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The concept of the story is a badboyXgoodgirl. A story with a mix of mystery. To be honest, this novel's plot is good. There's no major grammar issues while reading it. BUT, the problem is, the execution. I can read a story with typos and grammatical issues as long as the flow is good. I'm not saying this novel's flow is bad. I'm saying, it just hops too abruptly. I see the 1st chapter like a good, rough sketch. Instead of painting the sketch and bring it to life, it remained a sketch. It can be good or bad. Depends. I think the author needs to give more time on working the first chapter, or the initial chapters. It doesn't matter if it'll be a bit longer. Good flow and interesting start will make readers feel it's short. Because right now, it's hard to connect to the female lead and sympathize with her. Overall, it's not bad. It has a high potential as the plot seems promising. there were interesting things thrown here and there.
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THE STORY REALLY GETS HOT FROM CHAPTER 3 ONWARDS! wish there was an anime, i gotta give the writer credit for sculpting such an interactive story ! with imagining, cliche bad boy and innocent girl tale but good developments
This story was a really great read. Just very fast-paced. I recommend this story to anyone looking for a good romance book to settle down on the couch and read. You will not de disappointed!! Thumbs up to the author!!!
-English is probably not the authors first language. they would definitely benefit from an editor. currently the text is jarring with all of the typos- not misspelled words but the wrong words or word endings. - the chapters and story are average at chapter 3. nothing really stands out as unique other than the name Halora. essentially it just seems like popular copy and paste but the writing is more on the side of average than good. oh, and the FL seems to have a randomly selected phobia- there's probably a reason later, but at this point it feels randomly selected. - the only world building that's happened so far is descriptions of people's clothes which I don't think really matters since scenes and days change so quickly.
Good work author author. Hoping for more chapters and please, spare some time to re read and edit few long paragraphs . But all in all, i like how the story was cretred and planned.
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Please support my novel " Irene the lady who turned down fate" it might be lacking since I am new to this field but I will try harder and harder to improve it. And I really liked this novel!! Good luck!!
This story takes me back to my good old days, reading from another platform. However, the plot was a bit overused, and the story's development was fast, which makes it hard to read. There were also some grammatical errors, typos, and misuses of punctuation marks. As a fellow whose first language wasn't English, that was quite understandable, but I hope it could be revised. It would be better to add more details with the descriptions and make the characterization more solid. Although it wasn't as clean as it could be, I admit that it was still good and the twist on this plotline was quite interesting. I appreciate the endeavor of the author, and I wish you good luck!
There is probably a good story hidden somewhere in this, but the poor grammar and weird pacing makes it hard to find. I wonder if maybe English isn't the first language of the author or something. Given that others seem to like the story and characters a lot, this could probably benefit from a proofreading and a bit of editing.
Great story. We have our fl mc who is outcast in the school but gets saved by ml. ML is bad boy of the school but he is good to fl. We have typical mean popular girl group as side villains. But story evolves when we know seb's (ml) real identity which is alpha werewolf. let's see if can live in human world? Does he have feeling for fl? What happened 2 years ago? Writing Quality - It's great but I get confused with fl's name which is sometimes Hermione instead of Halora but it might have some other meaning to it. The author sometimes should try describing the scene happening more. Story development - It's smooth, plot is great. Character design - I like Halora's character despite her being timid, she isn't a fool to fight a losing game when a class of hundred is against her. I have yet to find what is bad about Seb but he is good to fl and doesn't seems unreasonable. He respects fl I can't ask for more. For his alpha werewolf identity I am ready to know more with my popcorn. world background - It's normal human world with werewolf and supernatural setting. Will i recommend this story? Yeah, it's a great story. We have some side villains, a grandfather, father and Greg (Yeah, I like that side charcter.) in here. We also have that shadow man. Keep up great work Author 👍☺️.
