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typical___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ meaning ~ just like every novel with the same theme and concept, just normal, nothing new, I notice sometimes the translation is unsatisfactory although can get by.
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Can someone recommend me novels similar to martial arts master, flavoured son of heaven or romance of dragons and snakes... martial arts pure fighting 🙏🙏🙏🙏
I don't Understand why people giving this Novel 5 🌟? It feels like this Novel written by a child. Huge disappointed ☹️ I will not recommend this to anyone. waste of Time.
The beginning Chapter is good but later around 20-30+ Chapter. The story becoming more unnecessary world background BS. For example chapt 31. It's just to tell reader how rare alchemist. Chapter 32 tell reader that Elise ( one of heroine maybe) is alchemist. That how BS chapt 31-32 "world background" is. Too many words unnecessary just for fullfill 1 Chapter. I hope author is not doing this because he/she doesn't have any idea and must create of 1 or 2 Chapter per day.
i like it so far, seems decent. not very much details so far and a lot world building as of chapter 19, but it seems like the author is slowly building it up.
It's good hhdhdjsjwwbhdhdhdhehsiozkapqpqpjevtvrccrveoqodocyyfgrvwlqodbdvebwidohevwhsodjevehdirurhehhwoshebeowhejfiwhdviehehdishrjejebdjehejr
bit low on updating speed but MC is not cardboard form what i read so far on my phone and the story seams kinda fun but well see if it get picked most lilkly it wont it is missing the KINA is BEST Slogans lol like the quite a few had sadly but i hoppe it get picked upp
I constantly had the impression that it was a story written by a child who does not reread, most things change from chapter to chapter, he gets information without knowing how, one moment he receives an offering outside the city and the next moment all the offerings are automatically sent to his house. In addition the mc does not even know if he is good or bad, a bit like everything in the story, it depends on the chapters.
I am back to redo my review. The story shows great potential in the beginning, but once it begins to go into more details, the concept seemingly derails. The MC in the beginning is adjusting to life in this new world, he's seemingly been there for a month, which explains how he's situated. (I'm going to try to avoid nitpicking) Now, it seems he has been dealing with the array that sends things like books and monsters to him for a short time. And (Spoiler) when he eats the Chaos Wolf eggs, he gets physically strong enough from eating them that the monsters that come out of the array are mincemeat to him. It is explained later on that no one attempts to eat them because eating them can make them crazy. This alludes to either the fact that he IS the Evil God. But it is actually another thing I'll explain in a second. Things aren't that bad here. Weak MC needed power up, magic food is an easy shortcut. Not a horrible jump. Now, the MC, also attempts to read the forbidden spell books. This makes sense, curiosity likely got the better of him. But even then, he should be perhaps a tad suspicious. But it's fine. But then, it turns out, that by simply forcing himself to read it more and more, his 'mental power' can be raised by a lot. This is the other, more likely reason he didn't go crazy. However, this seems to be a flaw in the power system. If one could simply gain so much 'mental power' by this method, why weren't they doing what he did? Also, simply eating the eggs seemed to have given him 'Gold Rank Strength.' This is lazy writing that may bother some readers. And then, when he becomes the adventurer, of course, a situation for the MC to display his newfound power (and slight ruthlessness?) against bandit type of enemies in an escort quest. However, this isn't that bad of situation in my opinion, this NEXT part is why I dropped it. We get little bits and pieces that state that James has been in the world for 2 months, a few years, 4 months, etc. The timing isn't consistent, and his background still isn't explored after 25 or so chapters. certain parts are rushed, and certain parts are spread out too much. To summarize: Has a good start, but rather than ride on the concept that caught the reader's attention, the story steps on that in order to simply give a cheap explanation for an isekai, which is used to simply give a cheaper explanation to avoid giving the MC background. The feel I got from the story, is that the author wrote up certain scenarios, and then tried to string them together.
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The inconsistencies are just 2 much... His level (without us knowing how its being tested btw) suddenly went from silver 3 to 5. The commission reward from 1 plat to 1 silver. The Sacrifical Array gave him smth in the middle of a forest once and now its immovable from the house. Also if there are 3-4 random sacrifices per day and he needs to guard it..what happened to his job??
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please let this book get picked. it's awesome and similar to I really am not the demon king.................................................
