My Boyfriend is a Campus Bad Boy

LV 13

BAJJ

The concept of the story is a badboyXgoodgirl. A story with a mix of mystery. To be honest, this novel's plot is good. There's no major grammar issues while reading it. BUT, the problem is, the execution. I can read a story with typos and grammatical issues as long as the flow is good. I'm not saying this novel's flow is bad. I'm saying, it just hops too abruptly. I see the 1st chapter like a good, rough sketch. Instead of painting the sketch and bring it to life, it remained a sketch. It can be good or bad. Depends. I think the author needs to give more time on working the first chapter, or the initial chapters. It doesn't matter if it'll be a bit longer. Good flow and interesting start will make readers feel it's short. Because right now, it's hard to connect to the female lead and sympathize with her. Overall, it's not bad. It has a high potential as the plot seems promising. there were interesting things thrown here and there.

3yr 9

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Gaureeey

THE STORY REALLY GETS HOT FROM CHAPTER 3 ONWARDS! wish there was an anime, i gotta give the writer credit for sculpting such an interactive story ! with imagining, cliche bad boy and innocent girl tale but good developments

3yr 12

LV 1

Sarah_kim

Good work but I'm wondering about first love with werewolves on it. It's quite interesting and I am expecting something from this story. Nevertheless, I love the concept. It is new and refreshing for me.

3yr 8

LV 4

jungsok143

Prevalent concept but I like how the author blended it with Werewolves and hidden secrets. I like it because it is a fast burn novel and I am looking forward to it. Everything can be learned and so keep up the good work, Author.

3yr 8

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

From what I have read so far, I am deeply attached to the characters. I saw that this novel has great potential and I can't help but fall in love with the MC. Haha 😂 All in all, A very recommended read for me! Plot was moving and I can feel the thrill! Kudos and Congrats! 👏

3yr 4

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LV 2

Alexis_Baker_7980

best one keep writing[img=More pls][img=More pls]

1yr 2

LV 1

Christine_Gundlach

There is probably a good story hidden somewhere in this, but the poor grammar and weird pacing makes it hard to find. I wonder if maybe English isn't the first language of the author or something. Given that others seem to like the story and characters a lot, this could probably benefit from a proofreading and a bit of editing.

3yr 2

LV 2

jj_aqua

Just have one word to say WoW, 💛amazing story line, great dialogues, wonderful writing keep doing your work author would recommend this book to everyone out there💚💚💚

3yr 2

LV 3

MBG_LOVER_op

it's a nice book I'm looking forward to the next episodes .Please update them fast I really love this story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr 2

LV 2

TahsinHossain

I can't say I am okay with the concepts of bullying, but hey, we need that to make sure the gallant prince saves our heroine! That aside, I did like the author's writing style, but feel like they should have started with some inner monologues of our FMC. It's hard to relate with someone without knowing what's going inside their head. Otherwise, I loved what I read so far. Looking forward to the future chapters!

3yr 2

LV 2

MikeWright

The story is typical, which is good. The plot, I can predict, but enjoyable I guess? This is good for teenagers, to give them flutters and stuff. An honest critique, speech, and paragraphs need a little bit more creativity and grammar needs a little bit of fixing too. But it isn't really bad. It's as good as great. But I guess it was happening fast? In less than three chapters, there were already some exciting scenes. Anyways, maybe it was purposely done like that. I can recommend it to early adolescents, surely.

3yr 2

LV 4

The_Procrastinator

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3yr 2

LV 3

Lavvy

Whew! The chs flew by so fast (not because of short cha, but because of the wonderful plot)! Haven't read such a fast-paced novel on WN for quite a while! Loved the characters of Seb and Hermione! The plot is full of suspense and I specially liked how the chs ended with different questions, which keeps the reader wanting for more! Will be waiting for more updates![img=update] Author, good job done with the plot so far![img=recommend]

3yr 2

LV 5

Ms_Anonymous

The story is great. It's a teen novel with werewolves. it's so good. And I am wondering what will happen when she gets to know ml is a werewolf. good work author.

3yr 2

LV 6

Purplebride

Another interesting book by the author and I'm reviewing after reading all chapters. This is an interesting read and a but different from other books. I totally love the bad boy vibes.

3yr 2

LV 1

Angelwang

Wow! A modern life story with a twist of Werewolves and hidden secrets. The author must be up to something interesting that would make this novel unique, and thrilling for the readers. Keep up the intriguing start, and I'm looking forward into it.

3yr 2

LV 2

Gmeung

Huhuhuhuhu....What a nice story, but I'm sadly sad for the ending....😢😭

1yr 1

LV 1

SPPrincess

This story was a really great read. Just very fast-paced. I recommend this story to anyone looking for a good romance book to settle down on the couch and read. You will not de disappointed!! Thumbs up to the author!!!

1yr 1

LV 1

Cruella23_12

Good work author author. Hoping for more chapters and please, spare some time to re read and edit few long paragraphs . But all in all, i like how the story was cretred and planned.

2yr 1