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The deserves all the praise it gets as not only does the world and world events evolve as we see through the eyes of the character, but we also get the sense of mystery and adventure that comes with it. Charcter design pretty good right now, honestly can't wait to see where it goes. Can't wait for the story to continue further.
Amazing writing quality, unique and interesting characters, regular updates and a well thought world background and good story development but there are too little free chapters to really judge the novel and decide if you want to spend your coins or freepasses.
I thought it will be bland but I am impressed! It's pretty unique for a gaming novel just by reading the early chapters and I am very immersed in the dialogues and the characters were lifelike and realistic. It was easy to be attached to them as I read them. All in all, I am sure this novel will become great someday.
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I really like the MMORPG genre and this is right up my street . I also love the fact that it is not youre generic novel . I also hope that it would not stop anytime soon .
I'm a bit curious about how the story will play out. From the way it has been written so far is interesting. Usually i don't read a lot of novels regarding game novels but it has captured my attention.🤔
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I love it!!!!!! My god! It's been so long since I found a novel that suits my tastes and interests. Seriously, I was literally crying while reading this novel. Its just so goood. The character development, the story writing, the characters designs everything is just too good to be true!!!!
nice ... . thnks for the work i like vrmmorpg type books a lot and this us also well made hoped to see a guild system thiugh but as per storyline its good in its own league
I cant really find fault in this story. only that the releases are to little but Considering that the author writes 3 novels at once the author at least gives 1 chap a day if not more and I don't want to force more out of him or the writers Quality may drop So overall I recommend
Read up till the female lead fought the Berserker and I can say it's pretty good and unique for a virtual reality novel Sadly the author updates 1 chapter a day, I'll return and binge read this later.
The only mistaken is the part about Adam and Eve. Honestly, it offends people's religions, so probably should've put a warning. And we all know Adam died, plus he had no powers. So other than that, the books nice.
This novel is good. it's just the chapter is so low for now, also the grammar is good. Just waiting for another update, so excited for the next chapter. I hope the author can update more.
This story is truly amazing!!! I have read other stories, but this story's storyline caught my attention. It is a unique one. Excited to read it.
It was a good read like the characters the interesting plot and the world building, but I'm not really a fan of gaming novels so I'm out but best of luck for the author
Overall it’s a good read and it seems to be heading in the right direction at least in the world building way there has been a few times where the author has accidentally swapped him or her or a he and she. but that happens in more books than most of us realize at least here on this website. for a while there I kind of want to punch something or someone from the time that was wasted and character creation with just talking it was like come on get a move on but that was ok.
I already read 30 chapters...and loved it😍😍...It's different from other storyline and fun to read...I'll read it till the end🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘🥰
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A gem what an amazing novel about virtual games out there. To my taste Sword Art online is great as is log horizon, so is Ark. But this is definitely going to be one of the best, if not the best, it's a masterpiece, each and every chapter is interesting the story flows naturally and everyone of the characters have it's own charm, a must if you like this kind of setting.
I ignored this book initially thinking that it will bore me and its more of a book for younger generation. To my surprise, i got hooked. It makes me want to play rpg games suddenly. Lol. The storyline is really interesting and characters are well written. Two thumbs to the author.
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The deserves all the praise it gets as not only does the world and world events evolve as we see through the eyes of the character, but we also get the sense of mystery and adventure that comes with it. Charcter design pretty good right now, honestly can't wait to see where it goes. Can't wait for the story to continue further.
Amazing writing quality, unique and interesting characters, regular updates and a well thought world background and good story development but there are too little free chapters to really judge the novel and decide if you want to spend your coins or freepasses.
I thought it will be bland but I am impressed! It's pretty unique for a gaming novel just by reading the early chapters and I am very immersed in the dialogues and the characters were lifelike and realistic. It was easy to be attached to them as I read them. All in all, I am sure this novel will become great someday.
just supporting the author ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
I really like the MMORPG genre and this is right up my street . I also love the fact that it is not youre generic novel . I also hope that it would not stop anytime soon .
I'm a bit curious about how the story will play out. From the way it has been written so far is interesting. Usually i don't read a lot of novels regarding game novels but it has captured my attention.🤔
Spoiler de révélation I love it!!!!!! My god! It's been so long since I found a novel that suits my tastes and interests. Seriously, I was literally crying while reading this novel. Its just so goood. The character development, the story writing, the characters designs everything is just too good to be true!!!!
nice ... . thnks for the work i like vrmmorpg type books a lot and this us also well made hoped to see a guild system thiugh but as per storyline its good in its own league
I cant really find fault in this story. only that the releases are to little but Considering that the author writes 3 novels at once the author at least gives 1 chap a day if not more and I don't want to force more out of him or the writers Quality may drop So overall I recommend
Read up till the female lead fought the Berserker and I can say it's pretty good and unique for a virtual reality novel Sadly the author updates 1 chapter a day, I'll return and binge read this later.
The only mistaken is the part about Adam and Eve. Honestly, it offends people's religions, so probably should've put a warning. And we all know Adam died, plus he had no powers. So other than that, the books nice.
This novel is good. it's just the chapter is so low for now, also the grammar is good. Just waiting for another update, so excited for the next chapter. I hope the author can update more.
This story is truly amazing!!! I have read other stories, but this story's storyline caught my attention. It is a unique one. Excited to read it.
It was a good read like the characters the interesting plot and the world building, but I'm not really a fan of gaming novels so I'm out but best of luck for the author
Overall it’s a good read and it seems to be heading in the right direction at least in the world building way there has been a few times where the author has accidentally swapped him or her or a he and she. but that happens in more books than most of us realize at least here on this website. for a while there I kind of want to punch something or someone from the time that was wasted and character creation with just talking it was like come on get a move on but that was ok.
I already read 30 chapters...and loved it😍😍...It's different from other storyline and fun to read...I'll read it till the end🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘🥰
check out my new book angelica daiys pls vote for me by your powerstone.it is really good story and adventures, I would be really happy if you would vote for me
A gem what an amazing novel about virtual games out there. To my taste Sword Art online is great as is log horizon, so is Ark. But this is definitely going to be one of the best, if not the best, it's a masterpiece, each and every chapter is interesting the story flows naturally and everyone of the characters have it's own charm, a must if you like this kind of setting.
I ignored this book initially thinking that it will bore me and its more of a book for younger generation. To my surprise, i got hooked. It makes me want to play rpg games suddenly. Lol. The storyline is really interesting and characters are well written. Two thumbs to the author.
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