usual anti hero starting off in an ancient setting to achieve his plan (Though it made me recall Hellboy movies for some reason) Character development of MC remains unsettling and quick in first 6 chapters and he goes from 0 to 100 very soon, but that's how he is from the beginning. Although I really wanna see will he go on a guilt trip after coming conscious into another body (Well, after all he will begin his journey from point 0 again as a punishment) Nonetheless you don't really have to worry about quality and grammar, the picture will be shown vividly to you even that cosmos stranded scenario too in chap 7 can be played in brain effortlessly. Although I still pity those 3 companion men rather Mira, well the baby was innocent but at the initial chapters I KNEW BABY WOULD HAVE A BIGGER PICTURE AND PURPOSE (Lol!)
Amazing storyline, simple power pyramid but in depth world structure and political dynamics, no OP golden finger, best MC setup, cold and calculating (as an antihero suppose to be which most authors don't understand), completely focused on goals: army building, finance generating, political connection, no unnecessary sideline story of emotion or romance. Completely different from most story out there which follows same tamplate and either has harem or romance to increase readers. Read till 509 ep and love every bit of it
Hahaha RETURN OF FANG YAUN😏😁😁😁😁😁😁❤️❤️❤️❤️ I like heavenly villains novel the best
Hello, I really liked your work, but I'm tormented by a few questions. The first question is, did the protagonist get his true name and how will it affect him? The second question is, after receiving the true name and the inherent demonic mana, will he be able to use spells normally, without them being destroyed after a couple of uses? The third question is when will there be a sequel?
I have read 50 chapters untill the part where I have to unlock new chapters and I am not happy. I was entreaked by story read it with 'patience' (I have emphasized patience bcz I don't have a lot of it) I also have very short attention span like I get bored quickly but author did a great job at synopsis and his tags I read it and many times slept in reading the chapter in between I am bored out of my mind after reading it till now and honestly feels like I wasted my time like story progresses at a snails pace mc is like recovering for who knows how long and I cannot explain it in words but the tag overpowered will come into effect after 1000 chapters the way it's progressing.I have dropped it's just too slow ,even if author said it will be slow but there is nothing really going it is just slow for sake of being slow you know what I mean.
I'm dropping this novel, the beginning is bad and makes no sense. The MC is just dumb who thinks he is smart, trusting demons is always bad and thinking he would be the strongest in the world with a wish seems forced. When he gets to the next world instead of trying to understand how the world works, he tries to create a demonic mark on his own soul without caring how it would work or what repercussions it would have and almost kills himself. Putting this together with the pace of the novel being slow, strange and with several infodump makes everything boring and tiresome.
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TL;DR - Very slow beginning, annoying side characters. MC's a docile puppy. Very slow. Also very annoying side character that constantly interrupts the MC. MC's a momma's boy, constantly explaining himself. It's very hard to read without getting annoyed and frustrated. The world building is decent but the info dumps are too much.
I don't like the nerf in the MC with magic and invalidates MC knowledge for the most part.Also the compatibility with the body he said ways of fixing it,then saying he can't without explanations or trying.The family connection not controlling people properly especially with what happend with the MC near the start of the novel,invaliding that soon after MC in new world.Dies not match title.But it's what I expect from this authors work.
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I am at chap 113 and until the mc reach the other world this was a good novel. But for a mc who will kill even his gf for power this mc is oddly close to his new family, the problem is when the mc does a groundbreaking discovery, his family is nonchalant about it and they were like meh. The novel became lazy to explain the implications of his action ,and in later part even his demonic powers were not the main focus, I think if you introduced the enemies at first before our mcs actions it would have been great, but now he is just explaining sh it to his family who gave no particular satisfactory reaction.
It’s great but author quit it and started up like 2 more novels, i would love to see where this story goes but if author can’t keep the updates coming it’s no fun and ruins the basis of the novels growth
Honestly love this book, and it's by far the best one the author had written. There is only 1 huge glaring issue..... the author isn't updating it anymore. The story starts out dark, but the MC did learn from it in a way. The powers the author gave the characters is very intresting and unique. He always had my attention and left me wanting to read more.