The story is quite well written and a good plot line. The spacing is very good. I loved the characters and their dialogues but I feel that adding something about what's going on in the character's mind in some scenarios may make the readers more attached to the characters and also in some places I feel like the story bounced from one part to another a little abruptly. But the rest is great. It was a good read
Just have one word to say WoW, 💛amazing story line, great dialogues, wonderful writing keep doing your work author would recommend this book to everyone out there💚💚💚
5/5 (ФДФ)* Nice synopsis ((ΦωΦ)) Descriptions of each character are good (ↀДↀ)⁼³₌₃ I personally like the way the author created the dialogues of the antagonists XD Great job!! :D
As much as I wanted to disprove what that Sandra girl did to Halora, but sadly this happens in real life..tsk poor Halora, she suffered but good thing Baby Seb is there to rescue her lol..this book is awesome! can't help but relate...
This is a pretty great book so far. I started reading it out of boredom but grew pretty attached. I definitely can’t wait to read more and see what happens
it's a nice book I'm looking forward to the next episodes .Please update them fast I really love this story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love the excitement vibe, especially in the first chapter. I can say that the plot is refreshing and unique. It is also well-written, making it easy to comprehend. Fighting author!
Another Slow Burn Novel which focuses on the Characters' interactions as well emotions, and the those romantic readers out there might love this. My Boyfriend Is A Campus Bad Boy. The Title itself speaks the plot of the novel. The Book Cover looks good as it fits the Genre and it might tell something, or nothing at all.
The first chapter is kinda interesting. I already knew that there will be bullying is going to happen in the story but I didn't expect it to happened in the first chapter😂 ilove highschool novel i think this novel suits me hahahah keep it up the good work!
I realy love the character in all its really interesting and very recommended to read for everyone I really like and ill be staying tune for more update keep up the update author hehehe I really like you book
a very promising book with an eye catching title and synopsis. The flow can use a little work along with continuity of sentences but other than that it is a good read and will go into my library
like the other review said, this story has a good potential. but kind of jumping from one event to other. i would like if there's some pace in the development. but it still good book
I give five start to show my support for this book. This is a good story and I felt like watching a drama while reading this book. I did assume the scene. In the middle of first chapter I got confused where that little girl come from. That made my curiosity burn. Thank you so much for this amizing work. And all the best author.❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I gave it a try. The first chapter wan wasn't too bad, pretty well structured, just some... logical flaws. Such as "staying humble and forgiving" immediately being followed by struggling with "controlling her anger". The logical flaws expanded in the following chapters, to the point that by chapter 3 there were some sentances that simply didn't make sense to me. I gave up at the fifth chapter, so keep in mind that the story may very well improve after that. Some of my issues with the logic may be problems of personal definition. The "bad boy" seems to be popular and rich. My mind keeps trying to paint the main character in the image of another famous character by that name. On the good side, there were some very well written scenery and descriptive fragments. Little gems scattered here and there. On the bad side, I felt like many things happened in confusing bursts, that would have been much easier to understand if they'd been described more slowly. Luck in writing the rest of the story. [img=fp]
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I can't say I am okay with the concepts of bullying, but hey, we need that to make sure the gallant prince saves our heroine! That aside, I did like the author's writing style, but feel like they should have started with some inner monologues of our FMC. It's hard to relate with someone without knowing what's going inside their head. Otherwise, I loved what I read so far. Looking forward to the future chapters!
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I like how expressive you are with your words. You write very well and I enjoy how you describe your characters. The story itself is also enjoyable and very interesting. Keep going and I'm pretty sure this story will be received very well.
Well nice work from the author so far, teen and werewolves with romance are pretty common genres this days and with series like Teen Wolves setting a precedent. And reading this kinda got me excited about the prospects of the protags and the side characters, so well done author.
Overall refreshing and engaging concept, with relatable characters. The first few chapters I read were quite good, and I could pick up on the story. Definitely adding this to the collection. Good luck, author.
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This is a promising story. I am excited to follow the development of the relationship between the main characters. There are some slight grammatical errors but the scenes are interesting enough that you can actually overlook that. Congrats for making a good story :)
"Author's Note/ Shameless Review" This is my third novel on Webnovel. I hope you will support me until the end, and I need your reviews too. Thank you and happy reading, butterflies! **: My Boyfriend is a Campus Bad Boy is an entry for WSA 2021.
