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I usually never write reviews but this plot is so garbage that I have to give this 1 star.
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Wife was in the ICU Doctor : it seems she is in coma Husband : please save her doctor! She is just 30. Suddenly the ECG started beeping A hand moved, Her lips mumbled And she spoke: I-im 29 ...
What is with all the English sounding names in these novels recently? Are they finally taking out the chinese aspects of the stories like names/places?? Noticed it with a bunch of novels recently .
not good. while I don't mind generic stories this one is very boring and it's mostly just having background characters talking about how something is impossible and then the MC doing it like it's nothing. this happens in a lot of stories but this one is so bland and the MC has the personality of a stick.😐
The author is brain dead and can't make anything sound good or make sense. But that's normal. I see a novel with a strong wish fulfillment guy who takes a cute apprentice, and teaches them things. It's good if he takes more. No romance. Just wholesome apprentices. It would be good. I don't know what this will be though, only thirty chapters at this time.
So, you read the summary, right? Do yourself a favor and skip the first chapter. It's literally just nonsense irrelevant exposition about stuff that occured in a world that will never matter.
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A great story from the trial reads. The MC is as advertised (overpowered) but the point of this novel isn’t epic fights and life-or-death situations. The MC’s story is over before the story even starts, and he just wants to go back to Earth. Getting waylaid isn’t a big deal for him, and his pinky toe has more power than the rest of the world combined. I like that the MC is very calm, and doesn’t just kill people for breathing at him. The second MC, a native girl from the magic world, has a standard Xianxia backstory but is still pure at heart. Can not wait for more!!
I think the author doesn't know what magical world is... Let me put it this way it's like a game with a texture pack with renamed items,etc. It's not even a magical world it's basically another xianxia world he stumbled in with just weak spells and such. And another things is how can there be similar herbs for both worlds? This novel is just your average I say face slap chinese novel. I recommend to read it just to waste time.
this is one if the best novels so far in the trial read its refreshing and intersting.the mc is smart and is not a simp that change his mind bcz of a girl am looking forward it it. i only wish that not all mc enimes in this world act like arrgoant young master who get offnded for no reason like most if the xianxua novels out there.
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This is same Typical Cultivation Novels with Magic..it is disappointing and Boring. I didn't like it because from chapter 6 I could correctly predict all the stuff will happen. if you are old reader then this is not for you.
I did not know you could mess up a setting this badly. Just imagine having the strength, the power, the experience and the wealth of a God and just playing around like a toddler with a stick. MC ultra awesome senses are stopped by a half meter thick wall of concrete. MC has the reaction speed of a normal human, because anything faster would be able to avoid 100% of the trouble. MC entangles with mortals that have done nothing for him and will die in a blink of an eye.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Its just old boring OP MC face slapping. Heh so disappointed. God lv MC ->returns from cultivation world to Earth->space storm->instead of Earth end up in magic world->meet naive and kind women->start face slapping.
although it's a good read when you're bored but the plot and spacing of the story is just too stretched. I mean it takes 9 chapters forexplain one little fight between the family and he only fought 2 people and they were both just w slaps and that was all. took 5 chapters just to ask her if she wants to be an alchemist.
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Review: As in the sypnosis you can see that the mc is overpowered and was transported to a magical world. The point is, that he doesn't have his original powers anymore, he needs to 'recover' them and he is stuck inside a mortal body. He met a girl from a noble family who is deemed useless as she has no magical talent. Where the story goes should be pretty obvious now. The way to get stronger in this magical world is literally the same as a cultivation world. It's simply copy and paste with different names. Absorb and get stronger. Cultivation is just simply a stronger version. Also, apparently the herbs in this magical world is the same in his previous cultivation world. Alchemist... yay........ Translation Quality: 3* (Sadly the quality dropped recently) SoU: 3* (This.... Idk man) Story Development: 2* (Man, it's so generic and cliche that you can predict it's development at chapter 1 - 2) Character Design: 2* (At least they have emotions) World Background: 2* (Idc anymore)
No different from those "Returning to the Mortal World" novels, just has a slight twist on it's premise. An almighty being decides to leave the cultivation world because of reasons? Space turbulence means that he's sent to a high-fantasy world instead, obviously having lost most of his godlike cultivation, but still having enough of it to curb-stomp any cannon fodder that dares stand in his way. There's nothing to write home about in terms of characterization. The MC was a god, so he's indifferent like a god. He deals with enemies like a god too, by provoking them and then leaving them alive so that they can run back to the next strongest enemy, and regroup to gang up on him in a never ending cycle of cannon fodder beat em ups that take more than 10 chapters to end. And I'm not joking about that, in the 20 chapters that WebNovel has graced us with, the first confrontation we see starts at chapter 7 and continues until chapter 19. There are other chapters in the middle that don't focus on the fighting but these actually take up the minority since there are whole chapters just retelling the fight that happened 2 chapters ago. None of the supporting cast are any good, we have Christina, a daughter from a major family who cannot absorb magic elements (read cultivate), whose mother has just passed and who is shunned and bullied by the whole family, including her own father. We're supposed to feel bad for her because she buys food for the poor or something. And the poor people are very grateful to her despite never doing anything for her. Which I take issue with since apparently it's uncommon for people to be unable to absorb the elements, surely, if she has helped so many people there has to have been one person that was talented and felt grateful enough to give her some sort of support??? But I digress. Then we have Christina's family which is just an amalgamation of every generic baddie you've ever seen in a cultivation novel. Plot lines are probably going to be the same thing over and over again. He transmigrated with his godlike artifacts but they didn't get transported in his spiritual sea or anything, they just got sent to the new world and they'll probably be guarded by the strongest forces of that world, to which he'll show up and swat away. You might enjoy this if you get a kick out of those immortal returning to Earth novels, but otherwise there are other novels worth your time.