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hey author, are you going to complete this novel????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It starts dark then the MC's personality shifts without warning. He becomes a mama's boy who is constantly explaining himself. The expositions and information dumps are crazy. don't feel bad skipping them, you won't miss a thing. Nothing happens for 30 chapters. Then nothing much happens until 100 chapters There is an annoying female character that gets forced onto the readers. Her job is to annoy the readers. She asks about everything all the time, interrupts every discussion. The MC spends chapters explaining himself to this female character over and over. Good luck. Its like author decided he wanted a female character and then forced one into every scene. you can literally edit her out and nothing changes. she adds absolutely nothing. Everytime I see her name I skim through. So don't feel bad about skipping said chapters. believe me, you won't miss anything important.
A great novel, there are sometimes some spelling errors but they are rare and don't impede once understanding of the novel. The story itself is great as well, the mc is intelligent and plans things through, conflicts are created realistically as well. The side character design is done well as well, while their thoughts sometimes sound somewhat two-dimensional that is likely because in these instances they are only one sentence or so long. The world building is done quite well, only the amount of 'copies' of a gift that exist is too low, but this should be no problem for most and has no actual impact on the story. Definitely recommend you to read it if you don't want your typical hero mc or an mc that has some kind of revenge plan or any some such as this mc is only in it for power and power alone.
I read until 33 chapters and I have to say that this is the slowest novel I have ever read. You basically defined the meaning of slow. I don't mind slow pacing but a slow pace without any conflict or plot is so boring that I felt like sleeping after shortly waking up in the morning.
One of the best novel i read in my entire life, it has every thing i want, smart and evil MC , nice world building and side characters , only down side is need more frequent updates , i think author just focus on this and not the other 2 novels he or she writes
I'm 30 chapters in and although the story hasn't necessarily reached the genesis for growth in the mc. It has great world-building and side-elements. Keep up the great work!
Love the book sans the grammar, but taking a break?? Really, author san??? 😱 😭 😰 😣 😱 😭 😰 😣 You can't do that to us atleast release chapters with a reduced frequency. Please 😌
It's not a bad read. Unfortunately, the author seems to be on hiatus. What's available however is of a high quality. I haven't noticed any glaring language errors so far.
Slow-paced story + slow release rate? :3 The story, world, and something something itself is interesting. really but the author is just keep on stretching the chapters(progress?) with his 'important info' and other paragraphs that is basically there just for the sake of filling some empty space?(maybe?). I mean there is some experiment or something that can be explained and be done in 3 chp but got stretched up to 5chp or more with the talking, pondering, and blabbering? something like that. and personallythat is not cool :v so yeah. and If you're looking for an Overpowered MC. this one is more of a Weak to Strong one rather than op (maybe he go Overpowered later on? idk). he got some unique power, and his brain is working fine. his family think he is clever and smart too, Int/Wis +1
Sorry this novel not for me , was hoping for something like reverend insanity. But this is more slice of life (very slow). Seems like this going be more kingdom building and not really a evil mc. Still the novel seems intresting and well written if you like a slice of life story with relationship building.
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I like the novel for the most part. Love evil MCs that don't show mercy and plot. Only problems I see is how easily MC gains minions and how much freedom he has as a young novel. I would expect the heir to have more restrictions. Its just been too easy for him so his plotting isn't as impressive as it could be. Also its brilliant when other characters show intelligence of their own and a mc is able to checkmate them by out thinking them but so far there hasn't been much intelligence from the cast. The second problem I notice is irregular chapter releases lately. Seemed like they were steady up until this month with no mention of any hiatus.
I read this up to chapter 53, the writing quality itself is really good, but the novel itself was terribly slow to the point of pain. Within those 50 chapters there was practically 0 action, the only thing we got was an annoying servant girl who acted like a mother, so to sum up, the writing quality itself is good, no mistakes, the environment are nice and characters also have "character" but the story itself in my opinion leaves a lot to be desired 3.6/5 from me
The story development is nice and all.. the mc is believes in using his head more often than fists. So far the world building is going fine too. The only problem I have is with the way you describe every little action. Some places where questions need not be asked, they are still added making it unnecessary. Like if Lucian reached a door, he will ask Kiana- I guess this is the place. The mc doesn't need confirmation from his Kiana for every little things. Somethings can be written in a simple way- Kiana bring me some food. We don't always need the conversation of - I am feeling a bit hungry, should we have our food now? Lets head out then.. I feel like that 80% of the texts in the story are conversations like that. It has been like 250 something chapters but I feel like I read about 50 chapters. Whatever was written can be compressed in such low amount of chapters. I don't hate more descriptive stories but there is a balance between too much and too little. Well I understand the need to keep up the word count and the need for new ideas. But having a scene stretched on for like 10 chapters isn't fun. The brewery plan itself took like I don't know how many chapters. Three chapters were of him going there to check on the brewery and another chapter was about the the brewery is working. Details are good but unnecessary details makes me want to skip paras after paras. So I hope the author can change this. Sometimes I can literally feel my heart burn with how slow things are.
