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hmm, I enjoyed the first 5 chapters so far, but since there isn't much to review, I'll say this. The story is starting to develop into something enjoyable (i.e. errors, powerful character, you know what I mean), and sure, you released it like 3 days ago, so I understand it's new, but you've done a great job in those few days. :clap:
The story has a good start. I like how it show how human the system is. The only thing I would like to happen is if one day he would just except the name Error and say "Not all errors are unwanted".
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Spoiler de révélation hmm, I enjoyed the first 5 chapters so far, but since there isn't much to review, I'll say this. The story is starting to develop into something enjoyable (i.e. errors, powerful character, you know what I mean), and sure, you released it like 3 days ago, so I understand it's new, but you've done a great job in those few days. :clap:
The story has a good start. I like how it show how human the system is. The only thing I would like to happen is if one day he would just except the name Error and say "Not all errors are unwanted".