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It's not good. It's literally just xianxia in another world but everyone is a lot weaker and uses "spells" instead. Everyone acts like they're Chinese with the same old "losing face", "face slapping", "old ancestors attacking MC", etc. Which means not only is it generic af, you also get this weird jarring feeling from the culture collision. Like imagine Harry Potter acting like a rich young master level of jarring. Should've just made it a normal cultivation novel instead of this xianxia pretending to be wizard world nonsense.
RAW Name please?? ............................................................................................................................
Recently ive Read manga with a similar plot to this, there was a cultivator who ended up in a superhero type world and the heroes kept challenging him(they were loosing everytime btw)
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According to google translate, the english translation of the name of the original book down below is MARILIBROSRIGA.180.18 19:39 Dear Webnovel, we as your customers know that you are busy translating novels, but please at least fix errors like this.
I can’t find the raws but I am very intrigued by the synopsis. Webnovel, please put this one up for trial read so that it has a chance of being properly released. I am not going to lie, most other novels on pilot read (save one or two) don’t seem to have much potential.
this must be good.....................................this must be good.....................................this must be good.....................................
Sinceramente es una novela vastante mala ya que no aporta nada nuevo al mundo de novelas que hay por ahí que son exactamente de la misma forma de estructura nafa recomendable
I usually never write reviews but this plot is so garbage that I have to give this 1 star.
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Wife was in the ICU Doctor : it seems she is in coma Husband : please save her doctor! She is just 30. Suddenly the ECG started beeping A hand moved, Her lips mumbled And she spoke: I-im 29 ...
What is with all the English sounding names in these novels recently? Are they finally taking out the chinese aspects of the stories like names/places?? Noticed it with a bunch of novels recently .
not good. while I don't mind generic stories this one is very boring and it's mostly just having background characters talking about how something is impossible and then the MC doing it like it's nothing. this happens in a lot of stories but this one is so bland and the MC has the personality of a stick.😐
The author is brain dead and can't make anything sound good or make sense. But that's normal. I see a novel with a strong wish fulfillment guy who takes a cute apprentice, and teaches them things. It's good if he takes more. No romance. Just wholesome apprentices. It would be good. I don't know what this will be though, only thirty chapters at this time.
So, you read the summary, right? Do yourself a favor and skip the first chapter. It's literally just nonsense irrelevant exposition about stuff that occured in a world that will never matter.
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Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping Face Slapping
A great story from the trial reads. The MC is as advertised (overpowered) but the point of this novel isn’t epic fights and life-or-death situations. The MC’s story is over before the story even starts, and he just wants to go back to Earth. Getting waylaid isn’t a big deal for him, and his pinky toe has more power than the rest of the world combined. I like that the MC is very calm, and doesn’t just kill people for breathing at him. The second MC, a native girl from the magic world, has a standard Xianxia backstory but is still pure at heart. Can not wait for more!!
I think the author doesn't know what magical world is... Let me put it this way it's like a game with a texture pack with renamed items,etc. It's not even a magical world it's basically another xianxia world he stumbled in with just weak spells and such. And another things is how can there be similar herbs for both worlds? This novel is just your average I say face slap chinese novel. I recommend to read it just to waste time.
this is one if the best novels so far in the trial read its refreshing and intersting.the mc is smart and is not a simp that change his mind bcz of a girl am looking forward it it. i only wish that not all mc enimes in this world act like arrgoant young master who get offnded for no reason like most if the xianxua novels out there.
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This is same Typical Cultivation Novels with Magic..it is disappointing and Boring. I didn't like it because from chapter 6 I could correctly predict all the stuff will happen. if you are old reader then this is not for you.