At chapter 45 and it seems good so far. Reminds me of Warlock in a Magus World in that the mc is reincarnated from a more “scientifically advanced” world. This gives them a more analytical way of looking at the new worlds magic or superpower system.
First I have to point out 2 bad things about this book, first is that the cover doesn't fit at all, our MC is nothing like the one on the cover and I can't imagine him ever becoming like that. Second, some words are sometimes inncorect, I would assume that is because of wrong autocorrect, but it doesn't happen more than 1 word per chapter. Other than those two problems the whole novel is a breath of fresh air, power system is interesting, MC is truly cunning and the world building is great. Can't wait for further chapters 😊
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Keep up the good work. The Evil protagonist got this book a five star review from me. IT IS ONE OF THE FEW NOVELS WHICH FEATURES AN COLD,DARK,RUTHLESS, AND AN EVIL MC. From my perspective this is perfect
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Well from the synopsis i see that were off to a truly dark start. Sacrificing love for power is it worth it? Will it ever be worth it? Find the answer to those in this novel. I mist say this is one of the darkest synopsis i’ve ever read. Its noting like the walker of worlds which fasinates you and make you feel like your flying. And by the way author pls dont make his lover appear in his second life pls? I turly hate stories where rivalry is is not dead even after both of them die or even when one of them is dead. This is quite possibly a anti-hero protagonist who would do anything for his own benifit.
This is author's 3rd book and my 2nd book.....From my previous experience with rise of worm sovereign i feel this is also gonna be blast. Author writes quite a good plot with very few holes and an extensive world building with apt description. So here we have our MC who is not from the main bloodline family and found an ultimate inheritance but that needs to sacrifice people. so he brings people from the family and sacrifice them and in them includes his lover who is pregnant(he doesnt know). Both MC and his lover offered sacrifices to make the deal with the devil with MC sacrificing his team for power and his lover sacrificed their baby so that MC doesnt get this power and since devil had to honor both the deals MC was banished to other world. This will surely be a blast
(Looks around *SCREAMS* Okay lets start this *Clears throat to type*) First of all I want to hate Lucius (MC) but I can't, who will dislike a ruthless yet cunning, witty and a man who will do anything to achieve his goals. (T_T) Yes, he's your usual anti hero starting off in an ancient setting to achieve his plan (Though it made me recall Hellboy movies for some reason) Character development of MC remains unsettling and quick in first 6 chapters and he goes from 0 to 100 very soon, but that's how he is from the beginning. Although I really wanna see will he go on a guilt trip after coming conscious into another body (Well, after all he will begin his journey from point 0 again as a punishment) Nonetheless you don't really have to worry about quality and grammar, the picture will be shown vividly to you even that cosmos stranded scenario too in chap 7 can be played in brain effortlessly. Although I still pity those 3 companion men rather Mira, well the baby was innocent but at the initial chapters I KNEW BABY WOULD HAVE A BIGGER PICTURE AND PURPOSE (Lol!)
Amazing storyline, simple power pyramid but in depth world structure and political dynamics, no OP golden finger, best MC setup, cold and calculating (as an antihero suppose to be which most authors don't understand), completely focused on goals: army building, finance generating, political connection, no unnecessary sideline story of emotion or romance. Completely different from most story out there which follows same tamplate and either has harem or romance to increase readers. Read till 509 ep and love every bit of it
Hahaha RETURN OF FANG YAUN😏😁😁😁😁😁😁❤️❤️❤️❤️ I like heavenly villains novel the best
Hello, I really liked your work, but I'm tormented by a few questions. The first question is, did the protagonist get his true name and how will it affect him? The second question is, after receiving the true name and the inherent demonic mana, will he be able to use spells normally, without them being destroyed after a couple of uses? The third question is when will there be a sequel?