The concept of the story is a badboyXgoodgirl. A story with a mix of mystery. To be honest, this novel's plot is good. There's no major grammar issues while reading it. BUT, the problem is, the execution. I can read a story with typos and grammatical issues as long as the flow is good. I'm not saying this novel's flow is bad. I'm saying, it just hops too abruptly. I see the 1st chapter like a good, rough sketch. Instead of painting the sketch and bring it to life, it remained a sketch. It can be good or bad. Depends. I think the author needs to give more time on working the first chapter, or the initial chapters. It doesn't matter if it'll be a bit longer. Good flow and interesting start will make readers feel it's short. Because right now, it's hard to connect to the female lead and sympathize with her. Overall, it's not bad. It has a high potential as the plot seems promising. there were interesting things thrown here and there.
Spoiler de révélation THE STORY REALLY GETS HOT FROM CHAPTER 3 ONWARDS! wish there was an anime, i gotta give the writer credit for sculpting such an interactive story ! with imagining, cliche bad boy and innocent girl tale but good developments
This story was a really great read. Just very fast-paced. I recommend this story to anyone looking for a good romance book to settle down on the couch and read. You will not de disappointed!! Thumbs up to the author!!!
-English is probably not the authors first language. they would definitely benefit from an editor. currently the text is jarring with all of the typos- not misspelled words but the wrong words or word endings. - the chapters and story are average at chapter 3. nothing really stands out as unique other than the name Halora. essentially it just seems like popular copy and paste but the writing is more on the side of average than good. oh, and the FL seems to have a randomly selected phobia- there's probably a reason later, but at this point it feels randomly selected. - the only world building that's happened so far is descriptions of people's clothes which I don't think really matters since scenes and days change so quickly.
Good work author author. Hoping for more chapters and please, spare some time to re read and edit few long paragraphs . But all in all, i like how the story was cretred and planned.
Spoiler de révélation Please support my novel " Irene the lady who turned down fate" it might be lacking since I am new to this field but I will try harder and harder to improve it. And I really liked this novel!! Good luck!!
This story takes me back to my good old days, reading from another platform. However, the plot was a bit overused, and the story's development was fast, which makes it hard to read. There were also some grammatical errors, typos, and misuses of punctuation marks. As a fellow whose first language wasn't English, that was quite understandable, but I hope it could be revised. It would be better to add more details with the descriptions and make the characterization more solid. Although it wasn't as clean as it could be, I admit that it was still good and the twist on this plotline was quite interesting. I appreciate the endeavor of the author, and I wish you good luck!
There is probably a good story hidden somewhere in this, but the poor grammar and weird pacing makes it hard to find. I wonder if maybe English isn't the first language of the author or something. Given that others seem to like the story and characters a lot, this could probably benefit from a proofreading and a bit of editing.
Great story. We have our fl mc who is outcast in the school but gets saved by ml. ML is bad boy of the school but he is good to fl. We have typical mean popular girl group as side villains. But story evolves when we know seb's (ml) real identity which is alpha werewolf. let's see if can live in human world? Does he have feeling for fl? What happened 2 years ago? Writing Quality - It's great but I get confused with fl's name which is sometimes Hermione instead of Halora but it might have some other meaning to it. The author sometimes should try describing the scene happening more. Story development - It's smooth, plot is great. Character design - I like Halora's character despite her being timid, she isn't a fool to fight a losing game when a class of hundred is against her. I have yet to find what is bad about Seb but he is good to fl and doesn't seems unreasonable. He respects fl I can't ask for more. For his alpha werewolf identity I am ready to know more with my popcorn. world background - It's normal human world with werewolf and supernatural setting. Will i recommend this story? Yeah, it's a great story. We have some side villains, a grandfather, father and Greg (Yeah, I like that side charcter.) in here. We also have that shadow man. Keep up great work Author 👍☺️.