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
5 worthless chapters just for wordpadding 5 fukin chapters this story is full of shit mc is retarded author is greedy ad shit great idea shit execution
我真的不是邪恶的神 Raw raw raw rawraw rawrawrawraw,..................................aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassasaaaa
The synopsis was actually really interesting. But after reading more chapters, it gradually became more disappointing. The story suddenly started becoming more cliche, also Mc lacks "Evil God" vibe...
The novel had a lot of potential, unfortunately it was wasted. The novel had a lot of potential, unfortunately it was wasted.The novel had a lot of potential, unfortunately it was wasted.
The sypnosis sounded better than it was. I thought it would be more mature, but 12 chapters into this, of course he receives a female sacrifice. Gross. Webnovel can keep this one.
Okay, so I haven't read this novel yet. Maybe I'll wait until it hits Chapter 60 because I'm worried that Mr. Author might drop it before that. I'm still gonna support this novel because we need more novels in this 'God' genre.
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It's okay but it is not going the way I thought it would, maybe it's that there is not that many chapters yet but no evil God just cultists making sacrifices so far . Not much going on
The story starts with a dark vibe in an apocalyptic world with mad people and monster. Until he gets sent a little girl who's beauty is mentioned more times than i am comfortable with and decides to make her live with him and seems to get more facepalm/comedy/simp/quirky type novel. Could not read after that bc it's not my taste. Disappointed but at least it does not waste you more than 10 chapters before it starts changing direction. Will give an Ok score just for not wasting my time 👍.
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Honestly dont understand all the 5 stars... The MC is an idiot... It's the "funny because he doesnt understand his strength properly" trope which is funny in a skit or when the Main character isnt all there is. (Example of what I mean is one punch man) Mean unless the translation is even worse than I thought (aka evil being the wrong word to use). the fact that something is established as morally evil at the beginning, leaves little hope to a story that hold any weight or tension. The writing isnt just bland with the MC but with descriptions it's almost worse as information about his surroundings isnt make clear right away. Meaning that you have to change the image in your head because suddenly there is something else there. Dear god I jow this is sent to the chinese concentration camps.
I'm NOT Here For The Little Girl They Offered 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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typical___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ meaning ~ just like every novel with the same theme and concept, just normal, nothing new, I notice sometimes the translation is unsatisfactory although can get by.
Spoiler de révélation Can someone recommend me novels similar to martial arts master, flavoured son of heaven or romance of dragons and snakes... martial arts pure fighting 🙏🙏🙏🙏
I don't Understand why people giving this Novel 5 🌟? It feels like this Novel written by a child. Huge disappointed ☹️ I will not recommend this to anyone. waste of Time.
The beginning Chapter is good but later around 20-30+ Chapter. The story becoming more unnecessary world background BS. For example chapt 31. It's just to tell reader how rare alchemist. Chapter 32 tell reader that Elise ( one of heroine maybe) is alchemist. That how BS chapt 31-32 "world background" is. Too many words unnecessary just for fullfill 1 Chapter. I hope author is not doing this because he/she doesn't have any idea and must create of 1 or 2 Chapter per day.
i like it so far, seems decent. not very much details so far and a lot world building as of chapter 19, but it seems like the author is slowly building it up.
It's good hhdhdjsjwwbhdhdhdhehsiozkapqpqpjevtvrccrveoqodocyyfgrvwlqodbdvebwidohevwhsodjevehdirurhehhwoshebeowhejfiwhdviehehdishrjejebdjehejr
bit low on updating speed but MC is not cardboard form what i read so far on my phone and the story seams kinda fun but well see if it get picked most lilkly it wont it is missing the KINA is BEST Slogans lol like the quite a few had sadly but i hoppe it get picked upp
I constantly had the impression that it was a story written by a child who does not reread, most things change from chapter to chapter, he gets information without knowing how, one moment he receives an offering outside the city and the next moment all the offerings are automatically sent to his house. In addition the mc does not even know if he is good or bad, a bit like everything in the story, it depends on the chapters.