I have read 50 chapters untill the part where I have to unlock new chapters and I am not happy. I was entreaked by story read it with 'patience' (I have emphasized patience bcz I don't have a lot of it) I also have very short attention span like I get bored quickly but author did a great job at synopsis and his tags I read it and many times slept in reading the chapter in between I am bored out of my mind after reading it till now and honestly feels like I wasted my time like story progresses at a snails pace mc is like recovering for who knows how long and I cannot explain it in words but the tag overpowered will come into effect after 1000 chapters the way it's progressing.I have dropped it's just too slow ,even if author said it will be slow but there is nothing really going it is just slow for sake of being slow you know what I mean.
I'm dropping this novel, the beginning is bad and makes no sense. The MC is just dumb who thinks he is smart, trusting demons is always bad and thinking he would be the strongest in the world with a wish seems forced. When he gets to the next world instead of trying to understand how the world works, he tries to create a demonic mark on his own soul without caring how it would work or what repercussions it would have and almost kills himself. Putting this together with the pace of the novel being slow, strange and with several infodump makes everything boring and tiresome.
Spoiler de révélation TL;DR - Very slow beginning, annoying side characters. MC's a docile puppy. Very slow. Also very annoying side character that constantly interrupts the MC. MC's a momma's boy, constantly explaining himself. It's very hard to read without getting annoyed and frustrated. The world building is decent but the info dumps are too much.
I don't like the nerf in the MC with magic and invalidates MC knowledge for the most part.Also the compatibility with the body he said ways of fixing it,then saying he can't without explanations or trying.The family connection not controlling people properly especially with what happend with the MC near the start of the novel,invaliding that soon after MC in new world.Dies not match title.But it's what I expect from this authors work.
Spoiler de révélation I am at chap 113 and until the mc reach the other world this was a good novel. But for a mc who will kill even his gf for power this mc is oddly close to his new family, the problem is when the mc does a groundbreaking discovery, his family is nonchalant about it and they were like meh. The novel became lazy to explain the implications of his action ,and in later part even his demonic powers were not the main focus, I think if you introduced the enemies at first before our mcs actions it would have been great, but now he is just explaining sh it to his family who gave no particular satisfactory reaction.
It’s great but author quit it and started up like 2 more novels, i would love to see where this story goes but if author can’t keep the updates coming it’s no fun and ruins the basis of the novels growth
Honestly love this book, and it's by far the best one the author had written. There is only 1 huge glaring issue..... the author isn't updating it anymore. The story starts out dark, but the MC did learn from it in a way. The powers the author gave the characters is very intresting and unique. He always had my attention and left me wanting to read more.
¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!one of the best out there on this site, story is compelling and but very slow update.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
hey author, are you going to complete this novel????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It starts dark then the MC's personality shifts without warning. He becomes a mama's boy who is constantly explaining himself. The expositions and information dumps are crazy. don't feel bad skipping them, you won't miss a thing. Nothing happens for 30 chapters. Then nothing much happens until 100 chapters There is an annoying female character that gets forced onto the readers. Her job is to annoy the readers. She asks about everything all the time, interrupts every discussion. The MC spends chapters explaining himself to this female character over and over. Good luck. Its like author decided he wanted a female character and then forced one into every scene. you can literally edit her out and nothing changes. she adds absolutely nothing. Everytime I see her name I skim through. So don't feel bad about skipping said chapters. believe me, you won't miss anything important.
A great novel, there are sometimes some spelling errors but they are rare and don't impede once understanding of the novel. The story itself is great as well, the mc is intelligent and plans things through, conflicts are created realistically as well. The side character design is done well as well, while their thoughts sometimes sound somewhat two-dimensional that is likely because in these instances they are only one sentence or so long. The world building is done quite well, only the amount of 'copies' of a gift that exist is too low, but this should be no problem for most and has no actual impact on the story. Definitely recommend you to read it if you don't want your typical hero mc or an mc that has some kind of revenge plan or any some such as this mc is only in it for power and power alone.
I read until 33 chapters and I have to say that this is the slowest novel I have ever read. You basically defined the meaning of slow. I don't mind slow pacing but a slow pace without any conflict or plot is so boring that I felt like sleeping after shortly waking up in the morning.
One of the best novel i read in my entire life, it has every thing i want, smart and evil MC , nice world building and side characters , only down side is need more frequent updates , i think author just focus on this and not the other 2 novels he or she writes
I'm 30 chapters in and although the story hasn't necessarily reached the genesis for growth in the mc. It has great world-building and side-elements. Keep up the great work!