The story is quite well written and a good plot line. The spacing is very good. I loved the characters and their dialogues but I feel that adding something about what's going on in the character's mind in some scenarios may make the readers more attached to the characters and also in some places I feel like the story bounced from one part to another a little abruptly. But the rest is great. It was a good read
Just have one word to say WoW, 💛amazing story line, great dialogues, wonderful writing keep doing your work author would recommend this book to everyone out there💚💚💚
5/5 (ФДФ)* Nice synopsis ((ΦωΦ)) Descriptions of each character are good (ↀДↀ)⁼³₌₃ I personally like the way the author created the dialogues of the antagonists XD Great job!! :D
As much as I wanted to disprove what that Sandra girl did to Halora, but sadly this happens in real life..tsk poor Halora, she suffered but good thing Baby Seb is there to rescue her lol..this book is awesome! can't help but relate...
This is a pretty great book so far. I started reading it out of boredom but grew pretty attached. I definitely can’t wait to read more and see what happens
it's a nice book I'm looking forward to the next episodes .Please update them fast I really love this story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love the excitement vibe, especially in the first chapter. I can say that the plot is refreshing and unique. It is also well-written, making it easy to comprehend. Fighting author!
Another Slow Burn Novel which focuses on the Characters' interactions as well emotions, and the those romantic readers out there might love this. My Boyfriend Is A Campus Bad Boy. The Title itself speaks the plot of the novel. The Book Cover looks good as it fits the Genre and it might tell something, or nothing at all.
The first chapter is kinda interesting. I already knew that there will be bullying is going to happen in the story but I didn't expect it to happened in the first chapter😂 ilove highschool novel i think this novel suits me hahahah keep it up the good work!
I realy love the character in all its really interesting and very recommended to read for everyone I really like and ill be staying tune for more update keep up the update author hehehe I really like you book
a very promising book with an eye catching title and synopsis. The flow can use a little work along with continuity of sentences but other than that it is a good read and will go into my library
like the other review said, this story has a good potential. but kind of jumping from one event to other. i would like if there's some pace in the development. but it still good book
I give five start to show my support for this book. This is a good story and I felt like watching a drama while reading this book. I did assume the scene. In the middle of first chapter I got confused where that little girl come from. That made my curiosity burn. Thank you so much for this amizing work. And all the best author.❤️❤️❤️❤️
Spoiler de révélation I gave it a try. The first chapter wan wasn't too bad, pretty well structured, just some... logical flaws. Such as "staying humble and forgiving" immediately being followed by struggling with "controlling her anger". The logical flaws expanded in the following chapters, to the point that by chapter 3 there were some sentances that simply didn't make sense to me. I gave up at the fifth chapter, so keep in mind that the story may very well improve after that. Some of my issues with the logic may be problems of personal definition. The "bad boy" seems to be popular and rich. My mind keeps trying to paint the main character in the image of another famous character by that name. On the good side, there were some very well written scenery and descriptive fragments. Little gems scattered here and there. On the bad side, I felt like many things happened in confusing bursts, that would have been much easier to understand if they'd been described more slowly. Luck in writing the rest of the story. [img=fp]
Spoiler de révélation I can't say I am okay with the concepts of bullying, but hey, we need that to make sure the gallant prince saves our heroine! That aside, I did like the author's writing style, but feel like they should have started with some inner monologues of our FMC. It's hard to relate with someone without knowing what's going inside their head. Otherwise, I loved what I read so far. Looking forward to the future chapters!
Spoiler de révélation I like how expressive you are with your words. You write very well and I enjoy how you describe your characters. The story itself is also enjoyable and very interesting. Keep going and I'm pretty sure this story will be received very well.
Well nice work from the author so far, teen and werewolves with romance are pretty common genres this days and with series like Teen Wolves setting a precedent. And reading this kinda got me excited about the prospects of the protags and the side characters, so well done author.
Overall refreshing and engaging concept, with relatable characters. The first few chapters I read were quite good, and I could pick up on the story. Definitely adding this to the collection. Good luck, author.
Spoiler de révélation This is a promising story. I am excited to follow the development of the relationship between the main characters. There are some slight grammatical errors but the scenes are interesting enough that you can actually overlook that. Congrats for making a good story :)
"Author's Note/ Shameless Review" This is my third novel on Webnovel. I hope you will support me until the end, and I need your reviews too. Thank you and happy reading, butterflies! **: My Boyfriend is a Campus Bad Boy is an entry for WSA 2021.