I did not know you could mess up a setting this badly. Just imagine having the strength, the power, the experience and the wealth of a God and just playing around like a toddler with a stick. MC ultra awesome senses are stopped by a half meter thick wall of concrete. MC has the reaction speed of a normal human, because anything faster would be able to avoid 100% of the trouble. MC entangles with mortals that have done nothing for him and will die in a blink of an eye.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Its just old boring OP MC face slapping. Heh so disappointed. God lv MC ->returns from cultivation world to Earth->space storm->instead of Earth end up in magic world->meet naive and kind women->start face slapping.
although it's a good read when you're bored but the plot and spacing of the story is just too stretched. I mean it takes 9 chapters forexplain one little fight between the family and he only fought 2 people and they were both just w slaps and that was all. took 5 chapters just to ask her if she wants to be an alchemist.
Spoiler de révélation Review: As in the sypnosis you can see that the mc is overpowered and was transported to a magical world. The point is, that he doesn't have his original powers anymore, he needs to 'recover' them and he is stuck inside a mortal body. He met a girl from a noble family who is deemed useless as she has no magical talent. Where the story goes should be pretty obvious now. The way to get stronger in this magical world is literally the same as a cultivation world. It's simply copy and paste with different names. Absorb and get stronger. Cultivation is just simply a stronger version. Also, apparently the herbs in this magical world is the same in his previous cultivation world. Alchemist... yay........ Translation Quality: 3* (Sadly the quality dropped recently) SoU: 3* (This.... Idk man) Story Development: 2* (Man, it's so generic and cliche that you can predict it's development at chapter 1 - 2) Character Design: 2* (At least they have emotions) World Background: 2* (Idc anymore)
No different from those "Returning to the Mortal World" novels, just has a slight twist on it's premise. An almighty being decides to leave the cultivation world because of reasons? Space turbulence means that he's sent to a high-fantasy world instead, obviously having lost most of his godlike cultivation, but still having enough of it to curb-stomp any cannon fodder that dares stand in his way. There's nothing to write home about in terms of characterization. The MC was a god, so he's indifferent like a god. He deals with enemies like a god too, by provoking them and then leaving them alive so that they can run back to the next strongest enemy, and regroup to gang up on him in a never ending cycle of cannon fodder beat em ups that take more than 10 chapters to end. And I'm not joking about that, in the 20 chapters that WebNovel has graced us with, the first confrontation we see starts at chapter 7 and continues until chapter 19. There are other chapters in the middle that don't focus on the fighting but these actually take up the minority since there are whole chapters just retelling the fight that happened 2 chapters ago. None of the supporting cast are any good, we have Christina, a daughter from a major family who cannot absorb magic elements (read cultivate), whose mother has just passed and who is shunned and bullied by the whole family, including her own father. We're supposed to feel bad for her because she buys food for the poor or something. And the poor people are very grateful to her despite never doing anything for her. Which I take issue with since apparently it's uncommon for people to be unable to absorb the elements, surely, if she has helped so many people there has to have been one person that was talented and felt grateful enough to give her some sort of support??? But I digress. Then we have Christina's family which is just an amalgamation of every generic baddie you've ever seen in a cultivation novel. Plot lines are probably going to be the same thing over and over again. He transmigrated with his godlike artifacts but they didn't get transported in his spiritual sea or anything, they just got sent to the new world and they'll probably be guarded by the strongest forces of that world, to which he'll show up and swat away. You might enjoy this if you get a kick out of those immortal returning to Earth novels, but otherwise there are other novels worth your time.
Spoiler de révélation It's not good. It's literally just xianxia in another world but everyone is a lot weaker and uses "spells" instead. Everyone acts like they're Chinese with the same old "losing face", "face slapping", "old ancestors attacking MC", etc. Which means not only is it generic af, you also get this weird jarring feeling from the culture collision. Like imagine Harry Potter acting like a rich young master level of jarring. Should've just made it a normal cultivation novel instead of this xianxia pretending to be wizard world nonsense.
RAW Name please?? ............................................................................................................................
Recently ive Read manga with a similar plot to this, there was a cultivator who ended up in a superhero type world and the heroes kept challenging him(they were loosing everytime btw)
gogogovogovi I hhcgcyftf fgfctctctc hvgctct gog!!!!!go!!!!! tttyyrfgrfdfvfdxgcbvgyvhcyctctctctccr to vvvncgcgcgchchchchfyfyfyfy go'''''''go;;;;;;;
Looks good Ggnvvgvggredhmkdddcnmgtc nfsfbnjhggbnnjjjhhgbnnnnggergjiigkjrnndkfnfrblfmfnkcmfklSnbfhkfmfClfmfnmfl
According to google translate, the english translation of the name of the original book down below is MARILIBROSRIGA.180.18 19:39 Dear Webnovel, we as your customers know that you are busy translating novels, but please at least fix errors like this.
I can’t find the raws but I am very intrigued by the synopsis. Webnovel, please put this one up for trial read so that it has a chance of being properly released. I am not going to lie, most other novels on pilot read (save one or two) don’t seem to have much potential.
this must be good.....................................this must be good.....................................this must be good.....................................
Sinceramente es una novela vastante mala ya que no aporta nada nuevo al mundo de novelas que hay por ahí que son exactamente de la misma forma de estructura nafa recomendable