Love the book sans the grammar, but taking a break?? Really, author san??? 😱 😭 😰 😣 😱 😭 😰 😣 You can't do that to us atleast release chapters with a reduced frequency. Please 😌
It's not a bad read. Unfortunately, the author seems to be on hiatus. What's available however is of a high quality. I haven't noticed any glaring language errors so far.
Slow-paced story + slow release rate? :3 The story, world, and something something itself is interesting. really but the author is just keep on stretching the chapters(progress?) with his 'important info' and other paragraphs that is basically there just for the sake of filling some empty space?(maybe?). I mean there is some experiment or something that can be explained and be done in 3 chp but got stretched up to 5chp or more with the talking, pondering, and blabbering? something like that. and personallythat is not cool :v so yeah. and If you're looking for an Overpowered MC. this one is more of a Weak to Strong one rather than op (maybe he go Overpowered later on? idk). he got some unique power, and his brain is working fine. his family think he is clever and smart too, Int/Wis +1
Sorry this novel not for me , was hoping for something like reverend insanity. But this is more slice of life (very slow). Seems like this going be more kingdom building and not really a evil mc. Still the novel seems intresting and well written if you like a slice of life story with relationship building.
Spoiler de révélation I like the novel for the most part. Love evil MCs that don't show mercy and plot. Only problems I see is how easily MC gains minions and how much freedom he has as a young novel. I would expect the heir to have more restrictions. Its just been too easy for him so his plotting isn't as impressive as it could be. Also its brilliant when other characters show intelligence of their own and a mc is able to checkmate them by out thinking them but so far there hasn't been much intelligence from the cast. The second problem I notice is irregular chapter releases lately. Seemed like they were steady up until this month with no mention of any hiatus.
I read this up to chapter 53, the writing quality itself is really good, but the novel itself was terribly slow to the point of pain. Within those 50 chapters there was practically 0 action, the only thing we got was an annoying servant girl who acted like a mother, so to sum up, the writing quality itself is good, no mistakes, the environment are nice and characters also have "character" but the story itself in my opinion leaves a lot to be desired 3.6/5 from me
The story development is nice and all.. the mc is believes in using his head more often than fists. So far the world building is going fine too. The only problem I have is with the way you describe every little action. Some places where questions need not be asked, they are still added making it unnecessary. Like if Lucian reached a door, he will ask Kiana- I guess this is the place. The mc doesn't need confirmation from his Kiana for every little things. Somethings can be written in a simple way- Kiana bring me some food. We don't always need the conversation of - I am feeling a bit hungry, should we have our food now? Lets head out then.. I feel like that 80% of the texts in the story are conversations like that. It has been like 250 something chapters but I feel like I read about 50 chapters. Whatever was written can be compressed in such low amount of chapters. I don't hate more descriptive stories but there is a balance between too much and too little. Well I understand the need to keep up the word count and the need for new ideas. But having a scene stretched on for like 10 chapters isn't fun. The brewery plan itself took like I don't know how many chapters. Three chapters were of him going there to check on the brewery and another chapter was about the the brewery is working. Details are good but unnecessary details makes me want to skip paras after paras. So I hope the author can change this. Sometimes I can literally feel my heart burn with how slow things are.
At chapter 45 and it seems good so far. Reminds me of Warlock in a Magus World in that the mc is reincarnated from a more “scientifically advanced” world. This gives them a more analytical way of looking at the new worlds magic or superpower system.
First I have to point out 2 bad things about this book, first is that the cover doesn't fit at all, our MC is nothing like the one on the cover and I can't imagine him ever becoming like that. Second, some words are sometimes inncorect, I would assume that is because of wrong autocorrect, but it doesn't happen more than 1 word per chapter. Other than those two problems the whole novel is a breath of fresh air, power system is interesting, MC is truly cunning and the world building is great. Can't wait for further chapters 😊
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Keep up the good work. The Evil protagonist got this book a five star review from me. IT IS ONE OF THE FEW NOVELS WHICH FEATURES AN COLD,DARK,RUTHLESS, AND AN EVIL MC. From my perspective this is perfect
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Well from the synopsis i see that were off to a truly dark start. Sacrificing love for power is it worth it? Will it ever be worth it? Find the answer to those in this novel. I mist say this is one of the darkest synopsis i’ve ever read. Its noting like the walker of worlds which fasinates you and make you feel like your flying. And by the way author pls dont make his lover appear in his second life pls? I turly hate stories where rivalry is is not dead even after both of them die or even when one of them is dead. This is quite possibly a anti-hero protagonist who would do anything for his own benifit.