I am back to redo my review. The story shows great potential in the beginning, but once it begins to go into more details, the concept seemingly derails. The MC in the beginning is adjusting to life in this new world, he's seemingly been there for a month, which explains how he's situated. (I'm going to try to avoid nitpicking) Now, it seems he has been dealing with the array that sends things like books and monsters to him for a short time. And (Spoiler) when he eats the Chaos Wolf eggs, he gets physically strong enough from eating them that the monsters that come out of the array are mincemeat to him. It is explained later on that no one attempts to eat them because eating them can make them crazy. This alludes to either the fact that he IS the Evil God. But it is actually another thing I'll explain in a second. Things aren't that bad here. Weak MC needed power up, magic food is an easy shortcut. Not a horrible jump. Now, the MC, also attempts to read the forbidden spell books. This makes sense, curiosity likely got the better of him. But even then, he should be perhaps a tad suspicious. But it's fine. But then, it turns out, that by simply forcing himself to read it more and more, his 'mental power' can be raised by a lot. This is the other, more likely reason he didn't go crazy. However, this seems to be a flaw in the power system. If one could simply gain so much 'mental power' by this method, why weren't they doing what he did? Also, simply eating the eggs seemed to have given him 'Gold Rank Strength.' This is lazy writing that may bother some readers. And then, when he becomes the adventurer, of course, a situation for the MC to display his newfound power (and slight ruthlessness?) against bandit type of enemies in an escort quest. However, this isn't that bad of situation in my opinion, this NEXT part is why I dropped it. We get little bits and pieces that state that James has been in the world for 2 months, a few years, 4 months, etc. The timing isn't consistent, and his background still isn't explored after 25 or so chapters. certain parts are rushed, and certain parts are spread out too much. To summarize: Has a good start, but rather than ride on the concept that caught the reader's attention, the story steps on that in order to simply give a cheap explanation for an isekai, which is used to simply give a cheaper explanation to avoid giving the MC background. The feel I got from the story, is that the author wrote up certain scenarios, and then tried to string them together.
huhh.................................................................................., ..........................................,..............
hmmm..._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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The inconsistencies are just 2 much... His level (without us knowing how its being tested btw) suddenly went from silver 3 to 5. The commission reward from 1 plat to 1 silver. The Sacrifical Array gave him smth in the middle of a forest once and now its immovable from the house. Also if there are 3-4 random sacrifices per day and he needs to guard it..what happened to his job??
they better pick this [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
please let this book get picked. it's awesome and similar to I really am not the demon king.................................................
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
5 worthless chapters just for wordpadding 5 fukin chapters this story is full of shit mc is retarded author is greedy ad shit great idea shit execution
我真的不是邪恶的神 Raw raw raw rawraw rawrawrawraw,..................................aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassasaaaa
The synopsis was actually really interesting. But after reading more chapters, it gradually became more disappointing. The story suddenly started becoming more cliche, also Mc lacks "Evil God" vibe...
The novel had a lot of potential, unfortunately it was wasted. The novel had a lot of potential, unfortunately it was wasted.The novel had a lot of potential, unfortunately it was wasted.
The sypnosis sounded better than it was. I thought it would be more mature, but 12 chapters into this, of course he receives a female sacrifice. Gross. Webnovel can keep this one.
Okay, so I haven't read this novel yet. Maybe I'll wait until it hits Chapter 60 because I'm worried that Mr. Author might drop it before that. I'm still gonna support this novel because we need more novels in this 'God' genre.
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It's okay but it is not going the way I thought it would, maybe it's that there is not that many chapters yet but no evil God just cultists making sacrifices so far . Not much going on
The story starts with a dark vibe in an apocalyptic world with mad people and monster. Until he gets sent a little girl who's beauty is mentioned more times than i am comfortable with and decides to make her live with him and seems to get more facepalm/comedy/simp/quirky type novel. Could not read after that bc it's not my taste. Disappointed but at least it does not waste you more than 10 chapters before it starts changing direction. Will give an Ok score just for not wasting my time 👍.
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Honestly dont understand all the 5 stars... The MC is an idiot... It's the "funny because he doesnt understand his strength properly" trope which is funny in a skit or when the Main character isnt all there is. (Example of what I mean is one punch man) Mean unless the translation is even worse than I thought (aka evil being the wrong word to use). the fact that something is established as morally evil at the beginning, leaves little hope to a story that hold any weight or tension. The writing isnt just bland with the MC but with descriptions it's almost worse as information about his surroundings isnt make clear right away. Meaning that you have to change the image in your head because suddenly there is something else there. Dear god I jow this is sent to the chinese concentration camps.
I'm NOT Here For The Little Girl They Offered 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